The Great Mariana Turkey Shoot

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Okay, you've decided. After this chapter, we will have one or two chapters POV of the four volleyball bitches. There I will take on the mindset of each girl, how they deal with the situation they experience in this chapter and how they will try to find a way out of the orgasm control problem. Finn will help them with this, of course. After that, we finally have our date with Bella. I'm really looking forward to it and there will be a very small surprise. And after that Finn will help Lisa set up her room and maybe Lisa will even have the courage to tell Finn about her feelings. I don't know yet. And last but not least I will activate the other girls in the class.

At the end of the chapter there is a poll waiting for you that deals with the general direction of the story.

Now, please enjoy...

Chapter 40

"You want to cum?" Candice nods eagerly, pressing my tip against the roof of her mouth as she looks up at me. Under the shocked gaze of her friends, she moves her head back and forth, acting anything but clever. I'm not surprised that she has so little experience and I really want to reward her for her submission. For real. "That's not going to work. You're lousy, you stupid cunt." For real. Despite her situation, on her knees, thrown at the feet of a boy she hates, humiliated and horny, Candice actually manages to painfully drag her teeth across the underside of my cock. "That's enough you stupid little bitch." With ****, I put my hand on her forehead and push her body back so that she falls on her sweet ass in front of me.

"You bastard!" she screams. "That was an accident." And even sounds a little ****.

"No cummies for you bitch. God, you're such a sorry excuse for a fuck. Have fun with your lonely dried-up fuck hole."

"No, Finn wait! I..."

"You," I interrupt Candice cruelly and point to Lynn, who is slumped in the embrace of the quiet Sonya, who leans past the slightly taller girl and looks fearfully at her friend who now gets on her knees and looks at me desperately. I ignore them both and snap my fingers at Lynn. "Time for you to pay off your bet debts, don't you think?"

"No I... No! I won't! I..." When she realizes what she's gotten herself into, Lynn starts shaking her head wildly. "No Finn I..." But then she suddenly is pushed forward by Sonya, so surprised that the beautiful, rich volleyball player falls at my feet and pulls herself up. I'm surprised myself, but it seems pleasant that Sonya doesn't need a command for everything. Or she just wants to get rid of Lynn so she can think about why her body and mind no longer obey her.

Too late, you calculating, ice-cold slut. You belong to me now and I'll make sure you become a team player.

Beneath me, Lynn pulls herself up as if she had landed in front of a poisonous snake, but she is the poisonous animal and my snake is what she deserves. And it seems that she sees it exactly that way, at least the growing part of her that belongs to me and my little device. When her head reaches the tip of my twitching cock, she opens her mouth in protest. Then she squeaks in panic as her muscles no longer obey her and her body submits to me.

"Oh fuck yes!" She immediately gives one hundred percent and I've never had a BJ **** as **** to get it good and right as Lynn. "Fuck, you're so good." It was agreed and maybe she has a certain amount of leeway when it comes to her verbal contract with me - I won't know until I lose a bet against her - but there's no attempt to manipulate or mess it up. Lynn gives me an enthusiastic, if a little too fast, blow job that's impressive.

Her fingers go to my ass and with my tip in her mouth, she gets into position. The tip of her tongue glides gently, sometimes hard, over the intruder in her mouth, taking care of me, tickling and caressing everything she can reach while I feel her hot breath on the cooling coating of her saliva. The mixture of Lynn's and Candice's drips down the corners of her mouth as she pushes the liquid off my spear with her lips pressed tightly around me, only to then cover it again with a new, warm layer.

My fingers dig into her hair and prevent her from pulling her head back too far and so, without me noticing any struggle in her, I soon feel my tip hitting the back of her throat. Poor Lynn has to cough violently, her lips quiver hard and she closes her teary eyes but I don't let go and she doesn't pull away. I fully enjoy this intimate moment with a girl who wouldn't give me even a first look on the street. Now she kneels below me and sucks like her life depends on it.

