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Chapter 8
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Zeebop
What is Sue Storm's answer?
Sue Storm Hesitates; Dr. Stone Has To Use Her Powers
The blonde heroine hesitated. Moonstone could read it in her eyes. The desire was there, but the idea of a quick path to power or fulfillment went against her grain. Sue Storm was the kind of goody-goody that told kids not to do ****, to put off having sex, the work hard and study to get what they wanted in life. She believed it, too. Those inhibitions were holding her back.
Dr. Stone stepped behind Sue, so that the Invisible Woman couldn't see the glow of Karla's eyes as she used her powers, pushing a gravimetric wave through the other woman's brain.
"It's your choice, Sue," Dr. Stone said. "But think about it. No matter how much exercise you do, getting the body you want—that you deserve—requires more than just a thousand squats. A little performance enhancement isn't wrong. Captain America had his super-soldier serum, She-Hulk had her gamma radiation, Captain Marvel her overlay of Kree genetics—how is this any different? Because in this case, it isn't an accident or an experiment. It's a tried and proven process. You just have to make the choice to embrace the science."
The arguments wouldn't have convinced Sue normally. They weren't meant to. They were a cover to guide the heroine's thoughts, to stir her desires, to provide a rationale for what Sue Storm wanted, deep down, to do already. Without her inhibitions, Sue was as pliable as a tequila'd-up frat girl on Spring Break.
"Just think of the end result," Dr. Stone said. "The muscles. The definition. How strong and confident you'll be. No more soft MILF. No more being the wink link in the team. Imagine how Reed will react when he sees his big, strong, beautiful wife—"
Vanity. Sexual desires. Subliminated feelings of inadequacy. All the building blocks of a bad decision, carefully appealed to. The Asian woman couldn't hear, she was aware of the whispering, but her head was down, staring at her computer screen. Waiting for Sue Storm to make a decision.
"Alright," Sue Storm said aloud. "I'll do it. I'll take the Power Broker treatment."
"Excellent," the Asian woman said. "Please disrobe and step into the ignition chamber. We're going to pump you up!"
As Sue Storm carefully took off her clothes, Dr. Stone kept her head down, trying to keep her glowing eyes out of sight. She could feel the implants buzz in her skull maddeningly, but she needed to keep Sue's inhibitions down until she was actually inside the chamber. Past the point of no return.
How effective is the Power Broker treatment?
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DOOMED
Susan Storm is Doomed...She Just Doesn't Know It Yet
Doctor Doom has decided to break up the Fantastic Four by targeting Sue Storm, the Invisible Woman. Yet Reed Richards knows too well the strategies that Doom would try. So Doom decides to enlist a partner to aid him in the downfall of the Invisible Woman...by whatever means necessary!
Updated on Jun 10, 2026
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