Update on integrating your comments, wishes and ideas into the story

Hey folks. I think it's time for an update on how I've been processing and integrating the suggestions you (mainly) shared in the previous chapter.

First off:

God dude, I'm so proud to have received so many incredibly well-thought-out, heartfelt, and sometimes even funny ideas. I'm really trying my best to incorporate and edit everything as quickly as possible, but even if I don't manage it right away (fuck, some of this has been here for over a year!!!), you're still here reading my story.

Honestly. The comments and engagement from my readers are an incredible boost for me, and the best feeling is publishing a chapter and reading the comments.

Not just the congratulations, which always touch me deeply since I'm a pretty stressed-out guy going through a midlife crisis. But also, again and again, those little moments when I see that what I'm writing is really getting through to the readers, taking root, and truly inspiring one or two of them. That's a truly exhilarating feeling.

And now I think I've reached a point in the story where I can publish this chapter and share some good news. When I wrote the chapter outlining the paths I could potentially publish, I was hoping for exactly this kind of reaction from my readers, and now I can finally respond.

So. What did you wish for?

(I'm refraining from mentioning names because otherwise I'd have to write to so many amazing readers that the site would surely mark me as spam. But you know who I mean. Thank you.)

More E-Girls in the story

I can confidently say that MCD probably put me on the "E-girl gooner" path. Hannah Owo got me in, Alice Delish kept me in, and fuck, I want to include Ashe Maree! I draw a lot of models from the influencer/OnlyFans scene. There's nothing like incredibly beautiful girls whose **** of choice is attention whoring...

A path called "The puppeteer"

If I manage to pull it off, Puppeteer will feature three girls with different personalities, and Finn will be able to freely switch between them, controlling their personalities, kinks, and everything else. It shouldn't be too reminiscent of Sage and Sofia, since I still have big plans for them, but the idea of ​​controlling three girls is really sexy.

Often the antagonist is needles in the story

That was a big problem for me too, and I refrained from including it in Act I. In Act II, however, an antagonist is introduced, or something similar, who will give the story a direction. The Lynchwood Family has formed around Finn (and also Rose) as its core, and Lynchwood Home helps them. But the new antagonist will ensure that Finn has to master his role as Master of the MCD, and some newly introduced and not-yet-fully-flashed characters will suffer under the antagonist's influence. But don't worry. At its core, The MCD will still remain a feel-good, smutty love story with lots of cheese and good vibes.

Feel free to ask me about the fate of individual characters if you're worried. There are some among them that I hate myself for just thinking about giving them a bad day.

Talk to me, goose

Now that we've integrated Ryan into the story, he'll be appearing more often, and I've already received some super cool comments about him. The wingman will soon be seen in action, and I'm really looking forward to the club scene where he introduces Finn to some hot chicks. Thanks for the great inspo.

A path called "the pig"

Yes, I finally managed to implement this path, and the model for it will be revealed soon. Even sooner if you check out Ko-fi. I still need to flash it out, but I've prepared some potential paths and specializations starting from PS-100 to PS -50.

The Fat Pig: Obsessed with gaining weight but losing it again and again until it becomes almost an obsession with eating lots of food... and pussy... and ass... and cum.

The Price Pig: Good at finding money and valuables and storing them in her trashy lair for Finn. (On a different note: Yes, I know this trait has already appeared in other stories that I highly respect. But hey, it's super cool.)

Breeding Pig: Either very fast growth of the babies or very slow growth. The main thing is that Piggy is almost always heavily pregnant. Side note: Interesting what will happen to the kids when they turn 18...

Food Play Pig. Basically, a sloppy lifestyle with sloppy sex. I want her to fuck herself with a banana that she then eats. Or she fucks herself with a cucumber in her ass and a salami in her pussy. You know. Food stuff.

I also want to play with her senses. Especially her sense of smell. Getting cum crazy when she smells sperm sounds nice and would be potentially verry special i guess.

So, all in all, it's going to be a piggy path, 90% probability.

Feminization, cuckolding, and gender change.

Phew, this has become a fucking hot potato for me. My Gallipoli, so to speak. Basically a good idea, totally botched by my poor execution, and in the end, I'm too proud to abandon the whole thing. Call me Churchill if you want.

So.

There will definitely be AT LEAST ONE villain in the story to whom we can give AT LEAST ONE of these paths. It will be a dual path for him and his wife. Cuckolding will certainly be the staring point, given the age difference between her and Finn and the dynamics of the couple that Finn will break up. I like the woman a lot and want to treat her well, so I can do whatever I want with the man.

My idea is to start with cuckolding. First, the woman has an affair, but then it gets closer and closer to her family until she finally rebels against her husband, fucking Finn in front of him and so on. At the same time, the man is pushed further and further into his side of the path. Here are the three possibilities.

We could simply cuckold him. I'm fine with letting him stay at home while he knows she'll be furcked by a younger, stronger, and better man with a much, much bigger cock. SPH is what it's called, right? We could even go so far as him eating Finn's cum. As the author, I have no problem going to extremes here as long as Finn stays "clean." So cuckolding is totally fine for me.

Almost the same applies to feminization and gender change.

That would be more difficult for me since I have much less experience with it in my own reading and headspace at the moment and in the alst years of my writing. I'm planning a whole story about cuckolding and can gladly use my experience with The MCD here. The other two are still very new to me and therefore somewhat unfamiliar and wobbly. But I would certainly manage to try.

