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Chapter 4
by marvelfan
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Susan Storm Intergalactic Breeder Issue 3: Reed's Training!
Negative Zone....Nexus of Igoa system....Baluur Vertat.....Grondaar's castle....
Reed Richards waited in his cell to start the day. He was naked and chained up, wearing only a control collar. He refused to leave Susan in this horrid place. Susan had sent Johnny and Ben home. Even though merely minutes would pass for them, days had passed in the place. Susan, to save her team had agreed to be Grondaar's consort. There was plenty more to the arrangement, but Reed thought only of his wife. The scientist himself was turned into a **** of Grondaar and Baluur. Punishement for not leaving. Reed had been chemically castrated. A process that could be turned off on a whim, Reed discovered.
He heard the door to his cell and thought it would be a "bug twin". In fact, Grondaar had a dozen exact clone like female Argosian insectoid drones as slaves. Bia, Chia, Dia, Gia, Kia, Lia, Mia, Nia, Sia, Tia, Xia, Zia. It was simple to name them alphabetically Reed presumed. There was also a female Kestoran, large and green. A mute humanoid with dark hair, dark skin and full body tatoos, probably a Shadow City citizen A flat bodied, twisting muscled Tarsuu female. A lion like tall female Tyannan with a red mane. He wondered if Tyannans weren't related somehow to Baluurians.
In walked Sia, and the insectoid moved through door so the tattooed black haired girl could enter with the days "equipment". Reed knew no he would suffer humiliation quite often here. He sort of compartmentalized his mind and began studying these beings and this place. Sort of allowing his body to be manioulated for the greater good.
Sia moved to the viewing port. "What would you like to watch today Professor," she called him. Reed explained it didn't matter and he still refused to play the "game". But Sia pressed a button and the rock wall lit up wth a scene. It was his wife, in bed with Lord Grondaar. She was slowly riding his huge cock. The camera was behind them, showing Susan's ass and her pussy sinking onto alien cock. Her moans filled the chamber.
Reed heard the SNAP of gloves being put on. Then he groaned when a finger dove into his naked rear. He felt the gel on her finger as the Tattooed one pushed her finger in his ass. Whatever they fed Reed chemically castrated him. They told him that. However, this gel, applied to his prostate temporarily reversed that process.
"Oh god maaaaster," he heard Susan moan. "I'm cumming". Reed looked up to see his wife holding her breasts as her body shook on the massive alien cock. She seemed to be enjoying herself with Grondaar now. A smile was on her face.
Sia laughed. "You're doing so well." She was looking down at Reed's crotch. He followed her gaze and noticed what she saw. He felt it as well as beheld it, his cock was hard. Very hard. All five extended inches. He couldn't use his powers, so here, he had an average humans length and girth.
A noise of a squirting tube filled Reed's ears. In the reflection on the darker corners of the viewing wall, the girl behind him was rubbing lotion on her hands. Her fingers had tattoos as well. Small markings all over her. Reed knew them to be words in ancient Balurrian. The insectoid female had some too. Not as many. The Tattooed girl had them all over from her feet to her large dark skinned breasts with the dark nipples. She was tan no doubt due to the twin negative suns of this world. Her nipples were pierced and connected to a belly button piercing and a vagin piercings. All hooped rings, threaded with a small gold chain, linked to her collar. Some of the chain even went to her nose piercing. Her face was covered in makeup like an Egyptian, or Shadow City denizen. Her eyes had a tatoo of a black line, like a eye mask that wrapped around her head. Her blue eyes reminded Reed of Susan's eyes. Her hair was shaved on the sides and long and black on top. She was beautiful...but mute.
Thw insectoid was no less gorgeous even for an alien. Her body was long, with six limbs. Four small mounds for breasts and a similar set of nipple rings. He couldn't see her pussy which was below her thorax and towards the front of her abdomen region which pointed away fro. Reed. He still saw the chain link which implied a similar pussy ring. He noted a now flat ovipositor sticking out from behind her. She had large eyes on a buglike head, but her midsection was very human in its curves, including the four teats. She too had a nose ring in large nasal holes. which connected to a collar around her neck. Her antennae moved when she was talking, inquisitive, excited or afraid. Her hands were three digits, however, and he was happy the human Tattooed girl was doing the "work".
The dark tan hand, with black markings reached around and gripped Reed's cock softly. She began to pump his dick slowly, a squishing nosie filled the room now from the lotion lubrication.
While Tattooed girl masturbated him, Sia asked the questions. "What would you like to view as you enjoy release Professor?" She flipped through scenes of Susan and Grondaar being initmate.
"I do not want this," Reed again pleaded, but the tattoed girl didn't stop. She kept pumping slowly.
