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Unraveled

Chapter 33 by drek drek

My blood turned to ice.

Every muscle in my body seized up like I'd been hit with a stun gun.

Jennifer fucking Whatley was leaning against the wall outside my apartment, looking like a gothic wet dream, and she had just called me by my full name.

She knew.

She fucking knew.

A thousand thoughts exploded in my skull simultaneously, crashing into each other like a freeway pileup.

How long had she been standing there?

Had she followed me home?

Had she been watching my building?

Did she know about the app?

Did she know about Sandy?

Was I about to go to jail?

Jennifer pushed herself off the wall with a slow, feline grace, her combat boots thudding softly on the hallway carpet.

She took one step toward me. Then another.

The leather choker around her throat caught the dim hallway light, the metal O-ring glinting like a predator's eye.

"You look like you've seen a ghost," she purred, tilting her head. "What's wrong, Ronnie? Cat got your tongue?"

My mouth opened. Nothing came out.

Not a word. Not a syllable. Not even a pathetic little squeak.

I was completely, utterly paralyzed.

She stopped inches from me, close enough that I could smell her perfume.

…Something dark and musky, like incense and pain.

"Did you really think," she whispered, her red lips curling into a devastatingly smug grin, "that I wouldn't check your wallet while you were knocked out cold on that alley floor?"

My stomach dropped through the earth.

Of course.

Of fucking course.

When Damian's fist sent me to dreamland, my unconscious body was right there.

Pockets full of identification.

Driver's license.

Debit card.

Library card, for fuck's sake.

She had all the time in the world to rummage through my jeans while I was drooling on the asphalt.

"And I told you it was my turn. Surprise," she continued, her voice dripping with dark satisfaction.

She spread her arms wide, presenting herself like a gift I never asked for but desperately wanted to unwrap.

I still couldn't speak.

My jaw just hung there, useless, while my brain ran damage-control simulations at maximum speed.

Jennifer seemed to enjoy every excruciating second of my crisis.

"Aw man. That face was worth the wait," she said, reaching out to pat my cheek with her black-nailed fingers. "Almost cute. Like a little bunny in headlights."

Then, without waiting for an invitation, without even the pretense of asking permission, she stepped past me and walked straight into my apartment.

I spun around, watching her stride into my living space like she owned the deed.

She stopped in the center of the room.

Her eyes swept across the catastrophe that was my home.

The piles of garbage I had half-collected and then abandoned. The crusty dishes in the sink. The laundry pile that had achieved sentience. The sticky desk covered in energy drink rings and instant noodle residue. The mold creeping up the bathroom door frame.

Her nose wrinkled. Her upper lip curled.

"Jesus Christ," she muttered, prodding a suspicious stain on the carpet with the toe of her boot.

She turned back to me, her expression caught somewhere between disgust and pity.

"Well," she sighed heavily, folding her arms beneath her magnificent, corset-pushed tits. "I guess some mysteries aren't meant to be unraveled."

The words hit like a gut punch.

This is what I had been terrified of.

This is exactly why I never wanted her here.

Because seeing the real Ron Stuckey, the actual, pathetic, garbage-dwelling creature behind the dominant mask... it would destroy whatever fantasy she had built around me.

But that wasn't even my biggest problem right now.

My mind was spiraling into a full-blown strategic crisis.

Jennifer knew my name. She knew where I lived.

If I deleted her profile now... what happened?

Would the app's influence just evaporate? Would all those weeks of corruption and obedience training just vanish like a dream she couldn't remember?

Or would she retain some of it? Fragments? Feelings?

And if she suddenly snapped back to her original self... if all of her natural emotions and logic flooded back in...

She would remember everything.

The tit-slapping in the woods. The public fingering in the coffee shop. The raw fuck against the bathroom sink.

She would remember all of it, and she would realize that none of it was natural. That something had been done to her.

And she would know exactly where to find the guy who did it.

I couldn't hide anymore.

This had to end. Now. Tonight.

I had to delete her profile. Rip off the bandage and deal with the consequences.

I reached into my pocket, my hand closing around my phone.

