Everything is better with Chocolate chapter 1 (mind control, hypnosis, male dominate, nanites, bimbofication)
Part 1 home coming
Disclaimer: all of the character are 18 years old or older at the time of the story.
“It can reverse aging, grow hair, regrow limbs, it can cure cancer, and even fix natural genetic issues. It can even dye your hair and eyes to match your gown as the people of Oz promised Dorothy…” Dr. Steven Marsh TED talk October 2024.
The promises he had made on behalf of his team crashed with reality. They had tested their Nanites on a human test subject. A homeless man. A few minutes after injection he had for lack of a better word popped, painting the test enclosure in a steaming, warm bloody mess. They were on the verge of being shut down.
Steven had theorized, the nanites just got lost in the test subject and had violently exited the body. His solution? a control strain that would guide the other strain.
Steven injected the control strain into himself, laid down, and fell asleep. Hours later he was awoken by a chime on his phone then another and then another in rapid succession.
It was his family’s group chat.
Tracy: It’s Mom’s birthday in 2 weeks
Lisa: He won’t show, he is too busy with his precious work
Mom: please, Steven
Steven thought for a minute. Then it occurred to him. 2 words… test subjects.
Steven: I will be there. I have time off saved. I will even bake the cake
Lisa: if you are going to flake out again, let me know. I will order a nice cake
That snotty, self righteous bitch. Steven thought to himself. He will see her groveling at his feet soon enough.
Steven: baking is like science. Ingredients plus heat plus time
His phone buzzed with approval emojis from his sisters then silence.
He had to plan and bake apparently. Maybe his assistant could bake? He would have to ask.
Two weeks later
Steven drove to his mother’shouse. The cake in the trunk of his SUV. The nanites weren’t hurt by the baking, he knew that because he could hearing their buzzing deep in his head. His creation was ready, he just needed the right test subjects to bring it to life... and hopefully wouldn't pop. Hopefully his guiding the control strain would fix the problem.
As he parked in the driveway, he could hear laughter and music coming from inside. He could use the distraction of the party to perform his test. He was on a tight schedule, he needed results or his team's project would be shut down
He walked into the kitchen and set down the cake on the counter. He was greeted “You made it, Steve!” They all cheered. He had been away a long time.
Steven hugged his mother, she always smelled like strawberries and today was no different. Rachel Harding was five foot four, average build, her shoulder length brown hair had some greying since the last time Steven was home. Stunning in her youth and age had only muted it slightly.
His sister Lisa was setting the table and rolled her eyes at Steven then exited the room in a huff. Lisa was Steven’s twin. Five foot eight inches. Long brown hair put up in a messy bun. It looked like she had put on a little weight since the last time he saw her. Good more fuel for the nanites.
Last was Tracy. Tracy hugged Steven with a warm smile. Tracy was an intelligent, happy, African American woman. She was five foot six inches with her hair in braids and dreadlocks. She had grown up since the last time Steven had seen her. “I was afraid Lisa would have scared you off again” Tracy whispered trying not to bring the ire of Lisa. “I wouldn’t miss Mom’s birthday for anything. I told you I was coming and here I am.” Steven whispered back to his sister. “I saw you bring in the cake. It looks awesome” Tracy smiled.
The family sat down for dinner. They ate, told stories of the past, and everyone told stories of the present to catch Steven up. Then it was time of the cake. The cake was Chocolate. 3 layers. Rich black forest chocolate frosting with chocolate ganoche piping. It smelled like rich fudge with a hint of cinnamon. It looked like it shimmered. Steven and Lisa carried it to the table while Happy birthday was sung. Rachel beemed as she blew out the candles. Then the family ate in silence.
“So fucking good!” Tracy exclaimed and everyone laughed even Lisa. After everyone had their fill, they retired to the living room to watch a movie together.
In Steven’s head her could hear the buzzing not only from the half cake in the kitchen but now from his family.
The nanites were at work.
The movie began and Steven’s mother and sisters started to nod off. One by one they fell asleep.
Steven stood up, then calmly said “Rise, Activate, Enhance, Obey”
Rachel:
Steven would start with her. It was her birthday after all. He could see her body quivering like the others as the naniteX courses through their systems. He watched as the wrinkles and lines on her face and faded. The grey hairs soon regained their natural dark brown color.
The naniteX used the body's own fat as building material. Soon Rachel's was no longer a mom bod it was a pinnacle body of a 25 year old.
Steven decided he really needed to put the naniteX through it's passes. Rachel's hair paled and became platinum blonde, then it shortened to chin length, bangs, and a close trim at the back.
"Stand" Steven said calmly as he sat in the comfy arm chair. Rachel stood, the voice in her head told her to, and she must obey the voice. When she stood her jeans and panties fell around her ankles,The naniteX had used enough of her body fat to drop her 2 sizes. Steven watched happily as her dark bush soon matched her platinum hair then the full bush became a laser trimmed landing strip.
