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Chapter 12 by Felixfalck Felixfalck

What did the guys propose she change?

Too much

Travis went ahead first with an idea. "You're a bangn' babe fer sure, but yer also a bit of a chubster, not gonna lie. I'd make you more petite, y'know?". This struck a cord with Bubba who instantly jumped on the train with his own proposal. "For sure could use to lose that belly flab, maybe help out your face too! But bitches like you need they' ass. Can't have you walkin' 'round with a washboard ass. For sure you could improve it in photoshop, maybe make it a bit bigger too? Send us the pictures too!". Lisa mentally rolled her eyes at Bubba's last comment. Of course they'd want pictures. If they did want them they could subscribe to her only fans like all her other simps.

Next up was Bret, it was clear as day when he made an effort to step even closer than what he already was. He clearly had something quite special on his mind. "All these guys, they're uncultured. They don't get folks like you n' me. It's all about the body. Nah, not for me. It's the mind, it's always about the mind. And I for one think you have a bangin' hot mind. But nothing is ever perfect.." "Jeez, is this guy a poet or what, just get to the damn point" Lisa was getting fed up faking enthusiasm for what these sleazebags thought of her. "That's why I'd change your loyalty. No one person should own you and you can turn none down. You should be so submissive and horny that you'll do anything for anyone at any time".

Jim was still sitting across his girlfriend on a bench as he listened in on the conversation. When he heard Bret's idea his eyes went wide with horror. What Lisa thought was a relatively harmless request from her boyfriend was actually so much more. When he'd submitted her most recent change he'd received a notification shortly afterwards. He dismissed it at the time and went on with the day, focusing on trying to come up with depraved activities for his girlfriend to do. As she sat and fucked herself in the bay window earlier the same day he'd checked his phone and found that the notification was in fact from the app. The message he'd received went something along the lines of treatment complete, one final "Event" and that Jim could set the conditions for said event. Right before they left for their little walk he had submitted a very specific scenario.

"The next exchange Lisa has regarding what she should change about herself will count as my final submission". Very simple, but very very dangerous. Especially given how an "exchange" could be counted as an entire dialogue between several people. Meaning anything the men proposed in the timeframe would count towards her new life.
Jim would've realized just how dumb this submission was had he thought with the right head. Now he'd finally understood just how stupid he'd actually been. Jim stood up and began storming towards Lisa and the four men. No way was Otis gonna get to ruin her even more. Even with Bret's proposal for her to lose her loyalty to Jim, it might still be salvageable, she hated going outside anyways. He'd just have to make sure that she didn't meet anyone who could request sexual favors of any sort. Yes! That's pretty much how she lived already, right? They could overcome this, they had to!

As Jim came darting towards the five Otis mouthed the last and final change that Lisa would undergo.
"I agree with Bret on this one actually. But a girls gotta live too, right? Quid go pro, squid fo sho'? Whatever the fuck it is it's not wrong for someone to ask for something in return. You should charge for it, that's just fair, yea? Nothing to be ashamed of".

Jim felt as though he'd tripped. Like he was falling down into a bottomless hole. Time stopped completely and let him despair for what felt like an eternity when suddenly he fell back into himself. As he reached Lisa the whole picture had changed. No longer was the chubby little goth slut assfucking herself on a dildo. Now she was on Bubba's lap, giving him the fuck of his life as she blew Otis whilst also jerking off Travis and Bret with either hand. She also seemed skinnier? Not healthy skinny though. No, her ribs were clearly showing through the same attire she'd dressed in earlier today. Her breasts were basically gone too, mosquito bites as one might describe them. She did seem to be more endowed in the ass department though, rocking a very clear pearshape now.

"Sup dude, you want in? She's pretty stuffed, but her asshole is open, we payed a fifty' for her. You get in for 10$, deal?" Travis was actually cut off by Lisa who removed Otis' cock from her plump lips for just a moment. "No way! A guy like that has the cash to pay. I charge extra for anal anyways. It's gonna be at least another fifty'". For just a moment Jim's world collapsed. Just a moment. For some reason he'd felt a ..connection to this whore? This nasty slut with depraved tattoos and piercings. Had she been standing with her ass facing Jim he would've seen exactly what she was. Written just under her asscheeks were the words "Public Servant" tattooed on either leg. There was no way that Jim would be remotely associated with anyone like this. Not even any of his friends would entertain the thought of fucking a cheap nympho like that. Especially not in public.

Disgusted by the whore and her patrons Jim headed back towards his dorm. Maybe he should hit up the bar and look for an easy lay. It was either that or jerking it to some random slut's only fans. He'd be lying if he said he wasn't the slightest bit turned on by the goth, though. He made a mental note to try and find her later on if his love life didn't work out or if he was just really down bad. If he dressed like trash he might get her for cheap. Not that her prices were that steep to begin with. Walking away he could hear her moans as the prostitute finally climaxed loudly without a shred of dignity or shame. He might just have to find someone who looked like her when he wanted to jerk it..

The end


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