Quite a good girl

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Chapter 10

"Tammy." It must be Tammy. This time I only look out the window of the moving bus for a moment, but I can't see anything that dissuades me from the belief that MCD should make sure that I can fuck my little sister.

Tammy Lynchwood / Little Girl "I'm sorry Daddy"

- As the subject progresses, it will take on more and more the personality of a little girl and see the user as her caring, firm but loving daddy. The user is responsible for raising, disciplining and improving the subject's behavior.

Progress Score: -100

The grin on my face doesn't disappear for quite a while as I look out the window again. This time I see a blooming landscape in front of me. More like the suburbs of New York. But my future definitely looks rosy.

Caring Daddy and Llittle Girl is exactly what I wanted for my rebellious little sister. But wait. If I increase her PS, she won't see me as her brother anymore. But she probably never has anyway. Maybe that's why the MCD chose her path.

Be that as it may, I can hardly wait to give Tammy the good news that there is finally a person she respects in her life again who will use gentle **** to ensure that she is happy and content.

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As I jump out of the bus, light-footed and with a sore jaw (too much manic grinning), I walk to the door with a song on my lips. Rose my best bro, Michelle my little pet and Tammy my... daughter? That leaves Michelle, who I will definitely activate next. The volleyball chicks are bitches, most of them anyway, but at home it's best when the family sticks together. And from the looks of things, I'll be the pivot, the glue in the middle, the man of the house.

Calm down, Finn. The PS is still too low. You're still the hard-to-accept adopted son who is ignored by everyone. Except Rose, of course.

But before I can go to my lovely little middle sister, I announce, quite uncharacteristically for me, in a loud, cheerful voice that I'm back home.

Several things happen in quick succession.

First, the door to the private area of ​​the house opens and my lovely pet mother Michelle Lynchwood storms into the room just as I'm taking off my jacket. Of course, I'm not expecting anything good, not just because she turned off the electricity for me and my bro sister and took away the beds. From PS -50, the subject suspects that something is wrong and Michelle is at -56. It won't be long before I have to deal with it. But now my eyebrows are raised, I've never seen such an excited, almost happy look.

It seems that your owner is back home.

But as quickly as she rushed into the room, her state changes again and she puts on the mask of the stubborn, irritated mother that I've been attacking so much in the last few days.

"Where have you been for so long?" she shoots at me after she has recovered from the shock. I could have noticed her happy look.

"Hey Mom!" I call and spread my arms. And Michelle takes a step towards me. Again her face warms up briefly. She really seems to be fighting the urge to be happy that I'm home again. Maybe I can use that to...

"Go away." It's a quiet threat that quickly becomes a loud one. "Go away!"

"Hey hey! What did I actually do to you?" Of course I know. Michelle is fighting against being domesticated into a pet, even if this reaction is a bit too strong, she's not even at the -50 threshold.

Or is something else playing a role? The subjects react differently to their transformation. I know that from Rose. So...

"First tell me what's going on?"

"What's going on? What's going on!?" Oh, this is going to be painful. "What's going on is that I have a useless, weak, stupid son who doesn't understand that I don't want to see him. Go to your room! Get out of here!"

In the past, that would have been enough to make me flee. But things are different now. And I know that you don't treat a pet like that.

"I'm going to get out of here," I say calmly as if I were talking to a traumatized animal that's afraid of me. Because that's exactly what Michelle is right now, even if she doesn't know it yet. "I'm just going to go into the kitchen for a minute, get something to eat and..."

"You won't do that!" Mom screams angrily. The whole house can hear her. But Jasmine and Tammy aren't home yet and hopefully Rose stays out of the line of fire. Michelle, on the other hand, can only do that, shoot angry words in my direction.

It's surreal.

I manage to block out her screams, don't look her in the eyes and walk slowly and carefully to the kitchen. If Michelle were aggressive... OK, she is aggressive, as a mother. But as a pet... She just screams at me, screams at me to go away, not to come near her. She is afraid of what is happening in her head. Or she has already acted according to her path like Rose did. I have to find out somehow. In any case, I manage to go to the fridge under my mother's hysterical, scared, confused screams while she stands in the next room, screaming and raging.

"Hm. Not much choice but..."

"Finn?" I turn around and when Michelle sees that I am looking in her direction, she screams even more.

"Get out of here! Get out of here! I hate you! I don't want you here! Get out of my head! Get out of my HEAD!" But I'm not paying attention to her, but to my bro sister Rose.

She stands frightened at the foot of the stairs leading up to our rooms, holding her hands to her chest and staring at me. When she realizes that it is me that Michelle is shouting at, she instinctively takes a step towards me.

