Will he use their own Law to change them?
Well yes
Winston let his gaze rest on them for another moment. Then, almost despite himself, he smiled.
“So you love your laws that much.”
Penthascara’s brow tightened. Something in his tone had reached her before the meaning did.
Winston sat straighter against the pallet. “Then listen carefully. You have spent this entire conversation telling me what being your king means. Divine right outranks preference. Honour binds you even when you dislike what it demands. A law may impose a cost and still remain law because you believe something greater stands behind it.”
Aurascyra’s fingers stopped moving along the shaft of her spear.
For one last moment, Winston could have left it there. Another observation. Another uncomfortable point for them to argue over.
Instead, he heard himself continue. “Then I am changing something.” The silence inside the tent seemed to deepen.
Penthascara raised her chin. Helisparga’s calm attention sharpened, while Xanthibarqa became so still that Winston could see the faint rise and fall of her breathing.
“As your king, I give you a new law.” His pulse had begun to beat harder, although his voice remained level. “You will no longer judge me by what other men have done.”
A slight crease appeared between Penthascara’s brows.
Winston kept his eyes on her. “When you look at me, you will see me. Not Man’s World standing behind me. Not every king who abused his throne. Not every man your mothers taught you to fear. Me.”
Penthascara’s lips parted. “My king, that is not...” She stopped, the interruption neither sharp nor dramatic; her voice simply failed to complete the thought.
For a second she seemed equally confused. The objection had plainly existed when she began speaking. He had heard it. She had felt it. Yet whatever certainty had carried it toward her tongue no longer seemed able to finish the journey.
Her jaw tightened, and Winston felt something move through him that was neither relief nor fear. He had known the command would work; Hippolyta should have made that impossible to doubt. Yet watching Penthascara lose hold of an objection while looking directly at him made the knowledge feel different.
Knowing was different from watching Penthascara lose hold of an objection while looking directly at him.
He could stop.
The command had already done what he had spent the morning arguing for. It had severed him from the category she had used to judge him. If that was truly all he wanted, there was nothing more to say.
Watching Penthascara, Aurascyra tightened her fingers around the spear, her unease plain in the gesture.
“And your duty to me will no longer stop at obedience,” Winston said.
Aurascyra looked back at him, and Winston knew at once that the sentence felt different.
Still, he continued, “you will trust me. Not merely because honour tells you that your king must be obeyed, but personally. You will not stand beside me carrying out every command while privately waiting for me to prove myself the thing you feared.”
Drawing a slow breath, Aurascyra’s spear shifted beneath her hand. For an instant, her guarded expression remained exactly as it had been. Then something in it faltered.
Her eyes narrowed at Winston as though she were trying to recover the reason for the suspicion she had carried so easily only moments before. Nothing had vanished from her memory. Winston could tell that much. She remembered everything she had said about Man’s World. She remembered every reason she had given him.
They simply no longer seemed to lead inevitably to him, and as her grip loosened, Winston noticed the change with a satisfaction that came before he could stop it.
It was small, no more than a tightening beneath his ribs, but unmistakable. He had disliked the way she watched him as though corruption were something he might reveal if she stared long enough.
Now she did not. Hippolyta’s hand remained against his shoulder. That should have been enough.
Winston glanced toward her, and for a moment the memory of what he had done before returned with unpleasant clarity.
He had once commanded love and adoration with full awareness of what he was doing, but he told himself this was different: he was confronting the prejudice of women who had sworn absolute loyalty to him while still judging him by the actions of men they had never met.
That was different, or at least Winston told himself it was, until Helisparga looked at him with the same composed, thoughtful patience she had shown throughout the conversation. In that moment, he realized he wanted more than trust. The realization came before the justification, and he disliked what it revealed about him, though not enough to stop.
“You will care what happens to me,” he said.
Helisparga’s expression changed by almost nothing.
Winston went on, choosing each word more slowly now. “My wellbeing will not matter to you only because the throne requires protecting. My happiness will matter because it is mine. My company will not be something you endure because honour placed you near me. You will want closeness where before you chose distance.”
Helisparga closed her eyes only briefly, releasing a measured breath before opening them again, and Winston had the unsettling impression that she was watching the change from inside herself.
The intelligence in her face had not diminished; if anything, her concentration had deepened as she remembered her caution and seemed to reconsider what it meant.
Where distance had once appeared prudent, it now seemed regrettable. Where suspicion had looked like wisdom, it had begun to resemble something she had allowed to stand unnecessarily between herself and someone increasingly important to her.
Helisparga understood what was happening, which was somehow worse than if she had looked dazed.
Swallowing Winston, knew he had already crossed the boundary of his own argument. Removing their prejudice had not required this, nor had demanding that they judge him as an individual required care, closeness, or personal attachment. He could still stop before taking the next step.
His gaze found Penthascara again, and he could see that she was fighting to preserve something within herself. Her chin remained raised, but the gesture had lost its effortless certainty, while the tension in her jaw betrayed the strain beneath her composure. Her eyes held his with an intensity that might once have been contempt, though that contempt was already becoming difficult for her to sustain.
Winston remembered her saying that his innocence did not matter, remembered the cold certainty with which she had told him he was different only because he was king, and wanted that gone.
Not merely the self-righteousness behind it, but the distance between them as well. That realization should have embarrassed him more than it did.
Instead, Winston heard himself say, “And you will love me.” The words were quieter than everything that had come before them, yet they struck harder, leaving the tent utterly still as no one moved.