I pulled it out with trembling fingers, unlocking the screen, swiping to the app.

Jennifer's profile loaded instantly.

And my heart stopped.

An event… was active.

The glowing banner pulsed on the screen.


JENNIFER WHATLEY

OBEDIENCE EVENT 3 - ACTIVE


I stared at it, my brain short-circuiting.

O-Obedience 3?

But, wait, that was supposed to be last Sunday!

I had deliberately skipped it. I never went to the venue. I let it pass.

Why was it active now? Here? In my apartment?

Did something change? Was it because of something I did?

Or did the app just do whatever it wanted?

Fuck, were some of these events unavoidable?

I should end the event. I should tap "Exit" and then delete her entire profile.

I should do the right thing for once in my miserable, selfish life.

My thumb hovered over the exit button.

Before I could press it, a hand shot into my field of vision like a striking cobra.

Jennifer's fingers clamped around my phone and ripped it from my grip with violent, startling force.

"Hey!" I yelped, reaching for it.

But she was already winding up her arm. With a flick of her wrist, she hurled my phone across the room.

It sailed through the air in a lazy arc, bounced off the arm of my gaming chair, and skittered across the floor, disappearing somewhere behind a pile of dirty clothes in the corner.

I stared at the spot where it vanished, my mouth hanging open in disbelief.

"Pay attention," Jennifer commanded, snapping her fingers in front of my face. "When a gorgeous woman is talking to you... you look at her. Not your little phone."

Her eyes were blazing with intensity, her jaw set hard.

"Especially," she added, stepping closer, her corset-crushed tits nearly brushing my chest, "when she is so far above your weight class that you should be thanking whatever sad little god you pray to that she's even standing in your shithole apartment."

Something snapped inside me.

The paralysis broke, replaced by a hot, sudden wave of anger.

"What the fuck is wrong with you?!" I shouted, my voice cracking with genuine fury. "You could have broken it! Do you have any idea how much that phone costs? Are you actually fucking crazy?!"

Jennifer's eyes widened for a split second.

Then her hand moved.

SLAP.

Her palm connected with my cheek, hard, fast, and vicious.

My head snapped sideways. Stars exploded across my vision.

The same cheek Damian had punched. The bruise that was still healing.

Fresh, searing pain bloomed across my face like napalm.

I stumbled backward, my hand flying to my stinging cheek, staring at her in pure, unfiltered shock.

She had hit me.

She had actually, physically hit me.

The bitch.

This wasn't playful. This wasn't flirty banter or sarcastic teasing.

This woman had genuine violence in her.

Something was seriously, fundamentally wrong with her.

Something that existed long before I ever pointed a magical app at her life.

"You crazy bitch," I breathed, my voice low and trembling.

Jennifer laughed.

A bright, sharp, musical laugh that bounced off the grimy walls of my apartment.

"Oh please," she grinned, flexing her slapping hand. "What's a sad, pathetic little nerd gonna do about it?"

Her eyes glittered with challenge. With hunger.

She was daring me.

She raised her other hand, winding up for another strike.

Her palm flew toward my face.

But, this time… I caught it.

My fingers closed around her wrist like a vice, stopping her hand dead in mid-air, inches from my throbbing cheek.

The effect was instantaneous.

Jennifer stopped breathing.

Her entire body went rigid, locked in place like a statue.

Her eyes, wide and electric, stared at my hand gripping her wrist.

I could feel it.

The shift.

Her pupils dilated so wide her blue eyes nearly turned black.

Her lips parted, a shaky, involuntary exhale escaping through them.

Her pulse hammered wildly against my fingertips.

I tightened my grip.

She whimpered.

A soft, desperate, needy little sound that went straight to my cock.

I didn't think. I just moved.

I shoved her backward with both hands, driving her across the narrow room.

Her calves hit the edge of my unmade bed, and she toppled backward onto the mattress with a sharp gasp, her dark hair fanning out across my grimy pillow.

I was on top of her before she could recover, my weight pinning her down, my face inches from hers.

