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Chapter 11
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The Fallout
The societal consequences were a slow, creeping poison.
It started with the stares at the grocery store. The whispers behind hands at the PTA meeting Dad was **** to attend alone. Tabitha was asked, point-blank, in the school hallway if her mom was really a porn star. She came home in tears and refused to go back for three days.
David got into his first fight when someone made a crude remark about “those new mommy-milkers.” He broke the kid’s nose. We faced suspension and a lawsuit.
Dad’s colleagues at the office grew distant. There were “jokes” about him getting free subscriptions. A mandatory sensitivity training was scheduled, which everyone knew was because of him. The promotion he was up for quietly went to someone else.
Our house became a point of morbid curiosity. Cars would slow down as they drove by. Once, we found a tabloid photographer in the backyard.
The final blow was the HOA. A formal complaint was filed, citing “bringing the neighborhood into disrepute” and “operating a business of adult entertainment from the residence,” based on Crystal’s video teaser filmed in our living room. We were fined. We were pariahs.
We sat at the dinner table one night, a silent, isolated unit. The food was untouched. The world had contracted to these walls, and even they felt besieged. The accident hadn’t just mixed up two minds. It had taken a family, an ordinary life, and shattered it on the public stage, leaving us to pick through the sharp, glittering pieces while the world watched, pointed, and laughed. The person who was my mother was a ghost in a surgically-modified shell, and the rest of us were becoming ghosts in our own town, haunted by the reflected notoriety of Crystal Minx.
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The Ultimate Transplant
Someone you know is given a new body & life
PLEASE ADD CHAPTERS! A close friend or family member is horribly injured in an accident. As they lay dying in the emergency room, another patient dies of a brain aneurysm. Both of them are organ donors, so a surgeon decides it's the perfect opportunity for him to try an experimental surgery. He transplants the victim's higher brain (the cerebellum) to the donor's body in an attempt to 'save' a life. Amazingly it works. But the surgery was not approved so the hospital convinces the families to keep quiet, arguing that revealing this operation to the public would bring never-ending media attention to all involved. That means that the patient will have to publicly assume the identity of the donor. What will this mean to your friends and family? Who else will you tell? Although you will spend a lot of time and effort giving support, how will all this alter your relationship to the patient? And how will he or she adapt to a complete change of body and identity? Many transformation stories focus on the change or victim, so I thought it would be interesting to instead have the POV be someone who sees the change from the outside. Writers feel free to explore a change in age, gender, class or ethnicity - and the repercussions that change would have on the main character (and others). This is from my writing.com story with thanks and credit to other contributors, especially Wassel, Wordsmitty, and Enigma. Please see the original at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1886863-The-Ultimate-Transplant for the original authors' posts. Also you should check out Wassel's version at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1974478-The-Transplant ).
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