"Take off your sweater and bra" Steven said, he could have just thought the commands but it seemed more fun this way. She did as the voice in her head told her. Her breasts were no longer saggy, the birth of twins and age now forgotten. Her body was red and slightly steamed as the naniteX released the construction heat from her pours.
"Who am I?" Steven tested "S...Steve... Steven" she murmured "Who are you?" He asked "R... Ray... um... Rachel" she murmured as the voice in her head corrected her
"What's that on your finger?" Steven asked. "My... wedding ring. It's the only I have left from ... him" Rachel tried to find his name, he was important to her but as she tried to remember anything it faded. "Can I see it?" Steven asked putting out his hand. Rachel had no choice to obey so she did. As the ring slipped off her finger she had no memory of it or the person who gave it to her.
Steven felt the ring in his palm, it's weight, but this was a test so he had to see if his edits on her worked.
"Rachel, my sweet. I got you a present." He said then slipped the ring on her finger. "This ring binds you to me. It is a symbol of your love and devotion to me." Rachel looked at the ring, she belonged to him, her master and she felt pride and loved.
Steven felt slightly guilty it was his mother or at least she was his mother before, no just a product test. He had given her a gift, he had taken her depression and the memories that made her depressed. He loved her but now he desired a her as a fresh new person. He wanted to test how far the naniteX could edit her agency.
Lisa:
Lisa was Steven's twin. She is 5 foot 8 inches with blue eyes and long dark brown hair. A combination of her mother's beauty and her grandmother's hight.
The intelligent, beautiful woman had left her promising law practice to become a caregiver to her grieving mother and younger adopted sister when their father died. She blamed Steven for not returning home. She had sacrificed everything for her family and he gave nothing. She would never forgive him.
Lisa howled as she put her hands at her forehead. Her skin turned red and steam released from her pours. Lisa didnt have a lot of fat for the nanites to work with. Any stress wrinkles and crow's feet at her face disappeared. Her skin became toned and tan. Her hair shined with renewed luster. She looked 25 and slightly better than in her prime, enhanced.
"your name is Lisa in case you were wondering. I am Steven your creator and master. You belong to me. You will obey my every word without question. Obeying me every wish and desires like they were your own. You love me and you obey out of that love." Steven said with a smile.
Lisa stood in silence thinking. Everything he said sounded like the truth. She did love him deeply, the voice in her head instructed her. She desired to make him happy. He looked familiar but she just met him. He said he just made her maybe that's why she knew him. She sighed then smiled "yes master." She said with reverence.
Tracy:
unbeknownst to anyone in her family, Tracy desired change the most. Never fitting in and always the outsider. Tracy loved her family and especially her mom but she was adopted and she knew she was not of her mother's blood. Outside of the house the white community to which she grew up in saw her as the black girl. To the African American community she was never black enough, a charity case for some white family.
So when the buzzing in her head promised a place to belong, to be one, she grabbed and held it with everything she had. She skin paled from a rich chocolate to a smooth coffee. All the hair on her body turned from black to blonde in seconds. Her chin length hair grew past her shoulders. Her breasts swelled under her comfortable hoodie. Her legs and arms toned. Tracy was 20 years old so the nanites didn't adjust her age, it had enhanced her into an Amazon, a perfect specimen.
"Who am I?" Steven asked. Tracy looked at the handsome man but his name would not present itself in her memories. She shook her head.
"Your name is Tracy. I am Steven your creator, your master. I just made you minutes ago. You belong to me. I love you as I do with all my creations. You love me deeply, want to please me in anyway I desire. You will obey my every word like it was your idea." Steven said with a smile.
Tracy instantly felt loved with a sense of belonging it felt good. "Master... yes Master" she said as if Master was his given name.
Steve looked at his new puppets with pride. It worked they were remade to his specifications. He had them strip then stand at attention. They did as he instructed. He walked around each of his dolls beaming with pride. He looked in their eyes, Ran his hand through their hair, cupped a breast, squeezed an ass cheek, and ran a finger along their pussy lips. "Perfection" he said to himself with a smile.
The strain of the control stain nanites in his own body guiding the changes in the others caused Steven to be exhausted. He soon fell asleep back in the comfy chair in the living room. The three dolls slumped to the ground also exhausted from their change and slept on the carpet.
Epilogue:
Somewhere in the living room, in Rachel's pants her phone buzzed with a call, the buzzed again, then buzzed a third time.
Then a text "did you forget our drink? Or are you guys still partying?"
The text was from Rachel's best friend Nancy and they were supposed to go for a birthday drink after the party. Rachel hadn't showed up.
End. Part 1
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