Sia laughed. She knew what this man liked to view. "You love watching your wife please the master with her mouth." Sia stated turning on a new video. This one of Susan sitting by Grondaar's knees as he sat on the throne.
Reed knew what he was viewing. He'd seen it a dozen times now. Susan jerking Grondaar's massice dick and licking the tip. His blonde wife looked up at the warlord. "You really dont think I can do this." She taunted.
Reed felt the young dark skinned **** begin to pump his dick harder with more pressure. He involuntarily groaned from the sensation.
"Impossible!" The evil King answered.
Susan Storm opened her mouth wide and took the alien cock-tip into her mouth. It looked like she would gag, but shs didn't. Instead, shs slid her mouth down. Reed watched an inch and then two slip into Susan's mouth. Slowly she slid five inches, back and forth, and then seven. Reed's wife gripped the cock base of the alien and began to bob her head. The scientist suspected Grondaar gave her powers back to some extent. Enough cock slid past her lips to be touching her gag reflex, but Susan kept going, breathing heavy through her nose.
The tan slavegirl jerked Reed's cock hard and fast now. Reed watched the screen before him in amazement, seeing this same scene for the tenth time. Susan had taken two thirds of Grondaar's length into her now bulging throat. Suddenly, and Reed knew it was coming, part of Susan's body disappeared. To many, seeing a half split human would be horrific, but with the dick clear in her throat it was magnificent to watch.
Grondaar himself watched with amazement as Susan's half visible form showed his cock slicing up and down in her throat, as her anatmoy class-like form sucked him down. "UNCANNY!" Veins, bone, arteries were all visible as well as a cock slicing in her throat.
The girl behind Reed was trying to keep a pace as she masturbated the hero who watched his wife suck a Warlords cock.
Everyone in the **** quarters knew what was coming. Susan's half formed body took Grondaar all the way until her visible nose portions hit his stomach. Grondaar bellowed his lion's roar and visible seed entered right into Susan's stomach.
The tattooed girl and Sia, the insectoid knew Reed, despite his reservations would be joining their video lord. Sia reached out with her digits and rolled Reed's balls. Tattooed girl rubbed Reed's left shoulder with her free hand and shucked his cock hard.
"Uh....ahhhhh." Reed's head fell back as his dick erupted, cum splashing on the floor before him. He couldn't fight it. With a heavy sigh, Reed knew his new place. He was being trained to enjoy watching. This he knew.
Day in and day out, Reed was masturbated by Grondaar's female slaves while he watched his wife defiled. It got to the point where he began getting erections hearing the doors open.
When this was discovered, he was allowed out yo help serve the Lord. When Reed saw his wife for the first time, she sat with Grondaar in a meeting that Reed served drinks. He wore nothing, and when Susan touched Grondaar's leg, Reed sported an obvious erection.
More days past and soon the girls didn't jerk him off. To add insult to injury, they merely applied the oinment to his prostate until he was in so much discomfort he had to masturbate while the **** girls watched.
Soon, the "Consort Coronation Ceremony" was at hand. Reed had said few words to Susan in weeks. He waited eagerly in his room. He was unsure of what was to transpire, though Sia called it "wonderful" and "gorgeous" . He hated how erect he was. When he heard the door open, he was disappointed to see the Tattooed mute with ointments for his prostate.
When she saw his erection her eyss lit up with amusement. She made a "jerk off" sign with her hands. Reed did as instructed. She watched with a smile as he faced away and began. He watched Susan take Grondaar's cock for that first time on the viewing wall. It didn't take long, as his cock exploded quickly. That scene and Sue's reaction of lust was his favorite.
Suddenly then door opened and Reed did not recongize the Balurrian in strange Ceremony garb. "Who stands before the high priest."
The Tattooed Egyptian girl stood up. "Susan Storm-Richards of Earth." She said proudly, and Reed almost fell over hearing her voice. He then saw her blue eyes. How could he be so dumb. "This is my husband Reed Richards." She smiled to Reed devilishly. She hadn't been seperated as Reed thought, she'd been with him the whole time.
The prieat looked to Reed. "He has seen your TRUE FORM!" The alien priest then looked to a puddle of seed on the ground. "And you have seen his....what do you say Susan Storm of Earth."
Susan walked past Reed with her head high, and dug her foot into Reed's cum puddle. She twisted her foot. "I reject it."
What's next?
Invisible Woman in the Negative Zone
Trapped Alone in the Zone
Sue responds to a call in the negative zone, only to be cut off from Earth and her team. Alone and without help, what will she do? A companion piece to the Savage Land Story.
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Updated on Jun 14, 2025
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Created on Aug 23, 2016
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