Chapter 63
by FINN 0815
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Two questions, two polls. SPOLERS for Tana and Lakota. Model and Path.
Okay, I need your help again. I mean, hey, I like presenting you with polls, which is really the only reason I'm posting this extra chapter...
But seriously. For a few weeks now, I've been pondering whether to change Tana Hinata's model.
Firstly, because I only found one photo of her and, as is often the case with me, I underestimated how popular and successful Mind Control Device would be, and secondly, as is usual with me, I find the model's eyes very attractive. I mean... come on.. she is really cute.
And then I found Emiru.
She's, God, I don't know... A streamer? An e-girl? Who had the idea that I should write a story about such girls? In any case, the plan was for a poll to see if I should convert Tana's model to Emiru, like I already did with Tammy and Staryuuki...
But by god, she's cute.
And Emiru has more pictures I can draw from, and she seems verry nice. Nice enough that I want to use her on the path I've planned for Tana.
SPOILER FOR Tana'S PATH:
Tana, the best in class and valedictorian, would naturally become the bimbo. I'm sure both models could lead a nice and happy life with Finn.
My current problem: I found more pictures of Tana's original model today, about half an fucking hour ago!
And a FEW / NOT TOO MANY more.
So now, you can decide who I should use as Tana's Model. I would handle it like I did with Tammy. The new model would be the default throughout the story, and I would swap out the images if you chose Emiru. The other model (whose name I don't know but I'm pretty sure she's Japanese) would then still appear with Tammy in the chapter on changed characters.
Basically, I think it's a physical decision. Emiro naturally looks like a star physically. (My opinion). And I also realized that I have a kink for those weird smokey eyes or whatever you call the makeup that so many of the girls here have.
The other, almost certainly Japanese model has... well... bigger... arguments when it comes to... tits. And I've heard guys like big tits.
As for the bimbo, because of the photos, I'll probably focus mostly on the model's mental transformation, so I can continue to use the images.
My personal favorite is actually Emiru, mainly because I've been focusing on her for the past two weeks in planning. And because (yes, that's a thing) I like smaller breasts. ;) And her eyes... And... well...
But in the end, both girls are perfect for the role of Tana. The original model for Tana was one of the first where I knew I could write dozens of chapters with/about her without getting tired of her. So it's completly up to you.
So? Tana, old model, or Emiru?
The poll will stay online for a while.
https://strawpoll.com/1MnwkW5bdn7
And now to my second question and SPOILER for Lakota:
I mean, Lakota? It's not like I hide my girls' paths well. Lakota was originally supposed to be the Indian / Native American.
My plan was to have her lead a group of girls with similar skin color (I'd have to find photos for that, but that's rather easy) and after that... I'm not sure what I'm going to do with her. I'm planning for her to come to the aid of Finn and his harem with her own clan of submissive girls. For this I would also use some AI images, a method I am actually skeptical about.
But there's also the possibility of making Lakota a human pig. I was actually planning on using Diana Ryder for that, but I think it works with Zendaya, too.
Maybe even better, since as a Hollywood actress, she naturally leaves a sophisticated impression in the reader's mind.
The thing is, I can do much more with the human pig path right now, at this moment, than if I were to make her a Native American. It would fit better with the chapter I'm going to write about Tana and the other college girls, and I know where their journey would lead. Namely, closer to Finn instead of building her own tribe.
What would speak against this, however, and it pains me to say, is that as an author, my hands are tied with the pig path. With what I can write, it would be really close to other stories that also have this thread, and I don't want to step on anyone's toes or be accused of plagiarism. I don't think I'll be attacked here on CHYOA; there are too many nice guys here for that, but of course, the realization would be there if I made Lakota a pig.
MORE SPOILERS FOR Lakota'S PATH:
I would focus on the characteristics of pigs with her, but also let her live in her own filth. We know the latter from other stories, and I'd love to write about it, as well as the effects it would have on her psyche. I personally haven't seen the former on CHYOA yet. I'd emphasize her sense of smell and take a similar path with her as with Rania. This would allow Finn to use Lakota to his own advantage and help her avoid getting lost in her path, which will naturally frighten her.
So I'll leave two decisions up to you.
Should Lakota become an Indian or a pig?
https://strawpoll.com/poy9keVY3gJ
And should I change Lakota's Model from Zendaya (surprisingly few pictures online, need to incorporate AI pictures, no dues besides AI) to Diana Ryer (lot's of pics, naked ones, no need for AI)?
Heh. It comes down to ebony or redheaded, I guess.
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