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Page Twelve
6 panels
[1] Par and the General have moved to stand before Jazinda, who is held between two soldiers, hands cuffed behind her back, a green light glowing on her suppression collar. Jazinda glares daggers at them, her mouth clamped shut. The General offers Par a knife.
Par: Now, what did Ms. Walters call you? Jaz-something? Jizz?
Par: Hmm. A bit plain looking but not bad I suppose.
General: Would you care to…?
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[2] Same shot. The General has the knife touching the base of Jazinda’s throat. His other hand is pulling at her shirt. Jazinda’s chin is held high, defiant.
Par: I wouldn’t dream of it! You captured her; the honor is all yours!
General: You’re too kind, Excellency.
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[3] Same shot. The general has whipped the knife down slicing open Jazinda’s shirt, revealing a black lace bra beneath.
General: Ah! At least it’s not a sports bra.
Par: Nothing to say, Jizz Girl? The stoic type, eh? Well we’ll see how long that lasts.
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[4] Same shot. The knife has cut the bra in half, revealing Jazinda’s modest breasts. Jazinda’s expression is positively murderous.
General: I daresay she regrets not killing you when she had the chance, Darquon.
Par: I imagine so. Which reminds me…
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[5] Same shot as Par drives his fist into Jazinda’s stomach, her mouth flying open in a gasp.
Par: That is for daring to place hands on me, cow!
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[6] Same shot. Jazinda’s head reels back as Par’s fist slams into her face, breaking her nose.
SFX: [Crack]
Par: [Tsk] Not even a proper superheroine, just some forgettable little nobody with a malleable face and impulse control issues.
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