But I stop her with a gesture and a shake of the head. Because Michelle notices the other stranger in the room and is too hysterical for human thoughts.

"You too! Get out of here! I hate you! You are not my daughter! Get out! Go away! Get out of here! I hate you!" Rose's mouth drops open.

"Mom what..." Her eyes become moist.

"Rose." I am surprised that my voice can reach her through the noise, calm and friendly. "Don't pay attention to her."

"Wh... What?" Rose stammers. But I hold out my arm.

"Don't pay attention to her. She's just scared. She doesn't mean those words." Frightened Rose looks to Mom, then me. I smile encouragingly and she moves.

Rose Lynchwood. +1 (PS -44)

"But I mean it!" Michelle screams angrily. "I hate you! I hate you both! You should get out of my life!" If I were her, these words would hurt me too, but someone who says such horrible things to their own children, including the two adopted ones, has done something that is extremely embarrassing or painful to them.

Do you already see me as your owner, but don't want to admit it? Or... I grin slightly. Or have you already acted accordingly? Embarrassing. Then I turn back to my sister and wave her over.

"Don't look her in the eyes, move slowly and show your hands." Rose hesitates. "I'm here for you, bro." And Rose smiles and moves as I told her.

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"Finn, what the hell is going on here?" she asks me, both of our heads conspiratorially stuck in the fridge.

"She's angry and scared," I whisper back as I look for something and find it. "Ah."

"What the... Finn, what are you up to?"

If I didn't know that the MCD was behind this, I would also think it was crazy.

The sausage in my hand wiggles funny as I walk towards our mother with my arm outstretched, the frightened Rose behind me.

"Shit..." whispers Rose. "Fuck... shit..."

"It's okay," I say to the two women and... "Exactly." Michelle sees the sausage in my hand, just a few feet away from her, and falls silent.

"I hate... ... ... What..." She tilts her head. "Finn, what... What's that supposed to mean..."

"A peace offering," I say reassuringly and smile with my teeth.

"Go away! I hate you!" Here we go again.

"Don't show your teeth," whispers Rose and I look at her in surprise. She shrugs her slim shoulders. “That just scares her.” And I remember what it says in the MCD. She wants to support me.

“Thank you.”

“It’s okay,” says my sister and we both look at the screaming Michelle. “That’s kind of wired, isn’t it?”

“Kind of... but...”

“Kind of not?” We look at each other again but say nothing. And then...

I take a few more steps and Michelle screams and rages louder and louder. She backs away, I stop, keep walking, Michelle backs away, I stop, wiggle the sausage, keep walking and... Michelle comes towards me. One step, another...

“We just want to be nice to you,” I say reassuringly. “I know you’re scared, Mom.” Another step. The sweat on her face makes her look manic, her cheeks are bright red, her nostrils are flared and her hair, usually so beautifully groomed, is disheveled. Rose stands behind me, holding onto my shoulder and staring, fascinated and worried, at the angry animal our mother seems to have turned into. And then...

Michelle jumps forward.

Michelle Lynchwood. +4 (PS -52)

Almost there.

"Good," I smile.

"Holy fuck," Rose whispers as our mother collapses against the wall and slides down. Her blouse slips a little and reveals parts of her stomach while her legs lose their strength and she sinks to her knees. With shaking hands she holds the sausage in her hand. Then her mouth opens and she nibbles on it. First carefully, then hungrily.

"Good..." I almost said 'good girl' but that's too early. "Verry good mom. Thank you." I take a step towards her.

"Watch out," Rose hisses urgently as if she's afraid our mother might bite off my hand.

"It's okay," I answer. "Right, mom?" Our eyes meet.

"Go away," she whispers, a growl. "Go away." A hiss. But no longer angry.

"Eat your sausage," I demand... And Michelle nibbles on her food. I smile, stretch out my hand and...

Michelle Lynchwood. +3 (PS -49)

The MCD vibrates in my pocket while my fingers gently and carefully rest on her head.

It's surreal.

Mom calms down, accepts my touch. She closes her eyes, tilts her head and I lean further down to her. Under my sister's eyes I stroke her head, slowly, carefully, gently. Then her cheek.

"What's happening?" Michelle whispers, eyes still closed, voice shaky.

"You're learning to trust me," I whisper back, not knowing if that's really true, but I think it's a good idea to accompany her on her path. Then I turn to Rose. She's standing there, her hands over her mouth, her eyes wide open, staring at me.

"Finn what the actual fuck..." But I tell her to be quiet while Michelle lowers her head, takes the sausage between her slightly trembling fingers and nibbles on it.

