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Chapter 7 by CorpseKing
Who is changed next?
Shampoo
The second half of the equation which was her future expanded family was her own great granddaughter, Shampoo. Some of the blame for the closing failure of the wedding hunt could be laid at the feet of the amazon maiden. Some of it was inherient in her character, while others were cases of the tide of luck bashing against her. Now the deck had been shuffled and the matriarch knew where each card was going to fall, because she was going to be the one dealing. She had a few points to narrow down for the smoothing out the wrinkles in the relationship.
'A little lift to her tactical skills and her knowledge of seduction. A better sense of timing would also allow her to keep from overloading the brain of son-in-law. Like taming a real wild horse, gentle movements will gain better results then harsher actions. This will also help her if she decides to take up the challenge of becoming a leader of her people or even a matriarch. If only for the ability to know when best to move forward and when to retreat from battle.' Cologne had no illusion on the intellect of her great granddaughter, unlike many of the Japanese. Many saw the inability to speak simple, raw japanese as a lack of brains. Anyone who saw the complex plans the young warrior developed to catch her husband, get rid of Mousse or her rival or just get what she wants... it took a well developed mind to create these creative blueprints. Even if they failed much of the time due to factors she had yet to take into account.
'Next is the cruel element of her own personality, which is a turn off for son-in-law. I guess it is partially my fault for not reigning her in. Cruelty should not be used at every encounter with a foe. Only those who deserve cruelty should recieve it, and then only if there is no other way to punish them. **** should also be visited on the right person and only used when controlled by justice. Diminishing the cruelty to levels expected of a wise amazon and the understanding that justice must come before vengance must be added.' Cologne was making a mental check list to the faults which needed to be corrected. The first two had been neutralized, others still remained.
'The unfortunate luck of gaining a curse form of the same creature which causes a mental breakdown for the future groom has plagued Shampoo. Yet she has not earned a curse for her condition by the laws of hero women, even with the power I now have I do not want to violate the laws. Yet with the power to change reality with a click of the keyboard, I might be able to come up with a change. I have a fun little idea which I have been dying to use.' thought Cologne as she started to build on the thought.
The idea was to mix a female form of her great granddaughter with the form of a powerful spirit or creature. Obvious choices were that of a long or kitsune. A Raiju, a creature of lightning and fire, would make an interesting choice. Many creatures were given this name like cats, monkeys and weasels. Yet the one she was thinking of was a wolf of lightning or flame. For another element would be that of a Yuki-onna with power over ice and snow, with perhaps some ghostly powers.
'What should I do with the curse?'
What curse does Shampoo gain?
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The Genie in the Machine
The adventure of a Computer based Genie in the worlds of Fiction.
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