The Rematch Fic: Bad End Intermission - Talia

Writer's note: This is an intermission before chapter 5. Taken from Talia's Point of View.

“Checkmate, bitch,” I said, bashing my forehead into his nose. Evan had no chance to react, the force of the impact knocking the headset clean off him onto the floor. He recoiled from the strike, hands over his face. I rushed past him and put the headset on.

“All units, sleep!” I yelled my command into the mic. Instantly, all the bodies pressing down on Nathan fell limp. By now, Evan had gotten his bearings back, the shock on his face replaced with murderous fury as blood poured from his broken nose. He took a step towards me, only to glance to his right at the last possible minute. Nathan had freed himself from the pile of women and rushed toward Evan. Evan looked fearful and shocked. He was about to say something, but Nathan, in all his rage, delivered a violent punch into the bastard's cheek that sent him flying back onto the ground.

Nathan didn’t hold back. Before Evan could regain his foothold, Nathan delivered another flurry of punches and kicks onto his prone body.

Evan was wailing. He tried to block Nathan's blows with his arms at first, but he quickly lost the strength to defend himself. I could hear the sound of bone cracking. Evan probably got a bone or two broken from Nathan’s furious strike.

Nathan’s furious strike was justified, but the more he hit Evan, I felt some horror rising in my chest. I grew more fearful of Nathan. Evan was already a tangled, bloody heap on the ground. Is he even still alive?

“Nate, stop! You will murder him!” I yelled.

Nate stopped. He looked at me with anger. His hands were full of blood from beating Evan.

“So what if he dies? Why are you stopping me? Are you still in Evan’s control?”

I looked at him with disbelief. “No, I’m not. I am not under anyone's control. If I’m under his control, why do I help you take him down? ”

Nate still looked at me with suspicion. Really? Did he not believe me?

“Hand me the control headset, and I will believe you,” Nate ordered.

Should I give it to him? He doesn’t seem to be in the right state of mind.

“Why are you hesitating?”

“Fine.” I believed that Nate was a responsible guy. He wouldn’t abuse the power of the control chip. I then slid the headset toward him.

Nathan took the headset and wore them over his head. He sneered.

“All units, wake up and follow my command,” Nathan commanded.

The unconscious group of women regained their consciousness.

“Apprehend Talia, don’t let her escape.”

The command took me by surprise, Nathan’s mother and sister suddenly holding my left and right arms. And then, other girls began to surround me, leaving me no room to escape.

“Nate, what do you mean by this?” I shouted in protest.

“Alright, bitches, worship me like you worship Evan. Let Talia know who your Master is now. Give praise!” Nathan gave those mind-controlled women another command.

“ALL HAIL MASTER NATHAN!!!! YOU ARE THE WINNER! WE BITCHES BELONG TO YOU!”

“ALL HAIL MASTER NATHAN!!!! YOU ARE THE WINNER! WE BITCHES BELONG TO YOU!”

…

The choir of praise was deafening, especially because of how closely they shouted to me.

“Ok, you bitches can stop. Abby, Denise, and Dr. Mallory, move toward me. The rest of you wait your turn, keep Talia restrained, but don’t obstruct her view toward me.”

The group of women that surrounds me splits like a sea being split by Moses. Of course, despite that I was no longer surrounded, I was still restrained. These controlled women stood standing beside me and behind me, just like a chess formation. Meanwhile, Abby, Denise, and Dr. Mallory moved toward Nathan.

“Abby, Denise, I see you two sluts were so passionate when you suck Evan’s cock, so suck my cock like your life depends on it.”

“Yes, Master Nathan,” the two girls said simultaneously.

“Dr. Mallory, do a sexy strip dance for me.”

“As you wish, Master Nathan,” Dr. Mallory replied. She then started to dance. The once conservative teacher danced sexually like a stripper as best as she could.

Meanwhile, Abby and Denise were kneeling before Nathan; they had unbuckled Nathan’s pants and pulled them down. His cock was rock hard. Abby and Denise began to clean his cock. Abby on the left and Denise on the right. The two licked the shaft together from their side. After thoroughly cleaning his shaft, it was Abby who was the first to take Nathan’s cock into her mouth. Her head bobbed back and forth. After a few moments, Abby stopped and pulled her head back, releasing Nathan’s cock from her mouth. Denise quickly took Nathan’s cock in Abby's place. The two took turns to suck his cock.

I looked at Dr. Mallory again. She finally finished stripping down all her clothing. She was already naked, but Dr. Mallory didn’t stop dancing. She even did a twerk; if the one who did it was the stacked Ms. Holbrook, it would be extra sexy, but Dr. Mallory’s body figure was just average.