"Such a good suck slut" I praise her and wonder where I know these nasty words from. A repressed life seems to me to be the answer. Then I thrust my hips forward a few times and pull her head close to me. "And now stay and suck you whore." With that, I press her onto me until I feel her cut little nose bump against me. Lynn fights bravely but I ignore her heroic suffering and look at the other girls. "Now will you look at this."

It really is a surprise.

Of course Sonya is still standing exactly where I told her not to move. Her eyes are wide open and her chest is heaving violently. But next to her, on the floor, Rania is crouching.

Naked below the waist.

Her sports shorts are lying next to her, unnoticed, with her panties on top, with clearly visible dark spots on them. And next to them, Rania is kneeling on the floor, her knees spread wide and her gaze fixed on me. She is almost dying of shame, her big, dark, exotic eyes are begging me not to pay attention to her and her panting mouth is open while her cheeks are glowing red.

She fucks the volleyball between her thighs, rubbing her pussy over the cold fabric and warming it up while her juices wet the ball and her thighs. With twitching hips, she rubs her clit over the ball again and again and her stiff nipples almost poke through her sturdy sports top while her hair falls wildly down her back in a ruined braid and her pussy lips form and rub over the wet surface of the ball.

"Please... Finn... Look away..." But she can't stop jilling herself in front of my eyes and I can't think about looking away.

"With this kind of show? I think not. In fact. Sonya. Look at Rania."

"Task understood. 'Look at Rania.' Execute."

With robotic precision, Sonya starts moving, turns her sexy body around - the only one I haven't seen naked yet and I'm dying to do so now - and kneels right in front of Rania, who is trembling with shame. With her hands on her trained thighs, Sonya leans forward slightly while the tips of her white sneakers collide under the clear imprint of her ass in her tight pants. She even blinks a little and doesn't turn her head away while Rania tries to stop bending over a fucking volleyball in front of everyone and fails miserably.

"Finn please..." Because Sonya doesn't do it, she turns her head away while her juice drips from the ball onto the floor in thick strands. She is so wet, it must be the fulfillment of her dreams to fuck herself with this longed-for object but in her head, surely because of the white-hot shame, there is still some room for me. "Why are you doing this?"

Only she uses it for something as unimportant as shame and gnawing instead of my shining, divine image.

Calm down, Finn. They are not very far along on their progress score. You have shown them what is to come but the real battle is just beginning and you have to be careful not to give them too much away.

For example, what the Orgasm Control Perk is all about? By now the girls should know that they can't come, something that is certainly strange. And then they all suddenly obey me, take strange bets, want to steal certain things, obey every one of my orders and suddenly like sexual pain and humiliation.

It must be confusing and frightening to realize that your body no longer obeys you and you definitely want an answer to something like that. Maybe the four of them already suspect that only I can provide this answer. Meh. Who cares? I'm having fun and... A pain in my ass cheeks makes me wince. Holy shit Lynn!

I quickly look at the panting girl on my cock who is already rolling her eyes. Tears are running down her face and running over her puffed-out cheeks while her tongue is still slavishly serving the invader who has conquered her little mouth. I'm already raising my hands to push her away while I think of an insulting comment, but then I see the movements. Like Rania, Lynn's hips twitch violently and then I feel the vibration on my cock as the Asian-American girl begins to moan loudly and hoarsely.

Candice and Rania watch their friend in shock as she reaches a mind-shattering orgasm through a humiliating blow job that makes her moan and whimper. Eventually the violent shaking continues through her whole body and as her fingers dig into my ass and her breath catches, a wet spot spreads across her pants.

Finally I release her head from my grip but Lynn continues to ride out the waves of her orgasm as her hips pivot on a nonexistent cock. It takes a long time, but then she slowly slides to the ground. Inch by inch I watch my slime-covered cock slip out of her tight throat. Then he snaps up and a drop of spit hits Lynn on her eyebrow, just before she falls onto her back and lies in front of me, panting, her legs spread wide, her hips twitching.

