Chapters tagged comeuppance

by Ai-R

Chapter 38

...I decide to downgrade her outfit directly while clarifying her purpose by exchanging 'ostentatious and wealthy apparel' for '**cheap and whoring apparel.**' Lilian's hair is cut short to chin-length. Where before it stylistically fell to her shoulders, it's now a loose bob. T...

by Ai-R

Chapter 36

My fury isn't tempered yet, but with the weight of my first move I feel satisfied enough to start focusing on making Lilian actually useful for something now that I've shattered the core of her ego. First up, I target her 'ostentatious and wealthy clothes' - something she surely...

by Ai-R

Chapter 37

...and wipe that annoying smirk off Lilian's face by swapping her 'wry and callous grin' with a '_**submissive and devoted smile.'**_ Why not get a start on fixing that awful personality, after all, while making her a better -maid at the same time? The walls lose all of the...

by Ai-R

Chapter 38

\[ AN: This was... hard to write. Striking a balance between James' headspace, Lilian taking demonstrating her ego without seizing initiative, and trying to anchor it all in the physicality of the scene. Did I juggle it well? Was there enough payoff? I ended it where I did becaus...

by Ai-R

Chapter 37

...and consider how to make Lilian better suited for her new life. A few options go through my head: making her more submissive and therefore obedient, or just making her hornier and perverse to turn her into 'that' kind of maid. But for now, I feel something a bit subtler is in...

by Ai-R

Chapter 35

Hm. Well, if she's going to act so immature I might as well give her an excuse. With a thought, I tweak 'Noblewoman' and change it to '_**Barely-Adult Noble Heir,**_' stripping away some years of experience from her as well as some level of status, given - as an heir - she should...

by Ai-R

Chapter 36

...I hit her attitude, and change that to pigeonhole her even further into the role I'm fashioning by exchanging 'stuck-up and arrogant' for '**_bratty_.**' Lilian's earrings vanish and she sleeves of her dress retract until they stop just over her elbows, leaving her shoulders...

by Ai-R

Chapter 36

...I think I'll give her a reason to be here other than... whatever the hell she was trying to accomplish by lambasting the mother of my children along with pretty much the rest of the kingdom. So, I target 'Stuck-Up and Arrogant' - because she clearly has too much of both to go...

by Ai-R

Chapter 35

First up, I guess, is the feature that Lilian scorned the most: the womanly curves those afflicted by the curse tend to possess. She seems quite proud to be properly thin and slender and so forth so... Let's take that away. I exchange 'slender elegant body' for '_** busty...

by Ai-R

Chapter 36

...she also said a fair bit about the women whoring themselves out and acting 'like broodmares.' And while she was tactful enough not to specifically call either of the royals by such a term, her thoughts were pretty clear on the subject so: how about she joins them? I replace 'N...

by Ai-R

Chapter 37

...I think I don't like how it seems almost like she's 'won,' to her. So I want to make things clear. Really establish her place in the pecking order. And why not fix that 'Stuck-Up and Arrogant' personality of hers while I'm at it, by replacing it with '_**Devoted Breeding Bitch...

by Ai-R

Chapter 37

I'm curious, so I try just... prompting the Prompt to make a change that's 'on theme.' It's a decision I quickly have mixed feelings about as it changes Lilian's 'ostentatious and wealthy apparel' into a 'dominatrix outfit.' Lilian's collar parts and turns leather (along with th...