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Chapter 6
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What Does the Voice Suggest (Comment)?
Temptations
"Accept spank from Mr. Wilcox, on bare ass," the voice said.
Target > 95
1d100+10 Roll = 45
Failed Suggestion
Zoe Bellamy:
Corruption Points = 10
Zoe pulls against the old man's grip. Now more than ever she questions if the voice is really God. Wouldn't the Devil want her to let a man more than three times her age spank her bare bottom? "Stop it! You're hurting me!"
"Sorry. Didn't mean to be so rough." Mr. Wilcox lets go. "You have to understand how much I care for you. It would hurt me to no end if this boy took advantage of how sweet you are." He eyes Lucas again. "Don't you have anywhere else to be? The church ain't your personal ash tray."
Lucas shrugs and finishes zipping up. "I go where I please. Smoke where I please too." He nods to Zoe. "Hey, you're not going to go get spanked by this old coot, are you? Pretty sure he's just trying his damnedest to diddle ya."
Zoe smooths out her dress. If looks could stun, her stare would level both men on the spot. "No one's spanking me. Not him. Not you." She glances down to Lucas's crotch and says, "Thank you for putting that thing away."
"Whatever. I just didn't feel like being balls out around some old dude." Lucas looks at his watch. "Welp. Would you look at the time? I'm gonna head home and see if I can talk a MILF into coming over for some sinning. The knockin' boots kind." He smirks at Zoe. "Want to come with? I can try Mrs. B first, just for you."
"Since you're following the will of God, don’t back down. Follow Lucas home. You still need to make him repent," the voice said.
Target > 80
1d100+10 Roll = 25
Failed Suggestion
Zoe Bellamy:
Corruption Points = 10
Willpower wells up within Zoe as she once again says no to the voice. She wants to be a warrior for the Lord, but the Lord she loves would not ask her to sacrifice her values. More and more she questions if she really can be a modern day Joan of Arc if the voice just wants to push her off onto one man or another.
Mr. Wilcox speaks up before she can and says, "I'm not letting her go anywhere with you, boy." He wags his cane at Lucas. "I'll break this here cane off in your behind if I have to."
Zoe rolls her eyes. "Men are hopeless. I'm not going anywhere with either of you." She points at Mr. Wilcox. "You just said you wanted to lay hands on my butt." She jabs her finger at Lucas next. "And you tried to touch me with your dick. You did touch my dress with it."
Raising his hands, Mr. Wilcox says, "I just wanted to be sure you're being a good girl. If you went home with this fool, I'd think your tush deserves that spanking and more."
Lucas shrugs again. "You should just be thanking me for showing you a dick this nice, Z."
Zoe crosses her arms over her chest. "I don't understand either of you. I'm trying to find out who the sinners are here, and right now I think it's both of you. But I don't see neither of you trying to repent."
Comment a suggestion from the voice for Zoe.
What Does the Voice Suggest (Comment)?
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The Curse of Corrupting Comments (Open)
A story in which you the reader tries to corrupt naive women into becoming sexual deviants with your comments. A dice game between writer and reader.
Corrupt and control women as they struggle to fight off the voice in their head (you) that keeps driving them towards sluttier, sexier and degrading situations. Build up their corruption points to make biggger and badder corruptions possible.
Updated on May 20, 2026
by MegaMarshmallow
Created on Feb 26, 2023
by MegaMarshmallow
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