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Chapter 11
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What is the voice saying?
Weekend Playtoy
“Take your lumps! Ask him to punish you with his belt for trying to break his car window.”
Target > 35, 1d100 roll+17=49, successful suggestion (+1 corruption).
Hannah Davis Corruption Points: 18
Hannah stands naked in front of the man whose truck window she just tried to smash with a brick. She has not won a friend by getting caught red-handed. Her thoughts tell her she’ll really need to abase herself to get him to do her any favour. Her eyes fixate on Luke’s belt. She wonders what it would feel like to feel the smack of it on her ass. “I’m sorry, I’ve been a very bad girl. I’ll take what I deserve. You should punish me. I’ll take a spanking with your belt.”
“You know what, girl, I will belt your ass,” Luke says, hefting his belt and pulling it out of its loops. “But that’s actually more work for me, not less. Keep quiet while you take your punishment and that’ll clear what you owe me for trying to smash the window. Anything else, you better make me a damn sweet offer after.”
Hannah let Luke bend her over the tailgate and thrust out her luscious, smooth ass out for punishment. The first hit of the belt stung a little. The second one stung enough to take her breath away. Strangely it also makes her pussy wet. Luke prods her. “Tell me how sorry you are, Hannah. Keep talking while you get what you deserve.”
“I’m so sorry!” *SMACK* “I deserve this.” *SMACK* “I’ll be a good girl.” *SMACK* “Please.” *SMACK* “Please just fuck me.” *SMACK* “Please just use my tight slutty body.” *SMACK* “I’ll do anything.” *SMACK* “Please just keep me and use me for as long as you like.”
Hannah braces for the next hit of the belt, but it does not come. Luke stands, hefting the weight of the leather in his hand. “Keep you? Tell me more.”
“You love this! Beg to be his sex **** until he tires of you.”
Target > 70, 1d100 roll+18=48, failed suggestion.
“You need a lot more! Beg to be his anything goes toy for the weekend.”
Target > 55, 1d100 roll+18=109, successful suggestion (+2 corruption)
Hannah Davis Corruption Points: 20
Hannah finds herself panting for breath. The belt has left a welt or two on her ass, and the pain is throbbing in layers. Her pussy is wet. She needs to offer herself to Luke. She needs her purse back. She needs to get fucked. She needs more of everything. The words fall out of her mouth. “Please keep me as your anything goes toy for the weekend. I promise I’ll be real fun.”
“Oh, I bet you will,” Luke says. Hannah submits as Luke puts a hood over her head and ties in the truckbed. She has a sensory deprivation experience of an indeterminate few hours. After the first few hours she can feel the pickup move and drive somewhere with her as the anonymous, blindfolded passenger in the truckbed. Some time later Luke pulls her upright and pulls her mask off. She’s in his garage, or a garage.
What has she gotten herself into? Luke is smirking as he leers at her naked body. “The guys are coming over later for poker night. Until then, you said you’d be real fun. Tell me how you’re going to be fun for me.”
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The Curse of Corrupting Comments (Open)
A story in which you the reader tries to corrupt naive women into becoming sexual deviants with your comments. A dice game between writer and reader.
Corrupt and control women as they struggle to fight off the voice in their head (you) that keeps driving them towards sluttier, sexier and degrading situations. Build up their corruption points to make biggger and badder corruptions possible.
Updated on May 20, 2026
by MegaMarshmallow
Created on Feb 26, 2023
by MegaMarshmallow
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