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Stuck-Up and Arrogant → Bratty
...I hit her attitude, and change that to pigeonhole her even further into the role I'm fashioning by exchanging 'stuck-up and arrogant' for 'bratty.'
Lilian's earrings vanish and she sleeves of her dress retract until they stop just over her elbows, leaving her shoulders and collarbone entirely bare except for the ruffled choker, which remains virtually unchanged. Then the intricate floral patterns are traded for plain black cloth and the various buttons and glimmering embroidery of her dress also vanishes. As a result, while it still has ruffled edges and a fancy central brooch, the overall outfit is much simpler and less extravagant.
A relatively straightforward result, although I think it's funny how little her expression changed. Next...
(barely-adult noble heir, direct angle, austere blonde hair, bratty, slender elegant build, wry and callous grin, standing straight, arms crossed, ostentatious and wealthy apparel, posh castle bedroom)
[Tracker: Noble Heir x1.2, Bratty x1.1, Baseline Lilian x0.8]
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