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Chapter 54 by Roar of The Winning Punch Roar of The Winning Punch

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Visit The Bandit's Lair

"Knock knock! Surprise inspection."

You open the door with your skeleton key and enter the domain of The Bottomless Bandit, scourge of all women everywhere.

She and her brainwashed roommate who's name remains a mystery to you, are sat on her floor with a pile of laundry. Well it looks like they're folding laundry until you realize it's all of Brooke's stolen treasures. "Am I interrupting something?"

Brooke looks up at you. It's the first time you've seen her without her robber's mask in weeks. She's still cute, but somehow less attractive when she isn't wearing your brand, that's marked her as a freak. "We're just organizing my prizes, by styles."

Never mind, she's still a freak.

"Mistress Brooke stole so many panties today!" Her roommate gushes.

"Yeah I saw the whole thing."

Brooke blushes. "Yeah?" She bites her lip next. "Were they upset? Did they talk about what a wicked genius I am?"

"There was a lot of swearing and name calling."

She absolutely swoons. "What'd they call me?"

"A creep mostly, and they said you had to be stopped."

She throws her head back in ecstasy, quivering, and groping one of her breasts. "I'm such an outcast Michael, none of my friends will even talk to me anymore." She shivers. "Everyone thinks I'm a creep."

"And a pervert." Her roommate reminds her.

Brooke smiles happily. "Of course." She takes one of her stolen treasures of the day, and slides it down the bands of the several panties she's actually wearing. She must have decided wearing twenty pairs was too much even for her. You watch this lunatic slick herself off for a good few moments.

"I actually wanted to talk with you, about something else."

Brooke pouts, and takes her hand out of her panties, but let's the one she was using hang out from from them like a rag, or flaccid cock. "I'm always game to talk to my favorite Inspector. "Penny, it's hood time."

Penny the roommate, squees, and jumps up onto her bed. "I like hood time, because it makes me a good girl!" She cheers.

"That's right." Brooke coos back, taking a latex hood out from a nearby drawer. She must have gotten it from the costume department after you had Chad put them back. She then popped in the a pair of earbuds into Penny, and laced up her hood, until she was dumb to all the world. When this apparent routine is complete she turns to you ever so casually and says, "What did you want to talk about?"

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"So, so many crimes." You respond looking Penny over. "Let's start with Penny. I've given you a week to explain yourself, but I still haven't heard a word from you on why you BRAINWASHED YOUR ROOMMATE."

Brooke waved the question away like it was trivial. "I only tried to brainwash her, she's the one who let it happen."

"How did you know she'd susceptible to it?" Someone had tried to get into your room the other night, and that had put you on edge. What if another student got the Rulebook and not you? They surely wouldn't be so responsible with it. You suspected Brooke might have peeked in it at some point and discovered that you'd made the students more docile while hooded. She's was already a thief, what was a little B and E to her?

"There was that study that came out, at the same time we were doing hoods. I was like, well this is perfect I'm going to give it a shot. It was crazy. I didn't actually think it would work, but now she's just as messed up as me, maybe more." You recognized the tone in her voice. You often spoke with it. That was the tone of a person ripping on power, getting off to the idea that they'd completely rewritten a person's sexuality. "She actually begs to smell my farts, I only put that in there as a joke! But now like, I have to do it, or else she pouts. Isn't that messed up?"

"You're a crass woman Brooke, but that's why I like you." You looked over at Penny sitting docile on her bed, happily allowing her brainwashing to be reinforced. Who knows what nasty perversions Brooke is teaching her right now? And for what? Because Brooke thinks they're hot. No. Only to humiliate and denigrate Penny further, drive her lusts even farther from acceptability. "I still don't think I can allow this to keep going."

"Well I think we should ask Penny if she wants to continue being my ****, if you're so worried about her."

You have a feeling you already know what she'd say. "Well then I'll ask you a question and we can put this issue on hold if you answer honestly. Did you try to get into my room at any point this week?"

"Um do you secretly wear women's underwear when you sleep, why would I do that?"

"Well you're a villain."

She shudders happily. "I'm so happy that you think that every bad thing that goes on in this school is because of me. I must really live in your head, huh Michael?"

"Brooke, I think about you all the time."

"Do you masturbate?"

"Obviously?"

"Is it my fat ass?"

"Aaand other things." you look down coyly.

"My feet? You little piggy! You should be my **** instead of Penny."

"No no not your feet." You lie. "Just your whole thing, it pleases me."

"Well this was all your idea, I should hope you're happy. But no, I haven't even been in the boys dorms. There are cameras you know."

Ah yes, what wonders those cameras much catch. "That's a good idea."

"I am an evil genius." Penny was proof enough of that.

"Brooke when are we going to fuck?"

"Excuse me?"

"It's inevitable, right? I mean, I feel like our sloppy bits are destined for one another. Every time I see you all I can think of is spreading those cheeks of yours."

She smiles, coyly. "When indeed. I'll admit that you've soaked more than a few panties, none of them mine of course. But sex, us? I've never really considered it."

"Wow I knew you were a villain, but I didn't know your crimes extended to the heart."

That makes her chuckle, so she slides down the side of Penny's beds, onto the carpet and slips her hand back into her panties. "But if there was some magnetism between, when would our opposed polarities meet? When I'm finally brought to justice? When there are no panties left to steal, and I am acknowledged as the smartest girl in school?" She pulls the sodden piece of fabric she'd been masturbating with out and holds it up limp. "However it's clear to me that you'll only know the pleasures this treasure here has seen, at the end of our little chase."

She's so weird! "Then I guess that's all the more reason for me to find a hero who will stop you."

"I love it when you're fired up like this." she goes back to masturbating. "A hero who'll put a stop to my dastardly deeds, I'd like to see that." She glances up at you. "Send your best."


I have a few things to say and ask

First of all, in this chapter we see Michael confronted with Brooke pretty much doing what he's been doing, and being disgusted by it, but immediately brushing it aside if it can advance his current goal. Which is all to say Michael is a piece of shit. I want to move this story to it's conclusion, but I have too many ideas!

You may have noticed a picture in the middle of this chapter, just experimenting a little with 3d modeling. I hid four more in previous chapters, good hunting. Let me know if those add value for you, or are just a waste of time!

Michael begins the search for a Super Hero to combat The Bottomless Bandit. Which of our girls should it be, and what should her theme/power be? I'm really curious to see what you guys come up with. I feel like snagging this role will seriously change their trajectory in the story... so anybody you want to save?

Ashley, Tabitha, Lacey, Lucy, Stella, Pricilla, Hannah, Mindy, Gale(lol), who could it be?

Finally Halloween will be in a few chapters, and it looks like its going to be a very intense costume contest, until a new idea blows me away!


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