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Chapter 16
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BWC Bull Aiden
What's next?
You make you're way inside
Rita is thrown through the door into the building while Cortana walks slowly in with the blood of the other guards she killed in seconds over her body
Rita: god damnit it went down
Rita starts shooting her with her blaster
Cortana: it's futile, this body is made from beskar, and neither blaster bolts nor lightsabers can penetrate it
Aiden: why didn't you tell me that your body was made from beskar Cortana?
Cortana: you didn't ask master
Aiden: next time, tell me it immediately if you think I should know something
Cortana: of course
Rita: ENOUGH, she may be bulletproof but you aren't
Rita aims the gun at you but before she can shoot her eyes start glowing purple and her body goes limb
Rita: follow me, the bosses want to see you
She says in a cold and almost emotionless tone
Cortana: amazing master, it looks like someone took control of her by hacking the implant in her head
Aiden: not someone, Judy Alvarez one of the best hackers in the galaxy and one of the two bosses of the Aldecaldos crime Syndicate
Aiden: You see every member of the gang has one of those implants in their head, it's put into their brain when they join the gang, that way if they ever betray the gang or get captured, Judy can take over that person and take their will away or if she has to fry her brain
Cortana: is that the reason that the republic has yet to find real evidence for something illegal that happens on the station
Aiden: exactly and she and her partner are the reason we are here
Rita brings you to the top of the building and you all enter the main office
Rita: I brought them here as requested Miss Judy
You see the two bosses sitting on the couch
Panam Plamer

And Judy Alvarez

Aiden: nice to finally meet both of you in person
Panam: that remains to be seen
Panam: I think it's best if you stop controlling Rita
Judy: very well
Judy stops the hack and Rita's eyes return to normal
Rita: ugh what happened
She then sees you
Rita: you asshole
She tries to grab her gun again
Panam: RITA
Rita hears Panam's voice and finally notices her and Judy and realizes where she is
Judy: we're disappointed in you, because of you're rash decision we lost ten guards and the front of the building is fucked up
Rita: that's because of him
Panam: he wanted to speak to us, but instead of letting him in and letting us handle this, you took it in you're own hands and look at where that got you
Rita: I'm sorry
Panam: this is not the first time you got duped by him remember
Judy: a couple of months ago I asked you to transport a chip with my most advanced virus to a safe house on another planet, do you remember
Rita: I remember
Judy: and what happened
Rita: I landed on Eden Prime to refuel my ship and take something to eat
Panam: and?
Rita: he noticed how protected I was off the drive with the virus on it and switched my drive with a fake he had
Judy: exactly because of your blunder, you cost us millions in credits
Rita: he can still give it back
Aiden: I can't I already used it
Rita: WHAT, ON WHAT?
Judy: you're looking at it Rita, I can detect the virus inside of that droid, no that's not right, I detect it in the EDI AI that's in control of the droid
Panam: and just look at that body, is that the prototype that the republic ordered
Aiden: you know about that
Judy: we know a lot of things, heir to the Pearce family
Panam: have you come here for a reason
Aiden: yes I want to make a new empire and I need you're help
Judy: you want to go into business with the Aldecaldos
Rita: Wait you can't accept this
Panam: SILENCE
Aiden: do you accept
Panam: we will if you do a job for us first
Aiden: why should I, your man tried to jump me because of her
Judy: and you stole from us, this is only fair
Aiden: fine, what job
Panam: we will tell you tomorrow
Judy: but as a sign of goodwill
Judy throws you a control tablet
Judy: Rita is yours to use for tonight, so go nuts with her
Rita: YOU CAN'T BE SERIOUS
you press the button to take control of her and her eyes start glowing purple again
Aiden: very well see you both tomorrow then, Cortana and Rita come with me
Cortana: yes master
Rita: as you wish
Panam: have fun
Judy: see you tomorrow
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Bleached Galaxy
Make the galaxy your empire, by taking every bitch you want
It's the year 2200 and you are a 23 year old with a giant 15 inch BWC and have decided to take over the Galaxy and create a new empire
Updated on Jun 13, 2026
by BWC Bull Aiden
Created on Dec 6, 2023
by BWC Bull Aiden
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