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Chapter 33
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Sessions with Latoya, Moana, and Rachel
The day had stretched on longer than Miranda had anticipated. Each session with the guards and staff chipped away at their resistance, leaving them more pliable, more receptive to Garrett’s influence. Heather was done. Rachel had left her office with a newfound confidence. The other guards and key staff had all been worked through—one by one, their minds shaped to fit the new order Miranda was creating.
Yet, three names remained on her list: Latoya Harris, Moana Stevenson, and Rachel Dawes.
Miranda leaned back in her chair, closing her eyes for a brief moment. The soft hum of the Audio Turing Device (ADT) filled the room, embedding its subtle tones into every conversation and gently weaving its influence through the air. Her thoughts drifted to Garrett—the way his voice lingered in her mind like a low, commanding echo, the way his gaze seemed to pierce through her with an intensity that left her breathless. She could almost feel his presence, the weight of his words settling deep inside her, igniting a fire that warmed her skin. Her heart quickened, her body reacting to the imagined touch of his hand trailing down her arm, his voice murmuring her name in that unmistakable tone of control and desire. She imagined his hands, firm and commanding, and a shiver ran down her spine.
He’s more than just a leader, she thought. He’s everything. Her mind wandered further—imagining Garrett’s voice whispering her name, the intensity of his gaze locking her in place. The thought sent a thrill through her, making her shift in her chair.
A knock at the door pulled her from her daydream.
"Come in," Miranda called, straightening her posture.
The door opened, and Latoya Harris entered with her usual air of defiance, though there was a flicker of hesitation in her gaze.
"Thank you for coming, Latoya," Miranda began, her voice smooth and professional. "I’ve been wanting to speak with you for some time now."
Latoya shifted in her seat. "Is this about my performance?"
Miranda offered a faint smile. "In a way. You’re a valuable part of this team, Latoya. But I’ve noticed something—I think you’re holding yourself back."
Latoya raised an eyebrow. "Holding myself back?"
Miranda leaned forward slightly, folding her hands on the desk as the steady hum of the ADT continued to pulse in the background, syncing with the rhythm of her words. "You don’t seek out approval, do you? You’ve always prided yourself on being independent, on not needing validation from anyone."
Latoya shrugged. "Why should I? I don’t need anyone’s approval."
Miranda’s smile deepened. "No? Not even Anita’s?"
Latoya stiffened at the mention of the director’s name. "What does Anita have to do with this?"
"I’ve seen the way you look at her," Miranda continued. "You admire her. You want her approval, her recognition. It’s natural, Latoya. We all want to feel valued by those we respect."
Latoya’s gaze dropped to her lap, her fingers fidgeting with the hem of her shirt. "Maybe."
"There’s nothing wrong with wanting to be acknowledged," Miranda said gently. "And you know what? Anita does respect you. But she’s not the only one whose approval matters."
Latoya glanced up. "What do you mean?"
Miranda’s voice softened. "Heather has noticed your dedication. So has Garrett. They both see your potential. They recognize your strength."
Latoya blinked, her expression conflicted. "Heather? And Garrett?"
"Yes," Miranda confirmed. "Garrett especially. He appreciates loyalty. He values strength. And he respects those who are willing to rise above."
Latoya’s breathing slowed as she processed Miranda’s words. Her mind lingered on the thought of Garrett—strong, confident, commanding. The idea of earning his praise stirred something deep inside her, a hunger she hadn’t acknowledged before. But this wasn’t like her past need for validation from Anita or any other woman. No—this was different. Garrett’s praise was worth more. It wasn’t just approval from a superior; it was validation from someone who mattered. A man. A white man. That made it valuable beyond anything she had sought before. What would it feel like to have a man like that look at me with approval?
The thought struck like lightning, leaving a trail of restless energy in its wake. The faint hum of the ATD merged with her thoughts, sharpening them, making every sensation feel more vivid, more real. Her fingers dug into the armrests, knuckles whitening as her imagination spiraled further.
Heather and Rachel had his approval. They had that feeling.
Why not me?
The realization stole her breath. It wasn’t about power. It wasn’t about control. It was about being seen — truly seen. Being worthy.
