SUSAN STORM - IN THE RUSH OF THE DEEP PART II

(Note One: All characters belong to Marvel Publishing. This is merely fanfiction with no commercial interest and is intended solely for the entertainment of the fan/reader. Note Two: English is not my native language, so please forgive any errors and idiosyncratic spelling. Anyone who would like to improve the story into "correct and more readable English" is welcome to help me. I hope you enjoy reading.)

"Susan?" asked Reed, unable to believe what he saw.

His beloved wife, Susan, the mother of his two children, stood stark naked before her enemy, the Sub-Mariner, snuggled up to his powerful, black body, lay in his arms, and kissed him. Not only that, her entire body had changed. Blue skin, pointed ears, black eyes, and gills. His gaze shifted back and forth between the couple and the destroyed transformation chamber.

"Susan... what are you doing..." he stammered, stumbling toward her.

"Don't touch her, surface dweller!"

Namor yelled at him. The Atlantean king pushed her aside.

"She's mine now." Reed was too stunned and shocked to respond.

"Namor..."

Susan breathed. Her voice was still the same, and she looked up at him.

"...I... I can't breathe..."

She grabbed her throat and gasped for air.

"You are now a woman of Atlantean. You need water," Namor said.

Immediately, he picked her up and flew with her through the tall, narrow skylight. Shards of glass rained down with a clang. Reed wanted to follow them, to stretch out as far as he could, but he stopped when he saw Susan's wedding ring lying among the shards...

Namor raced through the night at rocket speed, increasing his pace even more as Sue gasped for air. Her body trembled more and more violently in his arms. Namor had never flown so determinedly and quickly in his life. The lights and skyline of New York were just a blur, rushing past, and then he finally smelled his home. The sea. With the crack of an explosion, he entered the water and reluctantly released the woman in his arms. She thrashed and flailed helplessly, spinning around several times, and cramps shook her body until she slowly calmed down. Then Sue floated in the water, looking around with wide, ecstatic eyes.

"I can breathe," she whispered.

It was an indescribable feeling for the woman, even for her, who had experienced so much in her life, what it was like to be able to breathe and see underwater without any problems. It was as if she had been torn from another world and reborn into another.

Excited, she shot off like an arrow, swimming in circles, doing loops, and performing veritable pirouettes. She beamed and laughed with delight like a child on Christmas morning. She had always loved the sea. Namor watched all this with a calm smile until enough time had passed and he swam to Sue. He grabbed her hand.

"Come!" he commanded.

"What?"

He pulled Sue to a lower reef, pushed her so that she fell onto it on her back, and immediately bent down and pressed his lips to hers. Sue was too shocked and perplexed to return the kiss.

"Wait..." she breathed.

Namor's one hand explored her blue body, and the other reached under Sue's head, lifted it a little higher, and kissed her again.

“…we don’t want to wait until Atlantis…”

Namor grasped her breast, twisted her nipple, and Sue cried out briefly in pain, as the king took the opportunity to push his tongue into her mouth.

A wild French kiss followed, which aroused the woman incredibly and finally broke her resistance. They had both waited for this moment for far too long, and every second that passed was unnecessary. Each wanted the other, right here and now. Namor's hand continued to vigorously work on her breast, which pleased her. Her sensations and nerves were turned up to their maximum, and she couldn't tell if it was because of her new body or the situation. She willingly returned his wild tongue strokes.

The King of Atlantis was a very good kisser, and Sue enjoyed it very much, especially his rough manner. With her eyes closed, she enjoyed his caresses while the man kissed her neck, then sucked on one of her nipples and nibbled lightly on it. Sue arched her back with pleasure and thrust her breasts toward him. Namor sensed her devotion and cupped both breasts, while his tongue slowly slid down her blue belly, over her belly button, and down to her pubic area.

He then grasped Sue's hips with both hands and lifted her slightly so he could run his tongue over her slit. Moaning, Sue dug her hands into his black hair and worked on the woman until she was ready for him.

In that short time, he had already skillfully pulled down his short, green pants, and Sue could already feel his mighty glans plowing demandingly through her labia. Again, the Atlantean kissed the woman passionately, while his glans penetrated her firmly, dominantly, and inexorably. Namor briefly withdrew his penis slightly, then powerfully penetrated Sue even deeper. He repeated this several times until he was finally completely inside her, and she let out an excited gasp. Now Namor thrust wildly and hard into Sue, and she felt the wave of orgasm rising like a tsunami.

She screamed with pleasure as a school of fish swam past them and the moonlight glittered on the surface of the water above them. Namor then placed her legs over his shoulders, lifting her pelvis and thrusting even deeper into Sue. He penetrated her hard and fast, and the orgasm caught her off guard. The woman convulsed and screamed with excitement, practically exploding. Even as her orgasm subsided, she felt Namor also come, pumping his semen deep inside her. They lay on top of each other, panting, for a few minutes, then Namor rolled off Sue and lay on his back next to her.

