Rize prepares for a post-orgasm meal

"That was maybe the best ass I've ever fucked. I just hope you taste as amazing as your ass was." Rize said with a sigh as she lay there with her eyes closed. Kaneki was curled up on the ground next to her, his cock still aching but with no release, and his ass so sore he wasn't sure he'd be able to stand on his legs.

He knew this was his only chance to escape, so he tried his best to stand on his shaky legs. Neither he or Rize, however, saw the metal beams hurling towards them from above.

It happened so suddenly Kaneki was never even aware of it. A large pile of steel beams landed on them both, completely crushing Rize. Kaneki's legs and his lower torso were also caught by the beams, and he immediately passed out upon impact.

A lone ghoul stood above and looked at the mess he had just created. Only small streams of blood trickling out from under the beams signified that the ghoul known as Rize Kamashiro ever existed. The ghoul had arrived a lot later than he had planned, but luckily Rize took so long to enjoy her victims that she was still here when he arrived. The ghoul admired their handiwork one last time before he set off into the night.

His job there was finished.

A quick note from the author:

Hello. Thanks for reading the story so far.

I suspect that many of you found this scene too drawn out for it to really be that pleasurable. This was slightly intentional, as I wanted to really milk the first scene since Kaneki has no idea what's coming to him beforehand, but perhaps I went too far. Please let me know if this is the case in the comments. If this is well received, the first erotica chapter of the other thread will most likely also be slightly more drawn out.

The 2nd and beyond scenes in both threads should be less involved and more immediate though. Also if you have any other general tips in writing smut, please let me know. I think I'm a decent writer in general, but writing erotica is quite a bit different and I'm sure I have much to learn.

Thanks again for reading

Neiro