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Chapter 24
by
marvelfan
Another child is concieved! Or do the aliens decide to change things?
The Aliens debate while the Neanderthals live a simple life
Outside of space and time....
The Brugl were convening in the great council. Known in some realms as the Makers, these were the nearly omnipotent beings that created the microverse. The antithesis of the Beyonders, the Makers were servitors of the Aspirants, a race of beings that rivaled the Celestials. Known as the Astro-Gods, the Dark Celestials or the **** Celestials, these cosmic forces were created and zealously worshipped The First Firmament.
The First Firmament being the embodiment of the first universe in existence. Following a rebellion by the other creations, the Celestials, the First Firmament and the Aspirants were defeated. The First Firmament was scattered and the first multiverse was formed.
Like the Beyonders to the Celestials, the brugl or "Makers" were created to control the universe. The Aspirants decided to start in a subatomic level, creating and conquering the microverse largely unbeknownst to the Celestials.
The Asiprants desired to reform the First Firmament. To once again wage war against the Celestials. To do so, they had to stop the rise of the "Destroyer" and the "Deceiver". Two beings, one omnipotent beyond any creation and the other omniscient. Two beings that would signal the end to the Aspirants and Celestials. And the reshaping of the multiverse along with the Molecule man, the creation of the Beyonders.
The Destroyer would end the First Firmament and take his place. Thus he had to be destroyed. But it was quite clear in the Brugl's experiments to kill the Destroyer that his rise was inevitable.
So they developed a new plan. To kidnap the great "God-Bearer", the mother of the Destroyer and the Deciever. Born on the backwoods planet 231 in a backwoods galaxy, known as Earth.
They captured and attempted to corrupt the God-Bearer. Forty seven times they failed. Erase her mind, **** her, immobilize her, it didn't matter, she always fought they're restraints and constraints.
It was the deceptive Brugl 6 who figured a way. Place her among subject group 231(a). A group of primitive Neandethals from another experiment on the Brugl ship. The Neanderthal were being used as guinea pigs to create powered beings. Docile powered beings. To be used as an army.
The Brugl were shocked at the quickness of the new experiments results. Susan Storm Richards, the God-Bearer had been placed in a chamber with strong male Neanderthals. The brain deafening gas and pheromones were pumped into the room. Normally, Susan would recover from the amnesia and regain control of her powers and fight back.
A fight. All it took was the cloudy minded Susan to witness a battle for...for her. An. Alpha male emerged the victor. And without prompting Susan Storm presented herself to the male for mating.
Brugl 6 believed it was the mating itself that kept her mind at bay. In fact, the superheroine regressed mentally, taking on the manner of the Neanderthal around her. Brugl 6 argued that Susan's life of stress, anxiety and anguish was straining her mind. When the alpha male Neandethal mated Sue causing her to intensely climax, her mind all but broke.
Now Susan had born the alpha two offspring, a male and a female. The Brugl had placed tribe 231(a) back 60,000 years. The tribe was thriving. Sue's mind had not returned much at all as far as they could tell.
Brugl 6 was not in the council, but his statment was taken. He argued that the children and the God-Bearer must remain in the past. The council convened because despite their efforts they actually brought about the rise of the Desroyer and the Deciever. Brugl 6 argued that they were different now. Docile. Not needing to travel the cosmos. Content in the past. Where they should stay.
Brugl 6 was sure that the God-Bearer, The Destroyer and the Deciever would offer no problems.
So the council convened. The results would soon be brought to the Aspirants.
As the council convened Brugl ships floated around planet 231 above the tribe 60,000 years in thr past. Brugl 6, Brugl 12, Brugl 18, Brugl 24, Brugl 36 and other derivations of Brugl 6 remained in stasis for a decade above planet Earth. The Brugl 6 and derivations were not trusted. They broke from the hive mind. In stasis they'd remain. A sort of godlike sleep until the council returned or emergencies occured on Earth.
Somewhere in the area that would become the french Alps...
Over 60,000 years BC.....
