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Chapter 38 by deepedia deepedia

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THE NEW COACH CHAPTER 20 (Scott's & Hannah's PoV)

Scott's PoV:

“Scott, you can enter now.” I received my cue from Hannah to enter the room.

Inside the room, I saw Candy…I mean Raven was no longer bound by Hannah. Her hair was no longer in a twintail but she let it flow down to her back like when she was Raven. Her skimpy goth clothes were replaced with a full body leather bodysuit. Because of her extra busty figure, the bodysuit was hugging her curve tightly.

“Hannah, is it a success?”

“Well, you can ask her yourself,” The agent said.

I turned my attention to Raven. “Should I call you Raven, or Candy?”

“What kind of question is that, Scott? Don’t call me Candy, the name gives me goosebumps.”

“Raven, glad to have you back.” If I could hug her without being awkward I would, but I was afraid that it would make the situation awkward for everybody here.

Unexpectedly, Raven gave me a quick hug for some seconds before she released her embrace. “Thank you, I had heard it from Hannah about what you do. Thank you for deciding to save me even if it was risky.”

“N-never mind it, it’s my job as your friend,” I replied in a stutter, the previous hug caught me off guard.

“Well, we save you not only because you are his friend, we need you to help out with our plan.” Hannah interjected.

“Plan?” Raven showed us a puzzled face,

“Yes, a plan to apprehend Mr. Darel Lebron as the mastermind who controls you and others.” Hannah explained.

“Coach Darel? Mastermind? What do you mean? Why are you bringing him up in this conversation? “

“Darel Lebron is the one who mind control you, right?”

To our shock, Raven shook her head. “Coach Darel wasn’t the one who hypnotize me, if my memory was right, the one who hypnotized me was Mrs. Ariana Fisk.”

“Ariana Fisk? Who is she?” Hannah looked at me for an explanation.

“She is our school guidance counselor. But I haven’t seen her in school lately though.”

“Haven’t been seen at school lately, huh? Well, it makes her kind of suspicious.” Hannah muttered.

“Do you remember when principal Amanda called me before, Scott?” Raven interjected.

I nod my head, “Yeah, I remember that time, you went missing all day long and didn't come back to class. It was before the school’s excursion. I saw your mom too.”

“After I finished my meeting with principal Amanda, I met with Mrs. Ariana. Mrs. Ariana was asking me to help her with something. I followed her to her room. And without me being aware of it, I already lose my consciousness. I don’t know how she did it, but it was clearly her doing because there was only me and her in the room.” Raven narrated her stories about how she got hypnotized by our school’s guidance counselor.

“Is it really not Darel who brainwashed you? Maybe you remember it wrong, maybe it was Coach Darel who asks you to follow him into his room and brainwash you. Try to remember again.” I asked her desperately.

“Scott, stop. I understand if you can’t believe me because I recently recovered my memories, but it is how I remember the event.”

I looked at Raven. Her expression now turned into one of disappointment. It was understandable that she made that expression, she thought that we didn’t believe her. The room was silent for a few moments. We were expecting that we could finally get the proof to put Darel into a jail after restoring Raven’s memory, but we ended up back to square one with more things entangled.

I turned to look at the CIA agent, silently asking her whether she had any solution.

“Honestly, in this case, even a lie detector will not help us checking the truth, if she really believes that it is how the event unfolds. If only we had something that can jog her memory. With that and when I got the agency counter brainwashing tool, we can verify the truth.”

“If that is the case, I think I have a way to prove whether I remember it wrong or not, but I am not sure it is still there or not,” Raven replied.

“What do you mean?”

“I usually write a diary about my day, but I don’t know whether when I was under my other personality I still write my diary. And the diary is in my home,” Raven said in embarrassed tone.

“So, what's the problem?” Hannah asked.

“My mom wouldn’t just let me dress like a tramp like what i wear before, and according to Scott, he saw my mom go to my school. I think my mom is compromised and had been brainwashed too.”

“I got it, so, you fear your home is an enemy’s base now.”

“Can you help me break the brainwashing on my mom like what you do to me?”

“I can, but not now, I spent my last special cigarette on you, and it is too risky to put your mom through electric shock ****. You need to wait 2 or 3 days until I get my hand on the agency counter brainwashing tool, until then, we are out of options to help your mom.”

“Okay, it will be suck seeing my mom in a brainwashed state when I get home.”