Her free hand whipped up, nails aimed at my face.

I caught that wrist too, slamming it down against the mattress beside her head.

Both of her arms were now pinned, her body trapped beneath mine.

I could feel everything.

It was like we were in that forest again.

The rapid rise and fall of her massive tits against my chest. The heat of her bare thighs where her miniskirt had ridden up. The leather of her choker pressing against my collarbone.

And between her legs... through the thin fabric of whatever she was wearing down there, and through my jeans... I could feel it.

Heat.

Intense, radiating, unmistakable heat.

And moisture. Spreading dampness, soaking through, advertising her arousal like a neon sign.

Her breathing was ragged now. Fast. Almost hyperventilating.

Her body was responding to this with every fiber of its being.

"This is what you really want, isn't it?" I growled, my face hovering over hers.

Something flickered in her eyes. The old Jennifer, the sarcastic shield, trying to mount one last defense.

"Oh wow, what a line, did you rehearse that in the mirr-"

"Shut up," I commanded.

Low. Hard. Final.

The words cut through the room like a blade.

Jennifer's mouth closed instantly.

Her jaw clenched. Her throat bobbed as she swallowed hard.

But she stayed quiet.

Not a single word. Not a single sarcastic quip.

Just her wild, dark eyes staring up at me, her chest heaving, her cunt radiating wet heat against my thigh.

She was waiting.

Waiting for me to take control.

And I would.

I looked around the room without releasing her wrists.

Computer cords. Charging cables. Old USB cords. They were everywhere, tangled in messy coils across my desk and floor like the discarded entrails of dead electronics.

I reached sideways with one hand, keeping her pinned with my body weight, and grabbed a thick power cord from the floor.

Jennifer's eyes tracked my hand, watching me loop the cord around her left wrist.

She struggled.

Sort of.

It was the most performative resistance I had ever seen. A half-hearted tug here, a dramatic twist there.

Like a soap opera actress pretending to fight off a villain while secretly hoping he'd rip her dress off.

I knotted her left wrist to the metal frame of my cheap bedpost.

Then her right, using a USB cable.

She kicked her legs, her combat boots thudding against the mattress.

I grabbed her ankles one at a time, wrapping charging cables around each one, spreading her legs and tying them to the lower posts.

She bucked and writhed, her miniskirt bunching up around her waist, exposing the soaked, dark triangle of her panties.

I stepped back, breathing hard, and looked at what I'd created.

Jennifer Whatley.

Tied spread-eagle to my bed with computer cables.

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Her corset pushing her massive, pale tits up like offerings to the gods. Her plaid miniskirt hiked to her waist. Her ripped fishnets stretched taut across her splayed thighs. Her soaked black panties clinging to her swollen pussy like a second skin, the dark wet patch spreading visibly.

The leather choker with the metal O-ring framing her flushed, beautiful face.

Her smoky eyes, wild and glazed with raw, desperate need, staring up at me.

Waiting.

I stood at the foot of my own bed, my cock straining painfully against my jeans, staring at the most beautiful, most fucked-up woman I had ever encountered.

Then my eyes drifted to the corner of the room.

My phone.

Somewhere behind that pile of dirty laundry.

The app. The event. The exit button.

I could still end this.

I could untie her, delete her profile, and send her home.

Let her snap back to normal. Let her go back to Damian, or find someone new.

Someone who actually loved her.

Someone who wasn't using a magical cheat code to rewire her brain for his own sick pleasure.

That would be the right thing to do.

The decent, human thing.

…

I couldn't rationalize it anymore.

If I went through with this... if I fucked this tied-up, dripping, desperate woman who was begging me with her eyes to ruin her completely...

It wouldn't be strategy. It wouldn't be practice. It wouldn't be a mercy fuck or a goodbye fuck or any other bullshit label I slapped on it to sleep at night.

It would just be an act of pure, depraved, selfish lust.

Nothing more. Nothing less.

Jennifer squirmed against the cables, her heavy tits jiggling inside her corset, a thin, desperate whine escaping her throat.

I stared at her.

I stared at the phone.


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