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Chapter 6 by WilltheBoatmaster WilltheBoatmaster

It was...

The Most Evil Sin (Hourglass Expansion)

"..free of that disgusting form, faceless and without features. By my mother sideways it is unbecoming of me to appear so miniscule, so plain, so ethereal. Now mortal, you shall now know my true name: PRIDE!"

At the shout, Eve felt she needed to immediately grovel at bow down to the being in front of her. It was the voice of who demanded servitude, respect, and awe, mostly in that order. Her appearance also gave weight to her voice. PRIDE towered over Eve at nine feet tall, and had vibrant purple skin. Her hair and eyes were also a purple but of lighter hues. It was her figure that was most eye-catching. It was an exaggerated hourglass, with both breasts and butt cheeks the size of beach balls, and hips as wide as a door. Behind her, just above her butt, a beautiful peacock tail spread out. Covering all of this meat was a golden dress, a light purple coat and boa. Striding alongside this massive woman was a panther with a pelt colored like a peacock.

PRIDE looked down at Eve and sneered.

“If I wasn’t so weak right now, I would’ve taken the mayor. Verily, my wounds are deep and grievous if I am attracted to you. Once I regain my strength, New York shall feel my family’s ire!

“What do you want, foul thing?” Eve regained a measure of her dignity, slowly she pushed herself up to glare at the being in front of her. Well, she did her best, PRIDE’s bosom was so gargantuan she had to step back to look at the woman.

"Foul? FOUL?!" PRIDE asked, enraged. "I am perfection incarnate! You should be groveling at my feet, worshiping the very ground I stand on! I am a GODDESS! The epitome of the female figure. The very fact that I decided to grace your meager presence with my magnificence should be a gift!"

“Gift!?!” Eve questioned incredulously. “What do you even want from me, why am I here?”

“Why, I require an Anchor, a foothold in this material world. Without it I shall be dragged back to my mother’s home and I do not wish to see her at this moment. So, little thing, blabbering mortal, you shall be my own redoubt until I regain my strength. It is an honor I had bestowed upon a few in the last hundred years. Be astounded as I turn you from this worthless body into a bountiful temple with exemplary features.”

PRIDE clapped her hands together causing the world to shake. Eve could see the once white landscape turn grayer and grayer, until soon a blackness crept from around it. Traveling like slithering snakes, this abysmal darkness soon consumed the world leaving Eve floating in a black void. Eventually even her vision faded leaving Eve alone with her thoughts.


Eve came back with a small shriek, startling her companion. The young man to her right turned and looked at the nun with worry.

"Eve? Are you ok?" Beckham asked, concerned.

"I am." Eve replied, but something felt off. Eve felt...

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