Chapter 11 by WBD
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Repti ceremoni
The divine or potentially hellish glowing blood red light floated down into the large golden throne "Hello Jack my chosen vessel for the evolution of our new glorious crocodilian, aligatian or whatever reptile thingy race of this new world. I loved watching the discovery channel in the old reality and there always seemed to be scenes where stuff got nommed by some water dwelling chomper, **** and the food chain were always parts of life so I thought hey why not make a crocgaytorrepti-people in this one, only it seems like they haven't been doing so well against the other races and we need to evolve them a bit ascend them to greatness so we can nom nom nom. The males are weak and cowardly un-opportunistic to careless prey and the females don't have the necessary biology to dominate yet or well we get by but why not improve on mediocrity, but it's ok fellow peoples here today I the goddess Kelly am your salvation, let the ceremony begin!"
Jack watched as the light started to fade becoming less luminous and revealing Kelly's giantess femodile humanoid form. Jack whilst being a decent sized man of maybe almost 6ft had felt small in comparison to the queen before she must have been around 7ft, Kelly before him now was even larger maybe 8ft even a true giant croc lady of sorts. Her blond hair long and flowing, her reptilian head spikes and ears? dark greenish grey spiky and scaled . She was adorned in gold and green jewellery and headdress all very Egyptian themed. Like her loyal queen beside her she had colourful eyeshadow and intricate black eyeliner which accentuated her beauty. Her pale skin contrasted with most of the women Jack had seen so far of course there was a decent amount of variation but a proportion were tanned brown and or greyer scaled from the harsh desert sun or just flat out green from their scales. She had bright green piercing lizard like eyes and a very scary reptile smile if you could call it that, her mouth whilst human looking clearly had the wrong teeth for a human and what would have passed for green lipstick only it wasn't it was just natural. Jack started to lower his view, noticing her large chest, perfect breasts only a goddess could have they were slightly scaled but still humanoid looking, toned stomach and arm muscles of course she didn't need them herself but all the same she was fit, almost all her skin seemed to be a mix of scaled and humanoid smooth and had pigments varying from green to pink depending on the area in question. Lower still her hands and for arms seemed to look like the could be called crocodilian, they were heavily scaled on the arm parts as if a protective armour and whilst the hands were scaly humanoid and pigmented green he felt like they were more durable somehow as well as nails could potentially extend and scratch like claws. Of course the queen also had these and Jack knew her grip had already seemed very tight and powerful. Lower still he saw her feminine waist and lighter patch of non scaled skin before seeing her goddess hood. Legs spread he saw her massive reptilian sheath a genital slit and a mesmerising thick white liquid slowly tearing leaking from a point pink tip peaking out, below it a colossal double globed set of femadile goddess breeding balls and tucked comfortably away was a durable thick reptilian tail like that of a crocodile. Her legs strong and toned with heavy scaled plating. "You like what you see my Jack I think it's a large improvement over what these random crocks and gators have have at the moment, its also the enhanced human aspects of the body too, if you hold on a sec I'll use my godly powers to explain the old and new biology of our current race."
She stood up to begin her speeches to the congregation of the entire race of reptilians. "My subjects, you have prayed tirelessly to your goddess and I have appeared to lead you to salvation. Do not be alarmed I the great goddess Kelly will use my ethereal powers to show you the salvation to the situation and solution to all your problems, together we will evolve and achieve your races goals."
Jack watched as what seemed to be a holographic projection appeared before him and the visions of all others. "It has become apparent that you are in decline, food is slipping threw our grasp more often and something must be done or we will be wiped out, the females more agitated and stressed by oncoming forces of other races who out wit us and the males are becoming weaker and more stupid and unaggressive with each generation slowly losing ability to fight and hunt. This causing great stress on our borders, food supply's and empty belly's and security of course not to mention that the birth rates themselves are lower than ever and female sexual frustration at an all time high due to poor male timing mainly surprise penetrations to put it nicely, unwanted mating without consent if we could call it that or poor male performance during, it seems your sexual pleasure game is as weak as you are you weak pitiful males and the ladies end up in pain **** and awaiting the laying of a very small fertile clutch or sometimes maybe not even that." Jack watched as the hologram showed a naked male and female repti couple , whilst the male didn't look weak to him arguably still the stronger of the two genders though the female didn't not look strong either but hearing it from a goddess made it seem more true in his mind.
The speech continued and so did the hologram Jack now watching the male with his small jagged penis approach the rear of the unsuspecting female whose tail was unexpecting exposing her lady slit hole , from this angle Jack could now see the holographic genitals she in fact did have a reptilian like vaginal or something like structure. The male jumped her and viciously inserted his holographic jagged penis inside her what looked like a pink insides before thrusting aggressively stabbing his phallus in with no care five times or so the female desperately trying to get away before he thrust hard and ended blowing his tiny load, of course the female could not escape trapped on his penis with jagged ridges that she could not remove herself from without pain. Of course the male continued for another round of weaker less purposeful fucking and eventually let the female go by tearing out his penis with a swift motion injuring her insides. "Of course it's no secret males are becoming sub par mates unable to satisfy the female and barely able to produce a notable amount of semen with a lack of sperms able to get to her internal womb, not to mention none of it being consensual due to animalistic nature. Additional to this it's clear that testosterone and sperm levels are falling rapidly and soon if nothing is done your race will cease to exist due to the inability to mate and impregnate."
"Luckily for you I the great Kelly have heard your priestesses prayers and myself and the queen have concocted a necessary evolutionary plan to not only save but advance this species so it can truly achieve its goals of supremacy over all, soon we will feast and breed in a more positive manner, my darling reptilians soon you will be making strong numerous babies and if not food they shall become and we can strengthen our nation. Any who appose us shall become our dinner even our own though we shall refrain from making a meal of ourselves , the adult females at least. hahaha " Kelly raising her arms to the sky in triumphant fashion.
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Jack and Kelly's excellent adventure
A spinoff of "changing the rules" by street0
(Changing the rules by street0) story line but just from one route, story follows Jack who downloads a app onto his phone that claims it can rewrite rules of the world. He is shocked to learn that it is real and it can. In this story Jack is a closet straight submissive with ideas of being in a more female lead world, various fetishes may occur depending on story branch. Idk I kinda just have ideas sometimes and write random rubbish.
Updated on Apr 26, 2026
by WBD
Created on Mar 27, 2025
by WBD
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