Lynn Huoa. +4 (PS -87)

It looks like Path comes before Perk, I see. She came even though Orgasm Control forbids her because she has fulfilled her Path. Maybe...

"Aaaah..." Lynn is too weak to react but Candice and I turn our heads while Sonya captures every little detail as Rania Naziri comes by rubbing her hot pussy on the volleyball. "I'm coming... I'm coming... comiiiiiii..." It seems that she isn't a squirter. Too bad, I would have liked to see that. Maybe the orgasm just isn't enough, she hasn't activated a perk. In any case, she finally squats on the ball, her head bowed, while her hand strokes her breasts over her shirt. Then she looks up and her eyes fix on me. "I... I... can... explain..."

"Really?" With my slimy cock aimed at her like a heat-seeking missile, I look dismissively. At first the girl wants to look at me angrily but the attempt fails miserably. "Nice cunt, by the way." My cutting gaze is directed between her legs like the eye of Sauron.

The girl looks down, then quickly jumps up and puts her hand in front of her pussy.

"You... You cant..."

"Will you just shut up" I groan and step towards her. My cock is looking for targets and the confused, horny and humiliated girls have just as little to oppose me as the Japanese planes over the Philippine Sea have to oppose their opponents. It's like the Great Mariana Turkey Shoot and, her hand still pressed firmly between her thighs, Rania backs away from me in fear while I bend down and pick up the volleyball.

Her **** eyes immediately focus on the ball and become uncertain when she realizes that she has made a mistake while I look at her smugly and let my finger slide slowly and clearly through the wet secretion of her pussy.

"Relax Bunny" I sneer. "I will not **** you. I'm not like Coach Jenkins, who I saved you from, by the way. And besides..." I look at the girls and note with satisfaction that Candice has crawled closer to me on her knees, but then I turn to Sonya.

"Suck." The girl grimaces.

"Finn, please don't make me... Task understood. 'Suck.' Execute."

Sonya Mackintosh. +3 (PS -72)

Then her soft, warm lips wrap tightly around my finger and I feel her tongue as Sonya takes in every molecule of Rania. When she has swallowed everything, she doesn't stop, just as I intended, and suckles on my finger while I talk to the others

"And besides," I turn back to Rania, who looks at me with wet eyes. "You all definitely have some kind of sick mental problems" I adress the former question. "Fuck, you're disgusting. I definitely don't want to stick my cock in..." I look disparagingly between Rania's incredibly attractive thighs. "That there." Maybe that will help and buy me time to figure out what I want to do with them.

"I... We... We're not... And besides..." Her head is working at full speed and Rania is so trying to understand what's happening that she forgets her hand in front of her... God, she's hot. I want to fuck you so badly. No! Bad Finn! Pull yourself together!

"Shut up brownie. You can show me your cunt however you want." Rania remembers that she is half naked, forgets her indignation and moves her hand between her legs again, only to move it again as I hold the ball out to her, only to take it away from her again. My handling is just as good as that of the pilots of the F-6F Hellcat fighter planes. Fuck, these zeros don't stand a chance. "So you can either disappear without this thing here... Or you can sit there in the corner and..." I think quickly. "And worship me as your coach and master."

It's funny to see but 'master' is what shocks her the most. And she fights against the urge that is spreading inside her. She has already come, has achieved her goal, only to see it recede into the distance again, the ball in my hand.

"I'll give it to you," I say angrily. "If you do what I tell you and worship me like a good, loyal ****."

"Fuck you." It's a breath in a hurricane and at the same moment, Rania turns around. "Fuck you, you bastard." But her words lack all self-worth and the sight of her wobbling bottom is unbelievable as she goes to the opposite wall, slides down on a wooden box and presses her legs together. While doing so, she stares at me with an expressionless face while I wait patiently and balance the ball in my hand. Then I look at Lynn who has pulled herself up and is swaying to her feet. Candice, on the other hand... "You look so mighty..." I look at Rania who has lowered her head. Even now it is a whisper, an attempt to resist me. "Master." And she fails.