The House of Gur and Ka....

In a deep cave the Gur Rahkt Neanderthal tribe slept. Named after their strong leader the name translated to Lion Rock. Or Lion Cave. This tribe was known as the Clan of the Cave Lion. A fierce group of Neanderthals seemingly blessed by the gods. From a small familial tribe the numbers were almost sixty. The nomadic tribe currently resided for the winter in a deep cave, safe from the harsh outside world.
Down a sloping path about two hundred yards from the large opening was the sleeping tribe in a pretty large cave system at the base of a mountain. Some had makeshift tent like structures made from animal pelts. Other, high ranking members of the tribe lived in the deeper caves that ran along side the rock walls.
In the very back, in the largest cave within the system, a huge animal pelt hung like a door, though the light of the small fire inside could be seen. It was the Chief's tent. The one known as Gur, the alpha of the tribe.
Inside the older Neanderthal snored under a heavy pelt made of hairy mammoth hair which had been fashioned and fixed into a blanket. Next to him under the warm blanket, his mate Ka stirred.
Once the heroine known as Susan Storm-Richards, the woman and long abandoned that identity and those memories. Like Brugl 6 surmised, Susan's brain regressed due to the initial ****, but it remained in a state of arrested development. Susan's brain had chosen this primitive life over the stress and strain of the modern world, and what it meant to be a world saving heroine in such a horrible future.
Still, the past haunted her dreams. In her nightmare, one she had often, the three demons of her past chased her. The horrid stretchy one who was relentless. The ghastly and scary rock demon. And finally the burning one. Water, Earth and Fire. They all wore strange moving blue garments.
The shamans and Night sisters long ago explained to Susan that she too was a demon of this other world....called "Nuh Yuck". Sue was a wind and an air spirit. Gifted to Gur and the tribe by the gods themselves.
Ka ran from the others in her dream. For some reason all she had to do was hold up her hand to push them back. Her breasts heaved as she ran nude through the woods trying desperately to find the cave. But she never could.
Eventually, as always the stretchy one would grab her. Shout a name "Suuu". A name that didn't apply to Ka. She was not that thing any longer. The dream would either end that way, or as it did this night. Ka would peer into a great lake, exhausted from running. When she peaked at her reflection someone else stared back...something else...with bright hair the color of "Farh"...the sun.
The strange but faniliar visage would jolt her awake. Her heart pounding as her blue eyes shot open. That image was of her...in the other place...the other world...Nuh Yuck. A hellish world, filled with strange shiny structures, loud noises, bright lights like Farh, as well as pain, anguish, strife, and stress. Such an evil world she never wished to return to.
Ka sighed realizing it was a nightmare. She hadn't had one in months. She'd have to speak to rhe Shaman and the "Chuh Qwee" or Night Sisters to help with potions and incantations.
Long suspected, but never confirmed, Neanderthals had a pretty complex communication that rivaled what humans would call language. Grunts, and utterances used to define and describe the world. It was primitive and simple, never more than two or three "words" in a "sentence" if the concepts could be called that.
Ka yawned feeling the warmth of the long haired Mammoth blanket. In the dead of winter, in a blizzard this blanket would make her sweat. Her back felt the hairs of the same style blanket beneath her. Next to her Gur, her mate snored on his back. She kissed his hairy shoulder and stood up.
Ka yawned again and scratched her itchy scalp. Long gone were Susan Storm's long beautiful blonde locks. The sun had kissed her skin and burned her hair. It was now dull brown, thick and bushy. So nappy and thick was her mostly unwashed hair that it had to be tightly braided with reed in order that it didn't form a thick fro. Thick bushy brown locks draped down past her chest and her back. The brown hair was even darker due to dirt of the past week. A bath in the natural pool near the entrance was coming. Soon.
So unrecognizable was Ka, that a time displaced Steve Rodgers and Peter Parker, looking for an Infinity stone didn't recognize her. Her body was covered in necklaces that bore different animals teeth. Gifts from her mate. From each hunt. Even creatures from other worlds.
