Reader's Suggestions

Please comment here if you have any suggestion about grammar, content...

I'm not an English speaker myself, so there will be many grammar mistakes. Note me about any part that needs a fix.

I'm also a new writer too, so forgive me for boring sex scenes.

NOTE 1: The worlds here is the alternative version, not the exact world from manga/novel/... it based on.

NOTE 2: This is a story I write to satisfy my own fetish, so consider before reading.

NOTE 3: All characters are 18 or above (at least technically)