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Chapter 6
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Looking Like a God
"I've got it!" Maisie announced as she scrambled back into her clothes as elegantly as she could manage in the passenger seat of your car "This time we act like you don't even know me. We'll head to a bar, I'll get there before you, and then you can arrive a little later and hit on me"
"Okay.." you humour her, not quite sure where this is going.
"You come in after me. And don't come straight for me either. I'll make sure I get hit on at least a couple of times, and I'll shoot down whoever it is who tries it on with me. But loudly. publicly so everyone sees it. Then you approach me, and at first I'll kind of shoot you down too. Like, not in a nasty way or anything. But then you just start commanding me, first to strip and then once I'm naked, you command me to fuck you in front of everyone. You'll look like a God and I will feel so **** and dominated. It will be so hot!"
You don't know quite what to make of this. Of course it sounds hot, but just fucking Maisie in the privacy of your own bedroom would also be incredibly hot for you, and a lot less likely to land you behind bars. You are not sure quite what part of your command to make Maisie enjoy you controlling her had turned her into this. Obviously you have inadvertently lowered her inhibitions and brought some of her more outlandish kinks to the fore. You could reign her in with another command, but part of you is excited that you can make her this excited, and you decide to press on. Though you do have practical concerns.
"We're not old enough to drink"
"That's the part of this plan that worries you?" she laughs "You can easily use the curse so nobody questions me, and you aren't even going to buy a drink, you are just there to fuck me!"
Maisie can see you are hesitant, so shifts herself over and up onto your lap, wrapping an arm around your neck and coming in close enough that you can taste her breath as she speaks.
"Look, I know this is a little dangerous, and that the curse can't necessarily help you if things get complicated. But that's all part of the fun" she starts to stroke your cheek as she continues "You were so manly and sexy in the restaurant, and I'm really hot for you right now. Don't you want to keep that going?"
Curse or no curse, there are some things in life you just can't say no to.
"Okay Maisie, let's get you to the bar"
You wait for a few minutes after Maisie has entered before going in yourself. As you take a seat you notice that, already, one potential suitor is walking away with a dejected look at the very public rejection he has just received. Alone again, Maisie looks over and flashes you a quick smile, seemingly happy that you are not backing out of this. You can't let her down now.

She then goes back to acting like she doesn't know you and has come alone. Not long after, a second man approaches, this time well built, confident looking and in an expensive, tailored suit. Again, Maisie gives him a swift, public brush off and he walks away, looking like rejection isn't something he is used to. A little later a third guy chances his arm, and gets a little salty with her when the inevitable happens. You wonder how it is even possible for Maisie to have a drink in peace if she is bothered this often. You decide it is time to intervene.
As you approach Maisie you realise how many pairs of eyes are on you now. It seems this has now become something of a spectator sport for the regular patrons of this establishment, will any of the hot chick at the bars many admirers be permitted to even buy her a drink? You doubt anyone is giving you a prayer as you make your approach. They are about to get much more of a show than they ever could have bargained for.
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