“You have an option, you don’t have to go home right now, I can arrange a place for you to live until I get my hand on the agency brainwashing tool, and we will then go to your home and save your mother, this is the safest one.Another option is for you to help me, you go back to your home, act like you are still brainwashed and being our spy, fetch your diary and gather the proof to put whoever behind this brainwashing shenanigans behind the bar. It is dangerous, but I will help you as much as I can. It’s a bit shameless of me, but I prefer if you choose the second option rather than the first one because the first one will alert our enemies, and we don’t know what the consequence will be to our operation, but in other hand, I don’t want to be so heartless and irresponsible to throw you back into the danger.” Hannah gave Raven a choice.

“Count me in as your helper, I won’t let whoever jerkass behind this continue to play with someone’s mind.”

“Good.” Hannah gave Raven a nod of approval.

The CIA agent then turned to me, her expression was very serious, “Scott, despite our attempt to help Raven here is a success, I won’t accept your plea for help again if you don’t stick with the plan. Do you understand the meaning of the word ‘Patience’? I ask you to be patient and subtly look for proof, I don’t want you to play a hero. What you did was just reckless. Thankfully, I still have one last special cigarette to help Raven. Imagine if I didn’t have it and put Raven through the electric shock. Do you want to be the one that takes responsibility if things go awry?” Hannah berated me in anger.

I couldn’t answer her. I knew that I was reckless with my action this time, but I really wanted to save Raven.

“You can’t. So please, just be patient and play your role well. You may dislike acting like a pathetic sissy, but your role is pivotal. If you want to save your loved one, be a good sissy for me just for the next two or three days. Do you understand?”

My fists clenched. Hearing what Hannah said made me feel angry, but I could only keep the anger bubbling in my chest, because without the agent’s help, I might still be under Darel’s influence and think of myself as a sissy and not just act like one but really became a sissy. Despite being grateful for what she did, I couldn’t help but feel my pride trampled by her. I did not want to be just a cowardly sissy; I wanted to be a hero.

“Yes, I understand.” I **** myself to agree with her.

She let out a sigh and then said, “I think you need to go back to your place, Scott. I still have something to talk about with Raven here, a girl’s talk.” Hannah politely kicked me out of the room.


Hannah's PoV:

“Sorry to make you dress up as Candy again when you just changed.” I apologized to Raven. The girl had changed her attire back into slutty mockery of goth girl

“Well, if it is what is needed to save everyone. I think acting like a bimbo is an easy job, I just need to giggle, act dumb, and be horny. It's easier than what Scott needed to do, at least.” Raven replied, then she giggled.

“Yeah, I know. Poor boy, I can see the anger on his face when I said that he needed to be a sissy. I will apologize to him after I throw whoever behind this into jail.”

“I can see that you are doing your best for this case, Ma’am. And I can see that you are pretty stressed too. I can help you.” Said the girl as she walked toward me.

“Help me?” I asked her in a puzzled tone.

“Yes. Let me return the favor.”

Before I could react, Raven was down on her knees before me, she pulled down my pants, and underwear. The girl then gently licked my pussy. At first, she was sloppy and hesitant, but as moments passed, she seemed to transform into an experienced pussy licker.

The girl paused, and looked at me, ‘Do you like it, Ma’am? Actually, this is my first time eating a woman’s pussy. I hope I’m not doing it too amateurishly.”

“No, you are great, I even thought you are an experienced carpet muncher.” I compliment her.

“I feel flattered. Maybe some of Candy’s skills stayed with me.”

Raven then resumed eating my pussy. Unfortunately, from this angle I couldn’t see her expression. Her last words actually made me wary if she was not fully herself. That there was still a remnant of Candy’s personality inside her.

But I soon threw my worry away. Raven had shown me notable restraint and didn’t show any hostility to me. And it’s not like I couldn’t handle her. In conclusion, there was no danger.

I let myself indulge in the pleasure. I had held myself back before, but right now, I let the side effect of the special cigarette free again. The best way to detox the side effect was to make myself cum anyway. I stopped Raven for a moment to change position, I want to reward her too. We then engaged in sixty-nine, eating each other’s pussies.

Not long after, my body spasmed, in pleasure, I cum from her tongue licking. But I wasn’t able to make Raven’s cum for the second time before my mind went blank in bliss.

“Sleep tight, Miss Agent.” I heard Raven whisper in my ear before I lost my consciousness.

To be continued in the next chapter.

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