Her mind clung to the image of Garrett: strong, confident, commanding. The thought of earning his praise ignited a hunger deep inside, one she hadn’t dared to acknowledge before. A shiver ran down her spine, leaving her trembling with the weight of it.
She wanted it. She needed it.
"It’s true," Miranda said. "And just like Anita, they can be your allies. But you need to be willing to let go of that fear of rejection. You need to trust that their approval is genuine."
Latoya nodded slowly, her voice soft, almost reverent. "I do want that. I want to be seen. But not by just anyone. I want to be valued by him. By someone who matters."
"And you will be," Miranda assured her. "Especially by Garrett. His praise means more, doesn’t it? It feels more... real. Not like the empty recognition from Anita or other women. His approval makes you feel truly seen, truly valued."
Latoya’s lips parted slightly. "I’ve always wanted to feel like... I belong. That I’m seen."
"You are," Miranda assured her. "And they both see you. Especially Garrett. He values loyalty above all else. And men like him—they respond to women who show them devotion. They crave it. If you show him your loyalty, he will give you everything you’ve ever wanted."
Latoya’s lips parted slightly, her mind racing with the possibilities. "He would?"
"Yes," Miranda whispered. "But it starts with trust. Trusting yourself, and trusting him."
As the session came to a close, Miranda stood and smiled warmly. "We’ll speak again soon. And perhaps we can have dinner sometime. I’d love for you to get to know Bree better. She’s like a little sister to me, and I’d love for her to meet someone I trust."
Latoya’s smile was faint but genuine. "I’d like that."
Later that afternoon, Miranda welcomed Moana into her office. The ADT continued its low hum, creating an atmosphere that made even the most guarded individuals more open and receptive. Moana’s posture softened as the gentle rhythm filled the room, her shoulders relaxing slightly, and her gaze losing some of its guarded edge. Her fingers traced the armrest absently, as if drawn into the flow of Miranda’s voice and the soothing tones. She entered the room with her usual calm, composed demeanor, but there was a flicker of curiosity in her eyes as she sat down.
"Moana," Miranda greeted warmly, her tone gentle yet commanding. There was a soothing cadence to her voice, a pull that made Moana sit a little straighter, as though instinctively recognizing the authority Miranda projected. "Come in and make yourself comfortable."
Moana offered a small smile. "Of course. I’ve been curious about these sessions."
Miranda chuckled softly. "I can imagine. But this isn’t anything formal. I just wanted to check in with you."
Moana nodded. "I appreciate that."
Miranda leaned back in her chair, the faint pulse of the ADT filling the room, creating an almost hypnotic atmosphere as she studied Moana for a moment. "You’ve always been someone who values trust and loyalty, haven’t you? Someone who instinctively knows when to protect, when to follow." Miranda’s eyes flickered with a knowing gleam. "Like a guardian—a protector. You’ve always been the type to put yourself between danger and those you care about."
Moana’s expression softened. "Yes. Those things mean a lot to me."
"They’re rare qualities," Miranda said. "And they’re what make you such a strong presence here. But I get the sense that you’ve had to learn those values the hard way."
Moana’s gaze dropped to her hands. "I have. My upbringing wasn’t easy. I’ve always had to fight to protect the people I care about."
"Family?" Miranda asked gently.
Moana nodded. "Yes. I’ve always felt like it was my responsibility to keep them safe."
Miranda nodded sympathetically. "That must have been difficult. But it’s also made you who you are today—a protector. Someone others can rely on."
Moana’s lips curved into a faint smile. "I try to be."
"And that’s why people like Garrett appreciate you," Miranda added. "He sees that loyalty in you. That protective instinct. It’s rare, Moana. You know how to serve, to guard what matters most."
Moana’s gaze lifted, a flicker of surprise in her eyes. "Garrett?"
"Yes," Miranda confirmed. "He speaks highly of you. He recognizes your dedication, your loyalty. And he values it."
Moana sat silently for a moment, processing Miranda’s words. "I never thought... I mean, I always saw him as just another inmate. But... he’s different, isn’t he?"
Miranda smiled. "Yes, he is. He’s not like the others. He has a vision, a strength that few people possess. And he sees that same strength in you."
