Does anything drastic happen as she's gathering her stuff?
This is Mackenzie we're talking about here
Mackenzie was juuust about finished scooping up all of her stuff when she spotted one last tube of lip gloss sitting just inside the door to one of the toilet stalls. Other than that one last thing, all other contents of her purse were back home in the small purse slung over her shoulder.
Mackenzie grimaced a little at the lip gloss being so close to the toilets, but the bathroom was pretty much the cleanest, fanciest, and most well maintained she'd ever seen, AND the tube had a cap on it, so it didn't give her too much pause.
Taking her eyes off the door for the first time since leaving the shower, Mackenzie stepped just inside the stall and, making sure to bend at the knees, picked up the last of her dropped belongings and placed it in the purse with the rest of her stuff.
Just as she was standing up, the boat suddenly teetered more than she expected. This caused Mackenzie to almost fall backwards onto the ground, facing away from the door. She grabbed the toilet stall walls at the last second to keep from falling, but just at that moment another loud bang could be heard behind her.
Mackenzie yelped. It was the bathroom door.
Someone's here! she screamed inside her head.
Mackenzie whipped around to see who it was, making sure to hold the top of her towel tightly shut. She didn't want the knot of her towel coming undone with the quick movement, but she had to see who entered the room!
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