Gender change would be the easier one of the two funnily. I have a cool solution where Finn stays hetero and clean but we will see a lot of cool scenes with the feminine man. More on that idea later.

As for sex with the (now fully female) husband, I don't know yet. To be honest, I'm quite sure there will be no sex between Finn and a fully female, former male character. For that I have my otther idea so that I still could introduce him in this way.

With the husband in a feminized path it would be the same. Less contact with Finn and his girls and more on the Idea I will tell you about in the next point.

Basically, it boils down to the fact that we can explore all three scenarios. I personally prefer simple cockolding 60-70% of the time, but there will be other men in the story we can treat this way in the future. It's important to me to provide as many clear answers as possible to this complex and broad topic.

Again, feel free to contact me if you want more information.

Prostitution and sex with other males besides Finn.

Speaking of hot potatoes. Actually, The MCD was planned with the firm intention that Finn would let his girls have sex with other men. Rose was planned that way, and Lisa too. Well... I guess I've ruined that. Never in my life will I let anyone else get their hands on these two perfect girls!

As with feminization, gender change, and cuckolding, I've found the solution here too: outsourcing. I've introduced two characters (already known, but both not yet activated) who together have a path called something like "The Whore and the Pimp." Believe me, it's a great idea, and I hope I can sell it well without spoiling too much. (God, do I want to spoil this idea!)

With this idea, I get my way. There will be prostitution and sex with other men. Every activated woman will potentially have this possibility, including Rose and Lisa... ;) Remember that. Finn has girls in his harem who don't mind giving him lap dances in front of an audience or even tripping for him on stage to turn him on. With this, I've created a safe space for the girls and the reader (and me) where everything will always be in my (and therefore your) hands. Trust me on this. I'm sure I can make it work to your complete satisfaction.

Because you'll get your way too. You have more freedom with your desires regarding girls you want to protect (Lisa!!!), but you can also enjoy letting go and not having to worry if, let's say, Bella and Rose want to put on a lesbian show for Finn in front of an audience. Remember, I'm writing about some girls with fiery personalities.

And for both of us, Fortel's "The Whore and the Pimp" creates a safe space where we can also make things happen that couldn't happen in Lynchwood Home.

Trust me. I have a really good feeling about this, which concerns all of us. There won't be any compromise. Everyone will be satisfied. And believe me, Lisa is so fucking important to me, you wouldn't believe it. :)

The Bimbo and her bimbo body

Yes, I know what a bimbo girl is supposed to look like. But it just doesn't match the pictures I've chosen. :( That was actually the first and only time I had trouble with the images of a model and her path. I could use two models, a no-bimbo and a bimbo. But since Tana's transformation is gradual and I want to use images in almost every chapter, that's very difficult.

And besides, I'm a lover of wholesome, pure girls. I probably should have thought about that beforehand, eh?

So the solution is a bimbo only in spirit. That's what I had in mind from the beginning anyway, and it was the main reason for the Bimbo Path. Silly talking, like, with, like, only two silly... silly... two things with such words, you know? Like... Oh, forget it, and fuck me, master... okay?

That's how I like it. Make her squisshy and dumb and so, so happy. Bimbo in the head, hottie in the bed.

The MCD shop

I really need to incorporate that at some point. I'm currently working on integrating some sex toys. Mainly in the Ko-Fi chapters, but they'll also be unlocked in the regular story. I think the MCD shop can then grant these sex toys abilities. I'm still missing that certain something to make it truly appealing, to justify investing the time and not just letting them be ordinary sex toys, but you've already given me some good ideas. So it's on the list, but it doesn't seem that important yet.

I'm planning to use some of the toys in Finn College with the girls there. Tana, Lakota, and Susan, mostly. I think once they're introduced, we'll also integrate the MCD shop into the story.

Summary

These were all the comments I could find and answer satisfactorily. I hope I was able to convey to some readers that I remember them, even if it's sometimes been over a year since they wrote to me. But I want to make it very clear to those who have already placed their trust in me, and those who hopefully will in the future, that it's important to me to respect and fulfill my readers' wishes to the best of my knowledge and conscience. Respecting them is easy, fulfilling them is sometimes harder than I would like.

Of course, I have a vision for this story, Act II and soon, hopefully, Act III. Nothing that has been offered or requested to me so far has changed my vision, and I want to briefly address the concern of some readers who are wondering to what extent other influences affect my decisions. I can only give a mixed answer.

I won't let my vision be changed. I read the comments, for example, about Lisa, and I try to make it very clear what I personally think about each girl.

I would burn the world down for Lisa. Nothing bad will ever happen to her.

I hope I'm communicating clearly enough what I want to do with the story in the future: prostitution and a good pimp.

What can be changed, especially by the reader, is my approach. I'm taking the pimp out of Finn's resume and giving it to a different character that I can tailor precisely to my needs. It works so well that I can hardly wait to add another man to the story besides Ryan and Finn. But Finn won't change and will continue to make all his girls, the good ones and the bad ones, better people and protect them from all dangers.

When I receive suggestions and criticism, my goal is always to find the best of both worlds. I think that has worked well so far, and even if it doesn't seem like it, I'm stubborn enough to preserve what we've built together.

With that, I'll sign off for now and look forward to the next comments and questions you'll surely have.

Take care and fly safe.

Finn 0815