“Come closer, Dr. Mallory.” Nathan stopped Dr. Mallory's performance and issued another order.

After Dr. Mallory arrived beside him, Nathan’s hand quickly fondled her boobs. He squeezed her boobs hard.

“It’s boring if you don’t make any response, so I want you to moan in pleasure when I yank your nipples.”

Nathan then pulled Dr. Mallory’s nipples as much as he could. His bloodied finger gave the illusion that Nathan had harmed Dr. Mallory. Dr. Mallory moaned in pleasure, but her expression showed that she was in pain.

“Stop it, Nate. I don’t know that you are this kind of perverse person. Abby and Denise are our friends, and Dr. Mallory is our caring adviser. And you command them as if they are sluts, ” I said to Nathan.

Nathan sneered, “Because they are slut. Evan turned them into a slut. I just use them as they are.”

“I was wrong about you. You aren’t different from Evans, Nate. A scumbag”

Nathan’s expression sharpened. He stopped playing with Dr. Mallory’s tits and told Abby and Denise to stop sucking his cock. Nathan then moved and stopped before me.

“Tell me, Tal. How do you break free from the chip’s control?”

“Why should I tell you?”

“Don’t you want to save them? To save our friend and professor, I need to know how you do it.”

Should I tell him? His sudden behavior change was suspicious. He just controlled Abby, Denise, and Dr. Mallory to satisfy his perverse desire, and then he talked about saving them.

“You can just release me, and I can try to free them,” I chose not to tell him how I broke free.

Nathan let out a sigh. “Talia, I love you, but why are you so disobedient? I can’t have peace in my mind if you aren’t under my control. What if Evan somehow controls you?”

The man suddenly choked my neck with his two hands. “So, tell me, you bitch, tell me how you break free, and tell me how I can restore the control!”

“No…I won’t tell you…” I said weakly.

“So, you choose death. I would rather have you die than be controlled by Evan.”

This fucking psychopath! All men really were the same jerkass. His grip became tighter, and it became harder for me to breathe. I couldn’t even struggle to break free.

I was helping him to win, but this is what I got. I just smiled wryly in the end. Stupid Talia. I could feel my consciousness fading as my oxygen intake was cut. And then, everything went black.

Where am I? Wasn’t I dead because Nathan choked me to death? This doesn’t look like heaven.

I looked around, and I found myself inside an unfamiliar laboratory room.

“Are you awake, fucking bitch?”

I turned around to the source of the voice. The voice belonged to Evan. He was on the other side of the room behind the mirror.

“...Evan?”

“Did you enjoy your sweet dream?”

Sweet dream? No, that was a nightmare, but it felt so real. My hand moved to caress my neck. I could still remember that Nathan choked me tightly to the point of asphyxiation.

“Do you feel that your dream seems to be too real?” Evan asked.

I nodded.

Evan had a predatory smile on his face. “Well, our company has fixed your rogue modification. Thanks to you, we added extra security and features. The experiment was a success.”

I remembered it now. Nathan didn’t win; well, he won, but Master Evan pulled a trick in the end. I was rebelling against Master Evan. I headbutted him and took the control headset from him. I tried to take control of the controlled women, but the system had a failsafe that prevented me from taking control of those chipped women. Master Evan then took control of me.

Shit. Why the fuck did I feel relieved that Master Evan took control of me? And I just realized, I have been thinking of him as Master Evan instead of the scu…I couldn’t even call him that. It must be the chip doing.

I glared at Master Evan.

“Oh, scary, it seems you still had the fighting spirit in you. Try thinking about Nathan.”

Thinking about Nathan made my body shudder in horror. My mind replayed the moment Nathan choked me to death. It was only an imagination, but I suddenly hyperventilated like Nathan was choking me right now.

“Ok, enough.”

Like a switch being turned off. The illusion of Nathan choking me to death vanished, and I could breathe normally.

“Remove the chip from me, or I will tell the police!”

Considering I was still myself, and not a hypersexual parody of myself, maybe Master Evan had a hard time taking me fully under his control like others. This could be my bargaining chip.

“The chip has been removed; just try to touch your nape.”

I touched my nape. Nothing. There was no small bump that was the chip. But how did he control me without the chip?

“You must be wondering why you are still under my control even after the chip is gone? We indeed removed the chip from your nape. But I said that it now comes with extra security and added features. The chip is now planted inside you. It’s less practical but more secure; now, not a random person like you would be able to tinker with the chip. Nobody will figure out that I am controlling you.”

So, that's the reason I woke up in their laboratory.

Evan's smile became more sinister. “You must be thinking that because you still feel like yourself, that maybe there's something wrong with the chip. Sorry for dashing that hope, bitch. It’s just me trying some new features. Something like this.”

