Chapters tagged comeuppance

Ostentatious and Wealthy Apparel → Cheap and Whoring Apparel by Ai-R

Chapter 38

...I decide to downgrade her outfit directly while clarifying her purpose by exchanging 'ostentatious and wealthy apparel' for '**cheap and whoring apparel.**' Lilian's hair is cut short to chin-length. Where before it stylistically fell to her shoulders, it's now a loose bob. T...

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Ostentatious and Wealthy Apparel → Humble Maid Apparel by Ai-R

Chapter 36

My fury isn't tempered yet, but with the weight of my first move I feel satisfied enough to start focusing on making Lilian actually useful for something now that I've shattered the core of her ego. First up, I target her 'ostentatious and wealthy clothes' - something she surely...

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Wry and Callous Grin → Submissive and Devoted Smile by Ai-R

Chapter 37

...and wipe that annoying smirk off Lilian's face by swapping her 'wry and callous grin' with a '_**submissive and devoted smile.'**_ Why not get a start on fixing that awful personality, after all, while making her a better -maid at the same time? The walls lose all of the...

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Exit: Building a Bridge by Ai-R

Chapter 38

\[ AN: This was... hard to write. Striking a balance between James' headspace, Lilian taking demonstrating her ego without seizing initiative, and trying to anchor it all in the physicality of the scene. Did I juggle it well? Was there enough payoff? I ended it where I did becaus...

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Stuck-Up and Arrogant → Calm and Gentle by Ai-R

Chapter 37

...and consider how to make Lilian better suited for her new life. A few options go through my head: making her more submissive and therefore obedient, or just making her hornier and perverse to turn her into 'that' kind of maid. But for now, I feel something a bit subtler is in...

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Noblewoman → Barely-Adult Noble Heir by Ai-R

Chapter 35

Hm. Well, if she's going to act so immature I might as well give her an excuse. With a thought, I tweak 'Noblewoman' and change it to '_**Barely-Adult Noble Heir,**_' stripping away some years of experience from her as well as some level of status, given - as an heir - she should...

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Stuck-Up and Arrogant → Bratty by Ai-R

Chapter 36

...I hit her attitude, and change that to pigeonhole her even further into the role I'm fashioning by exchanging 'stuck-up and arrogant' for '**_bratty_.**' Lilian's earrings vanish and she sleeves of her dress retract until they stop just over her elbows, leaving her shoulders...

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Stuck-Up and Arrogant → Naively Wants (James) to Impregnate Her by Ai-R

Chapter 36

...I think I'll give her a reason to be here other than... whatever the hell she was trying to accomplish by lambasting the mother of my children along with pretty much the rest of the kingdom. So, I target 'Stuck-Up and Arrogant' - because she clearly has too much of both to go...

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Slender Elegant Body → Busty Body by Ai-R

Chapter 35

First up, I guess, is the feature that Lilian scorned the most: the womanly curves those afflicted by the curse tend to possess. She seems quite proud to be properly thin and slender and so forth so... Let's take that away. I exchange 'slender elegant body' for '_** busty...

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Noblewoman → Pregnant Mistress by Ai-R

Chapter 36

...she also said a fair bit about the women whoring themselves out and acting 'like broodmares.' And while she was tactful enough not to specifically call either of the royals by such a term, her thoughts were pretty clear on the subject so: how about she joins them? I replace 'N...

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