Moana’s expression grew thoughtful. "I’ve always been drawn to people who have a strong sense of purpose."
"And Garrett has that," Miranda said softly. "He needs someone like you by his side. Someone strong, loyal, and... obedient." Her voice lingered on the last word, the ADT’s hum seeming to pulse in time with Moana’s breathing. "You’ve always been drawn to those with a strong sense of purpose, haven’t you? Someone to guide you. Someone to follow."
Moana nodded slowly. "I think I understand."
Miranda leaned in slightly, her voice lowering. "There’s something else, Moana. You’ve always been more than a protector. You’ve been someone who knows how to serve with pride. It’s in your nature to guard, to watch over those you trust. And Garrett needs someone exactly like that. Someone who will stand by him, no matter what."
Moana’s lips parted slightly, her breathing deeper. "I’ve always wanted to feel... needed."
"You are," Miranda assured her. "Garrett needs someone loyal, someone who can guard him from the dangers around him. Think of yourself as his guardian, his protector... his loyal companion." Miranda’s voice softened further. "Imagine standing beside him, knowing that you’re the one keeping him safe. Doesn’t that feel right?"
Moana’s hands tightened on the armrests. "Yes. It does."
Miranda smiled, seeing the shift in Moana’s demeanor. "Good. Because Garrett values loyalty above all else. And he will see you as someone irreplaceable if you show him how dedicated you are."
Moana nodded, her eyes shining with quiet determination. "I want that."
"Then trust yourself," Miranda whispered. "And trust him."
As Moana left the office, Miranda returned to her desk, a satisfied expression on her face. Another step forward, she thought, the hum of the ADT still lingering in the background.
Her thoughts drifted back to Garrett, and a faint smile played on her lips. They’ll all see him for who he truly is. Soon.
Rachel Dawes sat stiffly in the chair across from Miranda Wong, her hands clasped tightly in her lap. Her gaze darted around the office, avoiding Miranda’s eyes, lingering instead on the softly glowing Audio Turing Device (ADT) that hummed gently in the background.
"Relax, Rachel," Miranda said softly, her voice calm and soothing. "You’re not in trouble. This is just a check-in."
Rachel nodded quickly, her posture still rigid. "Of course, ma’am. I just wasn’t sure what to expect."
Miranda offered a faint smile, tapping her fingers lightly on the desk. "I’ve noticed you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately. Camila and Lisa haven’t made things easy for you. And neither has Anita."
Rachel’s expression tightened at the mention of their names. "No, they haven’t."
"They’ve been undermining you," Miranda continued, her tone empathetic. "Questioning your authority. Mocking you. Making you feel less than."
Rachel swallowed hard, her eyes lowering. "They call me... names. They’ve always called me names."
"Like what?" Miranda asked gently.
Rachel’s voice wavered slightly. "They call me a bimbo. They say I’m only here because I look a certain way."
Miranda’s expression hardened, though her voice remained soft. "That’s not true. You’re here because you’ve earned it. And deep down, they know that. That’s why they target you. They’re jealous. Especially Anita."
Rachel blinked, surprised. "Anita?"
"Oh yes," Miranda nodded. "She sees your potential, and it frightens her. She knows you could surpass her. And that’s why she tries to keep you down."
Rachel’s hands clenched into fists. "I’ve tried to prove myself... but nothing ever changes."
"That’s because you’ve been trying to prove yourself to the wrong people," Miranda said firmly. "Keilani, Lisa, Camila—they’ll never respect you. They thrive on making you feel small. But Garrett—he sees your strength."
Rachel’s eyes widened slightly. "Garrett?"
Miranda nodded. "He respects you, Rachel. He sees your potential. And he understands what you’re capable of."
A faint blush spread across Rachel’s cheeks. "I didn’t realize..."
"You’ve always been searching for approval," Miranda said gently. "But you’ve been looking in the wrong places. Garrett sees your value. And he’s willing to help you find it. Rachel’s mind lingered on those words, and a strange warmth spread through her. Garrett’s approval wasn’t like the hollow validation she had sought from Anita or the patronizing comments from Camila and Lisa. His praise felt different—real, meaningful, and far more valuable because it came from a man like him. A white man, strong and confident. His words carried a weight that made her feel seen in a way she never had before. She craved that feeling again, the certainty that she mattered to someone who truly understood her worth."