Ka looked like what she was...a cavewoman. Though she was not Neanderthal. She was a human. The neanderthal were at war with humans. So hated were humans that the Tribe didn't name them. They would hit their heads hard to signify "flat heads". Or spit on the ground.
The tribe has excepted Susan as Ka, believing her to be sent from the stars by the gods to aid the Neanderthal and as a gift to the great Gur.
Ka's body was quite different than Susan's was as well. Child birth had left her hips and legs thick. Her arms and upper body were muscular. But her stomach and hips and thighs were those of a mother.
And her chest. Ka's chest was huge. Ridiculously huge mammaries filled with milk hung heavy on her. Blue veins wrapped around the boobs desperately trying to get blood to the oversized orbs.
From the side of the cave within a cave was further indents into the walls. Coverings blocked the view of two room like caves. At the foot of these cave-rooms slept two fierce wolves. As Ka approached they growled at first. But then they recognized their master. Ka raised them from puppies. She scratched them both.
Ka glanced to the left room. Inside was the "Grush'" (or monster). It could not be reasoned with. Ka moved to the right room and pushed the animal hide aside.
On a nest-like bed of pelts was a baby, not 6 "muuh" or moons old. Its blue eyes opened and staring at Ka. The blonde small hairs on its head and blue eyes reminded people of Ka when she first arrived. The eyes were Ka's. The hair as well. Susan always had blue eyes. But the brow...was Neanderhal. The brow was all the young girl's father.
"Chut" (come), Ka called and lifted the baby. The young beauty moved her thick dreadlocked hair to expose a dark huge nipple on the end of a massive melon sized breast. Ka tried to get her daughter "Vah" (smart daughter) to suckle the right breast, but once again she would not. "Chut" Ka commanded the baby, but it was no use. Ka moved her other locks exposing her left nipple. She placed the hungry child to her left breast and quickly the half Neanderthal baby latched. Just like always she'd drink enough to make Ka's boobs look lopsided and awkward.
Before the Brugl interfered this baby would be born to Reed and Sue Richards as Valeria Richards. Now, she was born a hybrid, 60,000 to early, to Ka, the former Susan Storm and a random Neanderthal man.
The baby suckled. And hard. Ka left the babies space and turned to the room on the left. She sighed and poked her head inside. Under another Mammoth blanket was a blonde Neanderhal child, sleeping soudly. Gur's first born, "Farh" (sun) was a handful. The real demon of the family. Again, the eyes and hair were from Ka's past. But the brow was all Gur. Even the face looked like the Neanderthal father.
Again, this child would have been known as Franklin Richards, Reed's first son with Susan, but now his father was a Neanderthal.
The Destroyer and the Deciever were merely hybrids now. Powered, but without knowing it. Yet. Now they were happy and content with the primitive life, just like their mother Ka.
Farh would be hungry in the early morning. It was a little past full "muuuh" meaning it was close to midnight.
Ka brought the baby towards the front of the family living space. Hanging up on the wall was a loincloth which Sue used her free hand to wrap around her thick thighs. She also covered her right breast with her thick locks. Being nude in public wasn't an issue. But she belonged to Gur, which meant she should cover her sex.
It's not like the males wouldn't know she was taken. Every few months was a ownership ritual where Gur slapped his print on Sue's tits with white paint. Then her ass. Then her pussy. The white paint was chipping off but it was still clear and still a strong hand print over her sex and tits. There was another on her stomach. This signified Ka's womb was not only taken but she'd given birth.
Ka made her way through the sleeping tribespeople, checking on her people. She was making a quick line to the latest kill. A large wooly rhinoceros. The meat was still good. Salt helped to preserve. A young Neanderthal sat watching Ka.
It was the youth "Chubcha" or "little cub". He was from another tribe aligned with the Cave Lion Clan. He had just come of age, modern age would put him at 18, and he was ready for his first hunt. Tonight he had meat duty. In reality he didn't need to stay awake. By the front of the encapment were more wolves. Theyd hear nosie before anyone. And two elder warrior Neandethals made camp up at the entrance standing guard. Chubcha could sleep. Instead he laid against the wall, sitting with his legs out staring at Ka.
