The MCD in Act II. Polls, pictures, paths, peeks and promisses

Hey folks. Unfortunately, there's no chapter about Finn and his adventures this week. As you may have noticed, I had to deal with some issues concerning Tana's modeling. That was really annoying and exhausting, and it made me quite angry. But everything's okay now, and I can continue writing. I'm already about 2000 words into the new chapter and can say with some certainty that it will be a very long chapter... or two normal-length ones. But with whom, you ask? Will Finn have fun with Lisa? Will she decide to wait a little longer, or will even Rose be involved?

Yeah, well... who would have thought? Heh. Me. Finn, Lisa, and Rose, that is. Good choice. God, I'm so excited to see the three of them together. It's going to be incredibly caring, but also steamy, and a little wilder towards the end. After all, Rose's there. ;)

Then the fate of Sage's mother.

With exactly 50% of the votes, you chose a happy ending for Sage's mother, who gave her all but lost everything due to her husband's departure and **** problems.

And I don't even have a picture of the poor woman who will help Finn lead a good, happy life. You can help me with that, and maybe this poll will get you to the next chapter.

Here are my picks for Carmen DeSanto:

Monica Barbaro. God, I loved her in Top Gun: Maverick! And if you hadn't decided to treat Sage's Mom well, I wouldn't have included her in the selection. Now we have a true Hollywood star to choose from.

But it can also be... more slutty...

For those who want something a little hotter, the porn star experience so to speak, they'll find something to love between Jynx Maze...

And Katrina Moreno.

Both are porn actresses with lots of pictures online. Duh. So you can choose between the glamour of Hollywood and the wetness of two Latina pussies. Hm, very poetic of me to put it like that. Since Carmen DeSanto's path encompasses both sides, tender devotion and harsh punishment, both paths are open to you here as well. I myself would choose Monica Barbaro because I think she's so great, but I wouldn't have chosen the other ladies if they didn't also perfectly fit my idea of ​​Carmen. Jynx Maze was my enttrypoint to latina's in porn and she hadn't disappointed since. And Katarine embodies the latine housewife the best if you ask me. What do you think? Which lady wanted to embody Carmen the most?

https://strawpoll.com/e2naXWDWlyB

Next comes the perks...

Yeah, we got 6300 tokens, and I'll let you choose from a pool of 6400 tokens. Don't ask me what I was thinking. I think I was planning to include another perk, but then I scrapped the idea and didn't do the math. Yeah... well... I think we'll do it this way: we won't spend all the tokens. Either that pisses you all off, or I'll take the chance, choose Dram Body, Max Sperm Quantity, and Slaved Taste Buds for a total of 2600 tokens, and save the remaining 3700 tokens for later. Invisibility will surely come later, but I'll use this opportunity to hold a better poll...

Because there's news here too. I'll be introducing at least one, if not two, new perks. Both still need some work, and the names are just placeholders, but both come from reader feedback that I want to take into account.

Two new perks:

Getting Horny Perk. 2400 Tokens 0-100

The subject's level of arousal increases on a scale of 0-100, where 0 means no arousal and 100 means mad with arousal. The arousal level remains at the user's chosen level until they change the perk.

Note: This, in conjunction with Orgasm Control, offers many more possibilities for controlling subjects, even over longer distances. Furthermore, after an orgasm, the arousal level will decrease as normal, but then immediately rise again to transform subjects into either horny sluts or loving sex addicts. Something for every model in the story, I think.

Pain into Pleasure

The subject now experiences pain as pleasure. The pain doesn't disappear, but it's pleasurable for the subject.

Note: This is obviously intended for Candice to mitigate the effects of her Path, should the need arise. Currently, with her Path, she experiences pain as pleasure, but still suffers from it. This perk would eliminate that factor, and Candice, assuming she's a "good girl to you," could enjoy the punishment. But hey. I was also thinking of Tammy and a "good girl spanking."

Note: I still need to consider whether this perk clashes too much with "sensitive ass."

And then there are, with a very, very high probability, these new paths and their corresponding models. I've responded almost exclusively to reader requests, and we've now reached a point in the story where I can finally fulfill them.

Cuckold. "At least he's a REAL man."

Subjects stay together as a group, but see the user as a man who can dominate and control them all. Each member of the group has their own feelings, desires, and opinions on this.

Long-distance relationship. "I miss you terribly..."

The subject becomes more horny and attractive to the user the further apart they are. The user must pull the subject closer, while the subject feels less for the user and less attracted to them as the distance decreases.

The Student: "Please teach me, Sir."

The subject needs the user and trusts them to prepare her for life out there. The user can achieve this through domination, seduction, ****, and affection to help the subject lead a healthy and happy life.

All three paths may need some modifications, but I already have some great ideas for all three. And as you can see, I was productive this week, even if it doesn't feel that way for me. I hope you don't mind. :)

The book lover. "I wish you would treat me like her."

The subject regards the user as one of the men in her romance books. While he will always be the object of her desires, she will change her behavior on a random basis, depending on the circumstances. While the subject is focused on the user, he has to make sure to handle the different approaches the subject will bestow on him.

In terms of paths I can say I plan (with high certainty) the following arcs in the story, based on reader's wishes.

Cuckold. Dominant man with his women against a male victim

"Older" Woman. Between 35-45

Wife sharing. (Sharing a man's wife with another man)

More Ideas in my head but not on paper right now.

Next up, the new model for Tana. To explain, and because transparency is very important to me: We (the mods, and later I as well) discovered that Ai Shinozaki started modeling while underage. Apparently, the laws in Japan are a bit... well... lax in that regard. We couldn't verify her age in one (unused) image, and that basically poisoned the whole model for the future. I thought I would say I had the means to find out the model's age in every image, but in the end, we decided to remove Ai Shinozaki for safety reasons. So, Tana will have a new model... again.

I have two girls in mind.

Alina Li

And Dakota Tyler

Both models fall more under the category of "past Tana", so more like she is right now instead of what I envisioned of her. But I think those two are a good pick. I'm not entirely finished in choosing other models as well, so no poll for them as right now, but let me hear your thoughts. The more input I get, the better.

And no, sorry, Emiru won't be among them. I don't want to give too much away yet, but I'm very, very sure that we'll see Emiru again in Act II. Just not as Tana, but as someone we'll treat a bit better. Her planned path is already (without a name so you can guess) in the corresponding chapter. So, if everything works out, Emiru will also appear there.

And the last thing I can hand out are two small teasers. The cast will expand and two of them already are confirmed and locked in.

Juniper Ren as the thread.

And Laura Bailey as the damsel in distress. (For her, I'm really exited)

That's all from me. Unfortunately, no chapter with Finn, Lisa, and Rose. But I'll definitely manage that next week. And, hopefully, even more. The last few weeks have been very stressful, and I'm totally annoyed, I can tell you that. But hopefully, this chapter helps you get through the wait a bit and shows you what I have planned for the future. In any case, I will continue to listen to my readers, give them feedback, and listen to their feedback.

I'm really looking forward to Laura Bailey. Emiru will certainly find her place. And Tana will finally get a model who's here to stay. Oh my god, it's always her. Poor thing.

Let's see what you guys will do with Sage's mother.

And more models will be added as soon as I'm ready. With them, as well with the three new paths, I wasn't, like, really lazy this week. A lot of writing, just not for you but with the mods and surfing in strange Japanese web forums and internet sites. A whole different culture over there I can tell you. With that I spend my time, as well as with a lot of plotting for the future.

Thank's to the mods who guided me trough this with patience and an (annoying) firm hand.

And thank you most of all, dear reader.

Thanks for reading, and have a great start to next week.

Fly safe foks.