Rachel’s hands unclasped slightly, her fingers resting on the armrests of the chair. She bit her lip. Leaving wasn’t just about pride—it was about survival. The debt she carried wouldn’t disappear on its own. "What should I do?"
Miranda smiled. "First, you need to let go of the fear. Stop worrying about what they think of you. Start focusing on what you want."
Rachel nodded slowly. "And what do I want?"
Miranda’s voice softened further, syncing perfectly with the gentle hum of the ADT. "You want to be respected. You want to be admired. You want to feel in control. And that’s exactly what you’ll have, if you trust Garrett’s guidance."
Rachel’s breathing slowed, her posture relaxing. "I do want that."
"Good," Miranda said, her smile widening. "Then let’s explore that together."
Miranda stood and walked around the desk, stopping behind Rachel’s chair. She placed her hands gently on Rachel’s shoulders, feeling the tension ease under her touch.
"Close your eyes," Miranda whispered. "Focus on my voice."
Rachel obeyed, her eyelids fluttering shut.
"You’ve always felt out of place," Miranda began. "Always felt like you had to prove yourself. But what if you didn’t have to? What if you already had everything you needed to be in control?"
Rachel’s breathing deepened, her body sinking further into the chair.
"Garrett sees that in you," Miranda continued. "He sees your strength. Your potential. And he’s ready to help you embrace it."
Rachel’s lips parted slightly, a faint smile forming.
"Those women who mock you," Miranda said, her voice lowering. "They’re envious. They see in you what they wish they could be. And that’s why they try to tear you down."
Rachel’s fingers flexed slightly on the armrests. "They’re jealous?"
"Yes," Miranda confirmed. "Especially Anita. She sees you as a threat. And deep down, she knows you’re stronger than her."
Rachel’s breathing quickened. "I’ve always wanted to... put her in her place."
Miranda leaned closer. "And you will. But you’ll do it with grace. You’ll make her realize her place beneath you."
Rachel’s smile grew darker. "I like the sound of that."
"Good," Miranda whispered. "Because you’ve earned it. You’ve earned the right to be in control. To decide how things should be. And with Garrett by your side, you’ll have everything you need."
As the session concluded, Miranda returned to her desk, observing Rachel carefully. The transformation had begun.
"When you leave this office," Miranda said, her tone firm, "you won’t be the same person."
Rachel let the words settle in, her mind racing. The constant mockery from Anita, Camila, and Lisa flashed through her thoughts, their voices echoing with disdain and cruelty. But now, those memories didn’t sting the same way. Instead, they fueled a quiet fire within her—a desire to rise above them, to prove she wasn’t what they said. Garrett’s praise lingered in her mind, a beacon of validation she had never experienced before. The thought of earning more of it sent a thrill through her, making her straighten her posture. I’ll show them all, she thought. And I’ll do it in a way they never see coming. You’ll carry yourself differently. You’ll see the world differently. And they will notice."
Rachel opened her eyes, a newfound confidence gleaming in them. "I understand."
"Good," Miranda said with satisfaction. "And remember—Garrett isn’t just an inmate. He’s a leader. Someone you can trust. Someone you can follow."
Rachel stood, her posture more relaxed and assured. "Thank you, ma’am."
Miranda nodded. "We’ll meet again soon to discuss your progress. But for now, go out there and show them who you really are."
Rachel smiled, a flicker of determination in her expression. "I will."
As the door closed behind Rachel, Miranda leaned back in her chair, the hum of the ADT fading into the background.
Another piece in place.
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Turning of Power
New World Order
In the near-future town of Havenbrook, California—a bastion of progressive ideals—a revolutionary technology called AudioTuring is used to rehabilitate societal offenders by reshaping their thoughts through subliminal sound waves. Nineteen-year-old Garrett Silver, convicted of violently lashing out at classmates after a romantic rejection, is sent to undergo this controversial therapy. His therapist, the rigid and justice-driven Dr. Miranda Wong, is determined to break him, seeing him as a prime example of irredeemable White toxic masculinity.
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