But the young Neanderthal had more on his mind. Especially since the beauty Ka had stirred. The youth watched the beauty check the tribespeople, often bending down making her loincloth slip to the side exposing the girls big ass and thighs. The baby was strapped to Ka's fat tits. Each time Ka bent she held the baby close but her other tit was clear of the thick hair. The youth grunted in lust. Most males lusted after Ka.
She made her way to the meat pen, reached in and cut some slabs. Only the Chief's family could so something like take meat at any time. Her ass was next to the horny young boys face. She was up on her tiptoes cutting meat with a rock knife, and the boy could see the bottom of her sex under the barely there loincloth.
Ka got a piece of meat and looked down. The boy's loincloth was sticking up. Ka looked across the way. A hut like structure covered in pelts was directly across from the youthful guard. Inside was a girl who had just come of age and her family. Ka thought she'd figured it all out. She looked at Chubcha and smiled. She pointed across the cave towards the girls hut and moved her human brow in a suggestive manner. "Yaatch?" Ka asked. It was a word that meant a lot to this tribe. But mostly it meant "yes?". Ka was bouncing her daughter who was falling asleep on her breast.
Chubcha shook his head. "Naatch". This meant many things but mostly no.
Ka went for another slab of meat. She reached to get the hind quarters of the beast. The carcass was on its back and on a slab off the ground to prevent bugs. The smoke from the small fires around the cave did the same. She looked down suddenly at a strange feeling in her head. That's when she watched the young guards loincloth raise up. His eyes on Ka's ass.
With a sigh, a smile and a red face Ka returned to standing above the guard. She was still with the baby on her breast. Ka quickly dropped to her knees and reached out with her right hand under the boy's loincloth.
"Yaatch," the boy eagerly nodded when he felt a hand on his hard cock.
Ka sighed playfully. It was her that made him excited. So it was her that would help him achieve a "great release". To modern society, what Ka was doing would make people shocked. This was a different world. Men didn't jerk off. It was forbidden. Shameful. Against the gods. It was a woman's job to provide food, shelter, clothing, and release. In fact, before a hunt Ka and the women would masturbate the all male hunting party. The hunters needed clear heads.
Even the Chief's mate was bound to a duty to help a male with release should the occasion arise.
The boy was in heaven. He hadn't had a chance to achieve release from the beauty Ka. The most sought after female for the great release.
Ka's technique was perfect. Based on years of practice she jerked the cock with speed and pressure. The baby was asleep and off her tit. Ka noticed the boys attention was on her tits now. She moved her thick brown locks aside to give the youth a view of her tits. The left was smaller by far, but both were amazing and full. Milk dripped from her tits. She kept jerking, feeling the cock grow harder at her display.
The boys eyes were locked on her right beast so heavy and full. He felt her hand grip his head and pull his head to her nipple. The boy was suddenly suckling nutrious milk from her tit all while she jerked his cock.
Ka wanted him to suckle until it made her right tit smaller but he didn't last.
"Yaaaaatch!" The boys muffled cry came from Ka's cleavage. Warm Neanderthal cum sprayed up and onto his chest and on Ka's hand. Ka kissed the boys forehead more like a mother than a lover. She kept jerking and pulling the stress right from the youths balls and shaft. The baby still sleeping in her left arm.
When he was done Ka stood up. She wiped the cum on the wall. The boy was already sleeping. Almost instant.
Ka strutted proudly back to her living space. She'd helped a guard with release. Her mate would be proud. Speaking of her mate....
After putting her daughter back in the primitive crib, Ka wandered to her snoring Neanderthal mate.
She looked at the mammoth blanket and saw a protrusion at her mates crotch that made her smile. Ka put pieces of meat next to the sleeping wolves. Then she filled a clay bowl with her milk and placed it in the nook her son occupied along with a slab of meat.
