Chapter 18 by fantaghiro
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arriving
The airport air felt heavy, warmer than the stale chill of the plane. Don followed Mike through the crowd, his small suitcase rolling behind him. People bustled past with excited chatter, and the smell of coffee and fried food clung to the air.
Mike spotted them first — two of his closest friends waiting just beyond the arrival gates, waving. “There they are,” he murmured to Don.
Don’s chest tightened. His mind flickered — not to Don’s history with these men, but to Xue Li’s memory of greeting men in train stations, of knowing exactly how to make her smile soft enough to disarm them.
Mike leaned closer. “Remember, you’re my wife now. Just play the part.”
“I know,” Don said in his slightly broken English.
They reached the barrier, and Mike’s friends came in for hugs. Don accepted theirs gently, arms light around them, a faint perfume still lingering from the bottle Xue Li had packed in her old life.
“Wow,” one of them said, grinning. “She’s beautiful, Mike.”
Don felt heat rise to his cheeks, unsure if the blush was his or hers. “Thank you,” he said, lowering his gaze in a way that felt automatic.
The four of them walked toward the parking lot. Mike’s friends asked polite questions — how long they’d been married, how the trip was — and Don’s answers came in clipped, careful phrases. “China very busy. Many people. Good food. We… happy.” His grammar carried the music of Mandarin, his vowels softer now.
At one point, as they loaded the bags into the trunk, Don caught his reflection in the car window — small frame, long black hair falling into his face, posture slightly turned inward. He looked like a stranger.
In the backseat, one friend whispered something to Mike about how lucky he was. Don didn’t hear the words exactly, but the tone — the admiration — made something warm stir inside him. Was it Don feeling proud, or Xue Li feeling desired? He couldn’t tell anymore.
As they drove toward Mike’s apartment, the city rolling past outside, Don leaned against the window and thought: In their eyes, I am her. Maybe in my own eyes too.
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The Ultimate Transplant
Someone you know is given a new body & life
PLEASE ADD CHAPTERS! A close friend or family member is horribly injured in an accident. As they lay dying in the emergency room, another patient dies of a brain aneurysm. Both of them are organ donors, so a surgeon decides it's the perfect opportunity for him to try an experimental surgery. He transplants the victim's higher brain (the cerebellum) to the donor's body in an attempt to 'save' a life. Amazingly it works. But the surgery was not approved so the hospital convinces the families to keep quiet, arguing that revealing this operation to the public would bring never-ending media attention to all involved. That means that the patient will have to publicly assume the identity of the donor. What will this mean to your friends and family? Who else will you tell? Although you will spend a lot of time and effort giving support, how will all this alter your relationship to the patient? And how will he or she adapt to a complete change of body and identity? Many transformation stories focus on the change or victim, so I thought it would be interesting to instead have the POV be someone who sees the change from the outside. Writers feel free to explore a change in age, gender, class or ethnicity - and the repercussions that change would have on the main character (and others). This is from my writing.com story with thanks and credit to other contributors, especially Wassel, Wordsmitty, and Enigma. Please see the original at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1886863-The-Ultimate-Transplant for the original authors' posts. Also you should check out Wassel's version at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1974478-The-Transplant ).
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