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Chapter 17 by fantaghiro
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Sarah roleplays?
Sarah took James by the hand and pulled him to the bed. She gave a gentle push to his chest and James fell back onto it.
James lay back against the vast ocean of Kim’s silk sheets, chest rising and falling in unsteady rhythm. His hair—Ariel’s long golden hair—fanned out on the pillows, and he hardly recognized the sound of his own breath. Sarah—no, Kim—hovered above him, her body framed by the soft glow of the master bath’s recessed lights spilling into the bedroom.
Her lips trailed from his throat to his collarbone, each kiss both tender and insistent, like she was both coaxing and claiming him. He trembled under her weight, every nerve raw, every touch amplified by the strangeness of this new skin.
“Sarah…” His voice cracked on the name, too soft, too high-pitched, nothing like his own.
She pulled back just enough to meet his eyes. Her smile was slow, sly, wicked. “Sweetheart, you don’t have to call me Sarah anymore. Not when we’re here, like this.” Her hand grazed down his side, tracing the curve of Ariel’s hip, sliding across the hem of his skirt. “You’re Ariel. And I’m your mother. That’s all that matters right now.”
James’s chest tightened; the words sent a confusing ripple of dread and desire through him. He wanted to protest, to laugh it off as some sick roleplay—but his body betrayed him, arching up into her touch, a whimper escaping his lips before he could stop it.
Kim bent low, her breath hot against his ear. “Do you trust me?” she whispered. Her voice was low velvet, dangerous, intoxicating.
He couldn’t answer. His throat closed, caught between no and yes, between James and Ariel.
Her hand slipped beneath his skirt again, sliding under the lace of Ariel’s panties. The heat of her fingers made his back bow. A soft, involuntary cry burst from him—high, girlish, aching.
“That’s it,” she murmured, pressing her mouth to his temple. “That’s my good girl.”
His pulse pounded in his ears, blood rushing like a storm. The word girl echoed, reverberated. It didn’t just feel like she was calling him something; it felt like she was reminding him of something he had forgotten.
James clutched weakly at her arm. “I—I shouldn’t…” His words dissolved into a moan as her fingers explored deeper, finding the slickness already waiting for her. His face flushed hot, shame and rapture tangled into a knot in his chest.
Sarah—Kim—looked down at him, eyes gleaming. “You don’t have to think right now. Just feel. Let yourself be Ariel. Let me take care of you.”
And as she moved against him, kissing his lips for the first time with full hunger, James felt the line between self and other—the husband, the father, the girl, the daughter—stretch thinner, ready to snap.
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The Ultimate Transplant
Someone you know is given a new body & life
PLEASE ADD CHAPTERS! A close friend or family member is horribly injured in an accident. As they lay dying in the emergency room, another patient dies of a brain aneurysm. Both of them are organ donors, so a surgeon decides it's the perfect opportunity for him to try an experimental surgery. He transplants the victim's higher brain (the cerebellum) to the donor's body in an attempt to 'save' a life. Amazingly it works. But the surgery was not approved so the hospital convinces the families to keep quiet, arguing that revealing this operation to the public would bring never-ending media attention to all involved. That means that the patient will have to publicly assume the identity of the donor. What will this mean to your friends and family? Who else will you tell? Although you will spend a lot of time and effort giving support, how will all this alter your relationship to the patient? And how will he or she adapt to a complete change of body and identity? Many transformation stories focus on the change or victim, so I thought it would be interesting to instead have the POV be someone who sees the change from the outside. Writers feel free to explore a change in age, gender, class or ethnicity - and the repercussions that change would have on the main character (and others). This is from my writing.com story with thanks and credit to other contributors, especially Wassel, Wordsmitty, and Enigma. Please see the original at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1886863-The-Ultimate-Transplant for the original authors' posts. Also you should check out Wassel's version at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1974478-The-Transplant ).
Updated on Jun 24, 2026
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