Evan seemed to press something, and an overwhelming desire washed over me. Master Evan was more important than my life. Master Evan was my entire world.

“ALL HAIL MASTER EVAN! MY LORD!” I shouted on top of my lungs to worship him.

And then the desire vanished, and I turned back to my old self. I still remember what I did before. How I worshiped him. I felt like there were butterflies in my stomach. Was it stress from disgust or excitement from pleasure? I didn’t know. The feeling was complicated.

“How do you feel?” Evan asked me.

I didn’t answer him and just glared at him with hostility. I was afraid that if I answered him, I would incidentally tell him it felt good.

“Well, whatever. The test was done; time to put you back in the passenger seat. Anyway, I would let you go back to your family first. We need to take care of your parent after all. I don’t want them to make a ruckus with what I’m going to do to you. You will put the chip on them, and I will handle the rest.”

“No, not my parent. Please, don’t involve them.” I begged the man.

But the feeling of dread, the bad feeling of harming my parents, was suddenly gone. And instead of being afraid of harming my parents, I was more afraid that I would betray Master Evan.

“So, will you do as I’m commanded, slut.”

I belong to Master Evan. I was devoted to him. I was Master Evan’s slut.

“As you command, Master Evan. I will chip my parents.”

It’s been two days since I chipped my parents. The situation in my home was significantly different. There was no longer the warm family bonding I knew. My parents no longer cared about me. Master Evan turned my mother into a slutty, horny cougar. He had fuck her while my father watched. Of course, my father didn’t mind that Master Evan fuck my mother. He’s a cuckold now. After Master Evan was done with her. He commanded my mother to invite a young man into the house regularly to fuck her nasty, MILF pussy. She should no longer care about anything aside from sex and being sexy,

I was sad for a moment that Master Evan ruined my parents, but this was my punishment for trying to harm Master Evan before. I deserved it. And talking about punishment, my punishment hadn’t ended yet. Master Evan commanded me to make a video for Nate. Thinking about Nate never failed to make my body shudder in terror; thankfully, Master Evan was the winner and took me under his control instead of Nathan.

I entered my room and prepared what I needed for the video. Electric shear, cheerleader costume, pompoms, makeup.

“Hello, everybody. Friends and family, especially you, Nate, I want you to watch this video.” I greeted the invisible audience cheerfully. I realized I was naked.

Fuck. Evan seemed to give me back my mind, but not my body. I was aware of what my body did, but couldn’t control what my body did and said. I was just a passenger watching my body being controlled by Evan’s command.

“Master Evan said that I have committed an unforgivable crime against him: hurting him and ultimately resisting him by being on Nathan’s side. So, Master Evan wanted me to make this video as proof that I sincerely feel guilty. It would be a series of videos, a transformative journey about me from being a normal girl into a freak of nature. Master Evan said that he might sell me to a bizarre circus or freak show at the end.” My mouth said these words like there was nothing wrong with it.

“I don’t want to be bald, but Master Evan wanted it.”

Stop! Please stop! But the ‘Talia’ that was in control of my body seemed not to hear my plea. She picked up an electric shear and ran it on our head, hacking all our hair until only a short buzz on our scalp was left.

‘She’ finally put down her shears after there was no more long hair in my head. Next, ‘she’ picked up a lipstick and applied it to our lips in a messy way beyond our lips. I looked ridiculous,

“Nate, Master Evan had arranged some surgery for me. He wants you to guess whether I will undergo lip surgery to make my lips a slit mouth as wide as the lipstick that I have applied now. I will look monstrous for sure if that happens.”

Wait, fuck, don’t tell me that Evan would go that extreme.

After applying the messy makeup, ‘she’ put on a costume. It was the modified cheerleader uniform with Evan’s initials that the pawn used. ‘She’ also picked the pompom. And then ‘she’ began to do a cheer dance routine alone.

“EVAN, EVAN, HE’S THE MAN!! HE’S THE WINNER!!”
“EVAN, EVAN, HE’S MY GOD!! I WORSHIP HIS MASSIVE ROD!!”
“NATHAN, NATHAN, YOU ARE A SORE LOSER!”
“EVAN GOT EVERYTHING, NATHAN GOT NOTHING!

After a minute of cheering, the body finally stopped.

“Oops, I need to get going now, don’t want to be late for my surgery. Nate, you should ask our friend if you want to see the continuation of this video. Bye-bye, loser!” ‘She’ chuckled and gave the middle finger to the camera.

The recording finally finished. The video would be sent to Nathan later. I wonder how he would feel. Would Nathan behave psychopathically like in the nightmare that Master Evan showed me? Would he be sad? Or would he be turned on like my cuck dad watching my mother being fucked by Master Evan?

To be continued.

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