"Not bad. Keep going." Then I turn back to Sonya. "And what do I do with you?" The girl flinches as I turn to her and pretend to think about it. Then I grin.

"Please Finn," she whimpers, confused and alone. Each of the girls is alone. No help from their friends. "I didn't take a photo. I thought the idea was stupid and..."

"But you didn't help me," I say coldly. "You didn't care." I step so close to her that I can feel her breath on my neck. Sonya arches her head as she silently begs me. I, on the other hand, lower my gaze further to the cleavage of her medium-sized breasts under her shirt. "That'll have to do," I say, grinning.

"What..." Sonya also looks down and notices where my gaze is resting. Her head snaps back up. "You can't do that, Finn. Please..."

"On your knees and give me a slutty tit job." And the fear disappears from Sonya's eyes.

"Task understood. 'On your knees and give you a slutty tit job.' Execute."

Sonya Mackintosh. +2 (PS -70)

“Oh God, that looks so good,” I hear Rania say from the other side of the garage. “Your cock between her tits is so… powerful and… incredibly sexy and… I don’t know… really big.”

Okay, even this comment is quite pleasant coming from such a beautiful mouth. Beautiful girls can say so much to make guys like me feel good. It’s a shame that it took the MCD for Rania to notice my appreciative nod and smile slightly, ever so slightly.

Sonya, on the other hand, uses her whole body and diligently rocks back and forth on her knees while her splayed elbows also move and her fingers dig lightly into the flesh of her breasts. The mixture of saliva and Lynn’s throat slime makes the space between her melons… no… oranges? Whatever, they are incredibly sexy and glisten with Lynn’s secretions. Sonya has her head turned away and her hair is shaking eagerly as she tries not to see anything that might disturb her. It's hard, as Lynn and Candice are crouched in one corner of the garage and Rania in the other while we stand in the middle. With my hands on my hips, I look around and enjoy the dominance in the Pacific... the garage of my sports club as Sonya's soft flesh slides over my wet, hot spear. Her nipples are stiff and I feel the urgency with which she is trying to make me come. Of course she doesn't want to, but maybe I can change that.

"Sonya." She ignores me. "Look at me."

"Task understood. 'Look at you.' Execute." She pouts but as her body rocks back and forth and slightly up and down, she turns her beautiful, round face to me.

"Try to enjoy it," I advise her, but she just presses her lips together and squeezes her breasts around my cock. Oh yes, sorry Sonya. "Enjoy it."

"Override current behavior. 'Enjoy it'. Execute."

Sonya Mackintosh. +5 (PS -65)

Okay, so that works too. Shit. I quickly look at the other girls, but they're all too intimidated to say anything.

I really should try to explain it to them.

Meh. Fuck it. And fuck them. Fuck them all.

"Keep going, you little titty-fuck drone," I grin, but Sonya doesn't break her rhythm even a bit as she continues to jerk me off with her cute round breasts. "Your tits here are the only ones that aren't completely disappointing." I look down at her.

"T-Thanky... I guess..." she murmurs, looking at me pleadingly.

"Yes. Make me nice and hard and ready for Candice, then you can sit next to your friend Rania here and rub your useless pussy until you come." Again her eyes grow dumb.

"Task understood. 'Sit next to my friend Rania and rub my useless pussy until I come.' Execute after current task."

Sonya Mackintosh. +1 (PS -64)

I think I've slowly gotten Sonya used to her role, but maybe it's still voluntary that she sits up a little straighter, grabs her breasts a little harder, presses them together a little more tightly and pulls them over my cock like a cozy blanket. Then warm, wet saliva hits my glans.

"Fuck yes... Keep going slut. Yes..."

Just a little more, Sonya is just too good, then I stretch out my arm.

"Candice!" While her friend is concentrating completely on my cock, I almost have to laugh when Candie quickly crawls next to me. Recovered from her orgasm, she looks up at me uncertainly.

