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Chapter 10 by fantaghiro
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time to leave
The mirror was cruel. The reflection was obscene. The weight of the hoops pulled at your delicate lobes with every tremble; the bangles clashed as your hands quivered in front of you, the sound a mocking jingle. The mini-dress stretched across hips that weren’t yours, breasts that suffocated against the Lycra, thighs too smooth, too bare. The towering pumps **** your stance into something wanton, an arch in your lower back you couldn’t straighten.
You clutched the dresser edge, knuckles white against the varnish. “This isn’t me,” you rasped. The words came out in Yulia’s voice, husky and accented, like a bad actress trying to make herself sound dangerous. “Andrea, Jesus Christ… this isn’t me.”
Andrea placed her hands firmly on your shoulders, pressing you down to sit before you toppled in the heels. Her eyes darted toward the door, then back. “Listen to me. He’s coming back in less than an hour. You couldn’t fight him like this. You’d only get hurt. You had to… play along. At least for now.”
You shook your head violently, earrings swaying, hair brushing your cheekbones. “You’re asking me to crawl into bed with that—monster. To smile. To kiss him. To—” Your throat locked, the words stuck. You could still feel Victor’s gaze burning through you, the way he had stood in the doorway like you were already property.
Andrea gripped your chin, forcing your painted lips up to meet her eyes. “I’m asking you to survive.”
The silence pressed heavy between you.
Then, the sound of footsteps. Heavy, deliberate. Approaching down the corridor like the tread of a judge walking to the gallows.
The door handle turned.
Victor stepped inside. His broad frame filled the space, suit jacket unbuttoned now, tie loosened, as though he had discarded any need for pretense. His eyes swept once over you, slow and devouring, a predator’s appraisal of prey dressed just to be eaten.
A smile curled under his mustache. Not kind. Not warm. Possessive. “Mm. Better.” His accent thickened, his voice rolling low. “Now you look like mine.”
Your stomach lurched, bile rising against the constriction of the bra. You wobbled as you tried to stand, bangles clattering with the movement.
Victor strode closer, looming until the scent of his cologne—spiced, dark, suffocating—smothered your senses. His thick fingers reached out, catching your chin, tilting your face up like you were nothing more than merchandise being inspected. The gold hoops swung, mascara-heavy lashes fluttered despite yourself.
Victor’s smile deepened. “Yes. My bride was awake at last.”
Andrea’s jaw clenched. She took a step forward, but Victor’s eyes snapped to her, a silent warning. She froze.
You tried to speak, but your painted lips only parted on a strangled breath.
Victor chuckled low, brushing a thumb across the swollen gloss of your lower lip. “You would learn to be silent unless spoken to. But first…” His eyes traveled down, lingering on the curve of the dress, the stretch of thighs, the tottering heels. “First, we would go home.”
He turned to Andrea with a curt nod. “You would visit later. She belonged with me now.”
Your blood iced.
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The Ultimate Transplant
Someone you know is given a new body & life
PLEASE ADD CHAPTERS! A close friend or family member is horribly injured in an accident. As they lay dying in the emergency room, another patient dies of a brain aneurysm. Both of them are organ donors, so a surgeon decides it's the perfect opportunity for him to try an experimental surgery. He transplants the victim's higher brain (the cerebellum) to the donor's body in an attempt to 'save' a life. Amazingly it works. But the surgery was not approved so the hospital convinces the families to keep quiet, arguing that revealing this operation to the public would bring never-ending media attention to all involved. That means that the patient will have to publicly assume the identity of the donor. What will this mean to your friends and family? Who else will you tell? Although you will spend a lot of time and effort giving support, how will all this alter your relationship to the patient? And how will he or she adapt to a complete change of body and identity? Many transformation stories focus on the change or victim, so I thought it would be interesting to instead have the POV be someone who sees the change from the outside. Writers feel free to explore a change in age, gender, class or ethnicity - and the repercussions that change would have on the main character (and others). This is from my writing.com story with thanks and credit to other contributors, especially Wassel, Wordsmitty, and Enigma. Please see the original at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1886863-The-Ultimate-Transplant for the original authors' posts. Also you should check out Wassel's version at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1974478-The-Transplant ).
Updated on Jun 24, 2026
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