As a doctor of archeology, the former Susan Storm-Richards was well versed in clay pottery. It was as if her brain kept small portions of her previous knowledge to suit her current life. Neanderthals had now developed clay pottery 40,000 years prior to mankind. Ka would be dawned if anyone would question filling a bowl with mothers milk for her toddler. It was nutrition and life sustaining nutrition at that.
She then moved her way to the mammoth blanket. The young human lifted the blanket and reached her left hand under until she found what she was searching for.
The young human gripped the hard veiny Neanderthal cock under the blanket. Her mate groaned when she jerked the uncut cock. Ka moved the blanket and placed her body over her mate, his cock still in her hand. Ka giggled at his slumbering hardness.
The elder Neanderthal chief huffed and puffed, awakened from his slumber by a warm hand stroking his prick. The cold air that rushed to him from his uncovered body didn't help. He felt the weight of the now fat ass and thick birthing hips and thighs of his mate come down upon him. "Gggrrrr," he grumbled angrily. Defiant as always, Ka went against his wishes. It was too soon for another child. It was a tough debate with his fellow men to argue that his young beautiful mate had an intense libido. They laughed at his anger.
"KA...," he said sternly looking up at her. "NAATCH!" He uttered forcefully but as quietly as he could.
Ka did not stop her late night intrusion. She held the cock under her hairy pussy, slick and wet with anticipation, and before he could protest the young human sank her pussy onto the elder Neanderthals cock. The Neanderthal man grunted in anger that mixed with utter joy. A hot, wet, swollen human pussy was hard to argue with.
Thousands of miles above head the Brugl ship circled the earth focused on the Neanderhal camp. Nano-cameras showed the inside of Susan Storm-Richards/Ka's pussy peeling the foreskin of Gur's cock back. His mushroom head rubbing her swollen walls. All kinds of statistics, in an language not decypherable by human language surrounded the image. The "copulation probability" had surpassed one, Since they were in fact, copulating. The "female climax" quotient was approaching one from a probability of 98% likely.
Down on Earth, Ka was riding her mates cock more intently now. "Yaatch!" She mused softly. Over and over.
"Naatch!" Gur responded, despite his hands now on her ass guiding her on his cock.
"Ka naatch!" The young beauty taunted. Asking if she should stop. Should pull off. To stop, to pull of mating was a sin, and a front to the gods.
Gur didn't respond, simply biting his lip, holding her ass while she rode his cock.
He'd have to be more forceful with her
More dominant. She was too defiant. During there mating ritual, When he'd slapped his colors upon her, she grabbed the white paint and gripped his dick, claiming his cock to the laughs of the females. Now, here she was, forcing her sex upon him.
It was interesting since millions of men, both heroes, villains and even normal men back in her time would kill to be in Gurs space with Susan Storm-Richards. Here he was annoyed at her insistence on sex.
But it was defiance. One he could not....
His train of thought was broken by warm milk hitting his face and open mouth. Ka wad above him squeezing her right swollen tit. Gur grunted but lifted up and began to suck upon the tit. Warm, nutritional milk sliding down his throat. He fed on his mates tits. Suckling the big tit, the hot pussy on his cock and holding her ass were too much. He pulled off her tit, mouth dripping with white milk. "Yaaatch!" He uttered softly. His cock erupted in his beautiful youthful human mate. He thanked the gods then. Not caring for he outcome of cumming in his fertile wife.
Ka's eyes fluttered. She smiled feeling hot Neandethral cum, which made her cum once more over his cock. "Yaaaatch!" She thanked him..her mate...kissing his forehead.
The older Neanderthal finally had enough of his youthful upstart mate. He pulled her off, his thick sperm pouring from her cunt. He then moved her to his side. "Ka!" He grunted. But he was too exhausted to fight now. Maybe in the....
SNAAARLLLL.....
The Neandethal man was already asleep and snoring. Ka laughed and snuggled her head under her left shoulder, his arm around her. She closed her eyes and faded to sleep. Cum seeping from her fucked pussy.
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