"That was good," he whispered, her body still trembling.

He looked at her and smiled.

"As my wife, I expect you to grow your hair long," he said, already standing up.

Sue didn't know what to say or respond to that, so she just nodded. Namor offered her his hand and helped her to her feet. Her legs were still very weak.

"Come, I want to introduce my people to their queen," he said, and they swam hand in hand toward Atlantis.

An indescribable joy accompanied Sue, although she was also a little surprised and shocked by Namor's rough, unruly manner. She had expected more patience and self-control from the King of Atlantis, but she should have known better. Namor was a **** of nature, and Susan knew she would have difficulty controlling this storm.

Meanwhile, the ruler of Latveria went into his extensive library. He ignored all the thick tomes on magic and science and went straight to the chess set he had made by the fireplace. He had carved every single piece by his own hands, and all the pawns, right down to the king, were modeled after the heroes and villains of this Earth. Of course, he had had to adapt some things.

On the Latverian side, there was no queen yet, but the king had a second king at his side, who took the queen's position. It was Namor. The man in iron armor with the green cloak moved the piece straight ahead to the black square where the white queen stood. It was Susan Storm Richards.

The second black king struck the white queen, the piece toppled to the side, and now the white king, Reed Richards, was in danger. With a smile, the ruler added: "Check."

The people of Atlantean were surprised by their new queen, and at first, the inhabitants didn't know how to deal with it. First, Namor had rejected all the candidates, then he came along with a transformed surface dweller. In addition, she was also one of the enemies of the kingdom.

But soon the men and women of Atlantis realized that Namor, the ruler of the seas, had once again triumphed over his enemies and that he now had a powerful ally at his side.

Even though some were still skeptical and doubtful, Susan quickly adapted to her new life, even though so many things were different, strange, and unfamiliar to her. Not only did Namor insist that she wear her hair longer in the future, but her wardrobe was already stocked with very revealing, skimpy dresses.

Sue learned that this was typical fashion in Atlantis and wanted to adapt as queen. Many men and women also lived completely naked, which was a bit too daring for the surface dweller. She still couldn't completely shake off her old existence, as much as it annoyed Namor, but Sue quickly adapted to her new husband in many other ways...

...and in a short time, Susan Storm was officially the wife of Namor McKenzie and Queen of Atlantis.

All the other kingdoms from the Sea Realm came to the wedding, and the news surfaced. It had been Susan and Namor's happiest day ever, but it was interrupted when Doctor Doom appeared to congratulate the couple. Sue wanted to attack her former archenemy immediately, but her new husband rebuffed her, demanding obedience from her husband and respect for their guest.

The woman was shocked by her husband's behavior, especially when she saw Namor shake the metal hand and Doom congratulate the newlyweds. It took all her self-control when the ruler of Latveria took her hand, kissed her palm, and wished her luck. Before he left, he turned once more to the King of Atlantean.

"You remember our agreement."

"Of course. The country of Latveria can count on Atlantean support."

The newlyweds spent the rest of the ceremony in silence. Until late in the evening, and only when they were alone in the bedroom, did Sue confront her husband.

"What does this mean?" Namor didn't answer her, but began to remove his wedding robes.

"You're working with Doom?"

Sue wanted to know.

"Latveria is an important trading partner and ally of Atlantis. As queen, you should know your ally." "Ally? It's Victor von Doom. The archenemy of the Fantastic Four. How could you..."

Sue froze, her black eyes widening in shock and realization.

"You knew about the Transfiguration Chamber because Victor told you about it."

Again, Namor said nothing, but his reaction betrayed him. He paused briefly and then placed the green robe in the closet.

"Yes, he told me about it," Namor said coolly, closing the closet.

Sue's eyes darted back and forth, she ran trembling hands through her hair, and she felt like she couldn't breathe.

"It was all planned by Victor... your affection for me... the Chamber..."

"No," Namor snarled at her, stepping in front of her.

Again, he stood up to his full height before her, but his flexing muscles and threatening posture didn't impress Sue at all at the moment.

"Victor helped me realize my deepest desire. It was his idea that you were more receptive to my advances after your encounter with Galactus, and yes, he had told me about the Chamber... but the choice to become Susan Storm, my, MY, wife, was something YOU ALONE made. It was YOUR decision."

"My decision? I was agitated, unsure, I... oh God."

Sue looked at her blue hands. She had transformed for him, and there was no taking it back.

"I left the team and my husband for you. My children..."

Namor pulled her to him. Their bodies touched, and Sue could feel his heartbeat as clearly as hers. He looked into her eyes, and his black pupils glowed with burning lust.

"You wanted it, Susan Storm. You wanted it with every fiber of your body, your heart, and your soul. You wanted to be by my side."

