Suggestions

Dear viewers or readers,

As the author of this erotica, i request you to give me your suggestions to improve this story. I am not a experienced writer, in fact, i am just a newbie. I want to write many different paths, but i dont have that many ideas.

And i would love if you would tell me about any problems in the story. I am not good at maintaining continuity in my stories, so i would appreciate if you spot my mistakes.

TLDR - Give me suggestions!