"What will you do to me, you monster?" she asks in a trembling voice. "Fuck me in the ass to make it hurt? Or pinch my nipples till they..."

"Shut up bitch." It's so obvious that she wants me, the pain that I can give her.

"Or do you want me to praise you? This cock of yours before you put it in my ass..." She desperately needs it, her fix.

"Eyyyah..." I push Sonya away from me and she falls to her side in surprise. Then I grab Candice, who is still trying to instill subliminal messages in me. That's my job, bitch.

"Execute next task. 'Sit next to my girlfriend Rania and rub my useless pussy until I cum.' Execute," Sonya whimpers as I watch her panty-clad ass wiggle next to Rania."

"Oh Finn, it's so hot to watch you **** us," Rania growls from her position, her cheeks burning with rage and shame. "We are no match for you. You are so powerful." I ignore her, grab Candice by her hair, form two improvised pigtails and fuck her mouth.

Gluck. Gluck. Gluck. Gluck.

I break through her mouth quickly and hard and ram myself into her throat as her face begins to turn red. My balls slam against her chin as Candice begins to gag loudly and disgustingly. In my head, however, the poison of '****' is spreading, something evil that I don't necessarily welcome but that I still allow into my life because it is the only guarantee that I can take what I deserve.

"Lynn you lousy cock sleeve." The girl stares at me with wordless horror. "I bet you can't make me come along with Candice." Her lower lip trembles but she has ****.

"What do I get if I win?" she asks and stands up while Candice watches her out of the corner of her eye with the same broken despair that Lynn displays.

"An orgasm, of course, you stupid little thing," I laugh.

"A-And if I d-don't m-manage it?" As she gets on her knees next to Candice and her trembling body, I roll my eyes. I'm not that strong-willed. Maybe with the stamina perk, but I didn't activated it. But Lynn has definitely learned to respect me. Or she's afraid of her own weakness.

"Then you belong to me, ****."

"Fuck you bitches are so good. Fucking hell..." I can't hold out for long with Candice on my cock and Lynn on my balls. Together thw two incredibly girls crouch under me, hands on the ground and necks stretched to serve me properly.

"Yes Finn. Cum for us," Rainia calls desperately with a shaky voice. "We don't deserve it, but give us your divine sperm. Please! We are unworthy!"

"Here I come you bitches..." I roar, grab Candice firmly by the hair and pound wildly into her strained mouth-cunt. Beneath me, Lynn sways between my thighs, but the tip of her tongue keeps finding my swinging balls, where the cum is mixing. Panicked, she tries everything to serve me so that she doesn't have to serve me. "Fuck!"

Candice freezes on my cock when she feels me start to twitch. I actually wanted to come on her face but in my haze, I ram too deep, too hard into her and shoot my load deep into her throat while Lynn wraps her lips around my balls, slurping and moaning.

It's an unfair victory but I still enjoy it like I'm a saint. No time for scruples or doubts. Candice is far too hot a piece of meat for that and Lynn's tongue is magical.

"Oh yes Finn," Rania voices. "Feed her your godly cum. Bless her with it. You are incredible."

Finally I step back, breathing heavily, while Candice sinks to the ground coughing and Lynn puts her hands protectively on her back.

"Okay bitches," I announce, breathing heavily and pull up my pants. I could risk it, but I leave it at that and don't use any of the girls to clean me. "Time's over. That was all.” I turn briefly to Rania and Sonya. The little thief is just eyeing the volleyball again, but Sonya has put her hand in her sports pants and is rubbing her useless pussy until she comes. She has closed her eyes and is completely in her world and as a gentleman, I leave her there. Anyway, I am distracted by Lynn, who has meanwhile ignored Candice, has spread her legs and is sticking three fingers in her wet pussy, hammering away. With Candice still on the ground, I turn to Rania.

“And you, my stupid little thief.” I hold the ball in front of her nose and she greedily stretches out her fingers for it. “Don’t think I don’t know what you’re up to.”