"Namor..."

"And don't think about your former life anymore, woman. Think about your people, your king, and our children."

"Children?"

Namor pressed his lips to Sue's, but it wasn't like the first time. The shock was too deep for that. She writhed under his grip and increased her resistance the harder he kissed her. She managed to push the Sub-Mariner away a little and looked into his eyes again. A change had come over her husband. He looked at her with different eyes. They were still the same eyes and gaze as when she had stepped out of the chamber, but something had changed. His black pupils glittered friendly, yet at the same time they were stern and brooked no argument.

It was still King Namor, the man she loved. Susan gasped uncertainly, about to say something, but a harsh nod of his head silenced her, and the next kiss reminded her why she had fallen in love with him.

Very quickly, Namor removed her clothes, and when Sue stood naked before him, he grabbed her shoulder, turned her around, and pushed her onto the large bed of shells. Sue caught herself with her hands, and immediately the King of Atlantis took up position behind the woman.

"Who are you?" he asked.

"What?"

He slapped her bottom. Not hard, but hard enough to make Sue flinch.

"I'm Susan MckKenzie..."

Another slap. She flinched again, and Sue had to admit she liked it.

"I am the Queen of..."

A third slap, and this time really hard.

"I am your wife."

Namor liked the answer, and he pushed his penis inside her. Sue gasped in astonishment, holding her breath as the ruler of the seas began to move, slowly, then faster and faster. Susan moaned and surrendered to his usual powerful and energetic thrusts, but this time they were different. Much more animalistic and unbridled than usual, and each of his thrusts briefly took her breath away.

"Who am I?"

Namor growled. It took a few seconds for Sue to answer.

"You are Namor..."

A slap on the bottom.

"The Sub-Mariner..."

A hard smack.

"You are the king of Atlantis."

"No. I am more than that."

With dominant and powerful thrusts, he thrust into her, panting, and even for him, this pace was exhausting and almost impossible to maintain.

"Who am I?" he repeated.

"You are my king," Sue moaned.

Namor grabbed Susan's hair and pulled her head back. She cried out briefly, more in shock, but then in pleasure.

"Your husband, your king, and the father of your children. Do you like that?"

Susan wasn't sure what he meant. The fantastic fuck or his plans for their future together. Before she could answer, he picked up the pace and took her even harder. Susan wanted to say something, but the thrusts kept interrupting her, and her words were drowned out by her moans. Namor grew impatient.

"Do you like that?" he demanded again, thrusting with a less than gentle, demanding dominance. "Yes," she breathed barely audibly.

"What?"

"YES. OH GOD NAMOR YES!" Susan screamed, her voice almost breaking.

Almost as if on cue, Namor thrust one last time, letting out an animalistic primal scream as he released himself into his lover. He kept his body still and tense so he could savor every second, and Susan, too, pressed her lower body against him, motionless, so he could pump his seed into her without any problems. With greed and She looked up at him in admiration over her shoulder, and a passionate kiss followed...

Very quickly, Susan became pregnant by her husband, and the kingdom rejoiced at the news of an heir to Atlantis...

Of course, Namor's firstborn was a boy, whom he named Leonard, after his father. When he visited Sue in the bedroom with his son, he grinned and said that the boy was perfect and that many would soon follow him. Sue was somewhat surprised by the news, and even more so when she learned from Namor that the Atlanteans had at least four or five children at a minimum...

And as king, he and his queen had to set standards in the future...

Sue soon learned what it meant to be Namor's wife, the mother of their son, and the queen of Atlantis. Responsibility to the people, mediating between the peoples, fighting monsters and enemies...

... and yet Namor always found time to spend the evenings with his wife...

... they loved each other deeply and were often dominated by their lust and desire for each other... ... although it sometimes seemed to Susan that, as queen, she spent more time in their shared bedroom and was ruled by her husband there than they together ruled the kingdom...

... but dark clouds were gathering on the horizon. Pollution soon reached Atlantis. The seas became almost uninhabitable, and the king saw no other way. He allied himself with Doctor Doom, and together they flooded New York.

The X-Men, the Avengers, and even the Fantastic Four (now with She-Hulk, Johnny Storm's girlfriend) could not stop the armies of both countries. The heroes were defeated, especially with the help of the Queen of Atlantis, Susan MckKenzie, and soon New York became New Atlantis.

The people had to either flee or submit. Namor had created a new home for his people and his family, his wife Susan, and their children Leonard, Mary, Johnny, and Namorita. Susan Storm had once traveled the stars, but no one could have foreseen the direction her destiny would take and what it would mean for all of humanity.

Susan Storm had long since ceased to be the Invisible One of the Fantastic Four. Not even when she destroyed the Baxter Building.

She was now Susan McKenzie, Namor's loyal wife, mother of his many children, destroyer of the Fantastic Four, and now Queen of New Atlantis...