Even Winston seemed to hear the enormity of what he had said only after the sentence was already in the room.
Penthascara’s expression fractured as something broke in its alignment, though it did not soften, not yet.
The resistance remained visible, but it no longer knew where to settle. She had spent the morning defending the right of law to demand what personal preference would never willingly give. Now the same principle had turned inward, and some part of her seemed to recognize the irony even as another part struggled against its consequence.
Winston could have stopped there.
Instead, having said the worst part, everything after it came more easily. “You will love me as the man before you, not as an obligation attached to a crown," he listed. "Your loyalty will be personal. Your affection will be real to you. You will regard yourselves not merely as soldiers and subjects, but as my companions and consorts. You will hold me close in your hearts with the same certainty with which you have always held law, honour, and Themyscira itself.”
Aurascyra’s breath caught, Xanthibarqa blinked, Helisparga watched him without looking away, and Penthascara did not move at all.
Winston heard his own pulse in the silence. He had meant, at first, to change the direction of their judgment, but somewhere between trust and devotion, he had asked for more.
“This is not a request,” he said, and the words sounded different now that he understood what he had actually done. “You told me yourselves that a law does not cease to be law because those carrying its cost would have chosen differently.”
His attention travelled across them as he said, “Then this is mine.” After a brief pause, he added, “This is the law.”
For several seconds, nothing seemed to happen at all, then Xanthibarqa’s posture eased.
The change was so slight Winston almost missed it. Her gold eyes remained steady, her bearing disciplined, every inch the warrior she had been before. Yet the impersonal distance behind that discipline was gone. When she looked at him now, she was not merely waiting for the next order.
She was attentive to him personally, the distinction minute but unmistakable.
Aurascyra reacted more visibly. Her fingers clenched around the spear, then loosened again. A crease formed between her brows as she looked down at her own hand, seemingly surprised by the tension there.
When her gaze returned to Winston, suspicion appeared for a heartbeat before confusion passed through it. She remembered distrusting him, he could see that, but she seemed unable to recover why that distrust had ever felt appropriate.
As a result her shoulders slowly eased and the guarded set of her mouth softened, and the attention she gave him became warmer, almost concerned, as though his reaction to what was happening mattered to her before she had consciously decided that it should.
Helisparga remained the quietest, her eyes moving briefly toward Aurascyra and then Xanthibarqa as she took in the changes with the same analytical calm she had brought to every argument that morning. Finally, she looked back at Winston, understanding still present in her expression.
So did memory, and that was what made the effect disturbing: she knew she had been altered, and she knew she had not felt this way only minutes earlier.
Yet the new feeling did not appear foreign to her. Her mind was already arranging old memories around it, finding explanations that allowed affection to sit naturally where caution had been.
Winston felt a chill at that before looking toward Penthascara, who remained rigid, of course.
Her jaw had locked so tightly that a muscle stood out along one cheek. Her chin remained raised. Her eyes stayed fixed on Winston with an expression close enough to anger that hope flickered through him for one absurd instant.
Perhaps the command had reached its limit, but then her eyes dropped, only for a heartbeat, and when they rose again, the contempt was gone. Winston felt satisfaction before he felt horror, the realization striking almost as quickly as the change itself. He had wanted that look gone, and now it was; part of him was pleased.
Penthascara seemed to sense the absence too. A furrow formed between her brows as though she were searching for something she knew should still be there.
Man, outsider, product of Man’s World, danger, necessary king, the categories remained intact, and nothing had been erased, but they no longer led where they had before.
Every one of them bent back toward Winston and arrived at a different conclusion.
Her jaw slowly loosened. The hard line of her mouth softened. Her eyes lingered on him rather than searching his face for evidence against him.
The tension left her shoulders by degrees, yet she was still Penthascaram; proud, severe, and, Winston suspected, entirely capable of disagreeing with him about almost anything that did not directly conflict with the command he had given.
But his opinion mattered to her now, as did his safety and happiness, and beneath all of it sat something deeper that had not been there before: love. The ease with which the word fit frightened him.
Aurascyra glanced toward her, and for a fleeting moment something passed between the four women. Each could see in the others what she could only imperfectly observe in herself.
None of them denied it.
Xanthibarqa lowered her head first. The gesture remained restrained and martial, but the warmth beneath it changed everything.
“My king.”
Aurascyra followed, though her eyes remained on Winston. “My king,” the words held concern now rather than mere obedience.
Helisparga inclined her head more slowly. Her expression suggested she understood more of what had happened than Winston particularly wanted examined.
“My king,” she commented.
Winston waited in silence as Penthascara remained still.
Her eyes held his for several seconds, and somewhere inside them he could still see the woman who had stood before him that morning and told him without apology that his innocence created no claim upon her judgment.
She remembered saying it, he was certain of that, and at last Penthascara released a quiet breath before saying, “My king.”
The title was almost exactly the same as the words she had used before, but nothing about them was the same.
Some foolish part of Winston had expected more spectacle. Light. Thunder. Some visible sign that divine law had bent around his voice.
There had been nothing like that with Hippolyta either, and remembering it made him feel foolish for expecting otherwise.
The four women still looked like themselves. Aurascyra still held her spear. Xanthibarqa remained disciplined. Helisparga remained thoughtful. Penthascara remained proud.
That was the frightening part: he had not emptied them or replaced their memories, intelligence, or personalities; he had altered what mattered to them.
Everything else had simply begun arranging itself around the change.
And because so much of them remained untouched, what he had done looked frighteningly natural.
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