“Please Finn… I… I need it…”

“I could leave it… hm… unattended,” I think. “But I need something from you for that.”

“Everything! Anything you want!” She spreads her legs for me, but as much as I would like to fuck her right now, I have to think about the future. And about the people who really deserve my affection.

“Not that you whore,” I laugh evilly. Then I make the gesture with my fingers. “I assume your parents are rich?” Rania nods emidiatly, not believing I'm so dumb to choose money over her body.

“How… How much?”

“Not much,” I shrug. “A sexy little minx like you will definitely have a thousand dollars to…” I don’t get any further. Rania jumps up as if a kamikaze pilot had crashed into the hall and runs out of the garage with her lower body naked, leaving small drops of pussy juice behind.

I only have to watch Lynn and Sonya rubbing their pussies raw for a minute before she's standing in front of me again.

"1k and one hundred and fifty dollars!" she says and holds out the money to me with both hands. "That's all I have!"

"And my bus ticket?" Rania freezes. "I know it was you, you little thief."

One minute later I'm 1150 dollars and one bus ticket richer. Not a bad deal. Then I turn to the girls.

"I'm going to change now. When I'm done I don't want to see you here anymore." Sonya comes with a quiet, suppressed whimper, but Lynn isn't ready yet. Then I turn to the girls.

Zap. Zap. Zap.

Three photos should be enough. One of Rania, standing in front of me and shocked. One of Sonya, masturbating and distracted, one of Lynn and Candice, Lynn masturbating, Candice naked and dazed. After that...

Orgasm Control

Rania Naziri. 70

Lynn Huoa. 70

Candice Barber. 70

Sonya Mackintosh. 70

"Fuck... fuck..." I hear Lynn whimper, feeling her arousal dimming as her friends abandon her to get away from me as quickly as possible.

I, on the other hand, am ready go to home to people I like and who, mostly, like me.

Message from the author:

I tried not to make it too hard for the girls, not to overdo it, but to make a clear distinction that the four are not necessarily on Finn's good side. I held back on the PS as well because I plan to increase it in the next chapters.

Regarding the polls, there is one question that is particularly important to me. Namely the question of whether, and if so how, we should introduce new characters into the story.

Personally, I did not expect Mind Control Device to be so successful and planned to capture the readers' interest with a continuous stream of new girls and kinks. Now that we have already introduced several popular characters and brought them onto the path, the question naturally arises whether it would not be better to continue to take care of these girls in favor of introducing too many new ones. Apart from that, we still have a few characters that we need to bring onto the path or activate.

We could stop here for now. I 'have to' introduce two more characters because I find the idea/kink just too irresistible. In theory, we also need a few more boys to live up to the earlier polls.

There are three ways I see.

We could leave it as it is now. No new characters (unless there really is no other way). But I'm ending my search for new kinks and paths and postponing them to a possible 'second season', so to speak. So the story would end at some point, maybe with a cliffhanger or something, maybe a time skip, and we would have a second story. In this, other characters would have the spotlight, not the one we know now.

We could also introduce a 'break' into the story. That would be the long game. I'll leave the characters as they are for now, take care of them, let them gain PS and have a good time and interrupt the flow in such a way that once the story has calmed down a bit and we've gotten to know and dealt with all the established characters, we'll only introduce new ones again then. That would break the flow I intended so that we always have a 'new, established and finished' Progress Score in the story. If we deal with the established characters first, that flow will be broken but we could focus on them and after that we would have our new ones together with the established ones.

Or we leave it as I planned earlier and I continue to introduce some new characters as I had roughly planned. At least two and maybe a few more guys. That would result in more time for the new characters at some point in the story.

Personally, I think the long game is best and would vote for it because it combines both worlds, but of course I can't see into your head to see how much you can handle. I don't want it to get too complicated if I don't introduce another 'group'. Or you are curious about what new characters I have come up with and really want to see how it continues.

https://strawpoll.com/NPgxe6YMoZ2