"She's a good girl" I say to Rose, then turned to Mom. "Right Mom? You trust me, right? And that was just an outburst of emotion, right?"

And she nods.

Michelle Lynchwood. +1 (PS -48)

That makes 700 tokens, a confused sister and an even more confused but currently calm mother. I slowly get up and lead Rose into our room.

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"Okay Finn... Finn... Finn what the hell was that?" But I don't listen to Rose. Not that I didn't want to, but her path isn't just for her. I look around our empty room.

"Tomorrow I'll get you something to sleep on," I state mater of factly and try to make out her face in the fading light of day. "And I'll get you some light."

"Finn... thanks, but Mom..."

"You can't live like this. I won't let you, do you understand?"

"Finn, shut up now, okay?" She stands in front of me while I march through the room and point out things I want to improve for her. Her small body bounces against mine and I put my arms around her, hugging her and holding her close.

"We won't live like this anymore, Rose. You deserve better." And her arms close around mine.

"You too," she says, not wanting to move her body away from mine, but bending back so far that she can look into my eyes. Her hair tickles my hands on her hips. "Both of us. You're a good brother, Finn. You're..."

At that moment, the door to our room flies open and blinds us with the glaring light from the hallway. Tammy's small silhouette, clad in her school outfit, stands in the doorway with her arms on her hips.

Rose immediately pushes herself away from me, but it's already too late.

"How disgusting are you two?" Tammy hisses at us and comes into our room without being asked. "That's disgusting. The two biggest losers I know and..." Then she remembers that she's actually in the room for something else. She marches straight past us to the window and rips it open so that the cool air and noise of the city reaches us. "You made Mom sad, you damn fuckers, and now you're sleeping on the floor like animals without any warmth." She looks at us with an evil grin. "You better watch out, otherwise..." Then her whimpering fills the air.

"Finn!" Rose screams, but I ignore her.

Tammy is small, delicate and helpless. I'm big and I finally know what I have to do.

"Get out of our room," I growl at my littlest sister, my hand on her neck, and push her outside.

"You can't do that, you asshole!" Tammy screams.

"But I can do it," I reply. Her skin is hot and dry as my fingers dig into her. Instinctively she raises her shoulders as I drag her outside to the door. I forcefully throw her into the hallway.

"You fucking..." But I grab her by the collar and pull her towards me again, never giving her time to adjust, our faces very close together.

"From now on you will knock if you want to come into our room," I growl like a wolf. "You will knock and wait until either I or Rose allow you to come in. And if not, then you will stay outside. I expect you to respect our privacy, just as we respect yours.” Tammy’s eyes widen. Her mouth is slightly open and her breathing seems to have stopped. “Have I made myself clear?”

“..."

"Anser me!"

"Yes.”

Tammy Lynchwood. +1 (PS -99)

A good start.

“Now go away.” I let her go and leave the confused, shocked girl standing in the hallway before I close the door with a loud bang in her face.

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Rose and I are alone. We look at each other. We are both breathing heavily.

“I didn’t mean to scare you,” I say. “Please excuse me. A lot is changing right now, you notice it too, I know. It’s confusing, even for me. But I just can’t watch our family keep pulling you down and keeping you small.” Rose stands in front of me, playing with her fingers and staring at my face, expressionless. “I don’t want to scare you, Rose. But things are going to change from now on, okay? We are a team and…”

I don’t get any further. Her body throws itself at me and her lips find mine.

Rose Lynchwood. +5 (PS -39)

And that’s 800 tokens. But I don’t pay attention to that. I don’t ask myself what I should spend the points on. I only have my sister’s voice in my ear.

“Shut up and fuck me you stupid moron.”

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Message from the author:

In the words of Tony Stark from Iron Man 2: It's good to be back! London was incredible! Such nice people. But I could hardly wait to continue writing. Shit, I'm really enjoying this story and it took me a little more than my 2000 words to write this chapter.

First of all, the promise that Jasmine will be given her path next. After that, we can then deal with the outside world. That will be great and I already have some good ideas.

Second of all, the poll for the 800 tokens. That will be... a little more complicated. But we can do it! Basically, it will be an open poll where you can tick several points. So what you most want to see. I will then base my decision on that. Chance of Pregnancy and Orgasm Denial had the most votes in my previous post, so I'll see if I can add them. Depending on how the poll goes, I might also manage to add two perks.

And since I got two very nice comments that advised me to only write something that I can work with, the only perks I can choose from are those that I can imagine being able to use right away.

My thought behind this selection is this: How can the MC use the perks to advance in the progress score for individual subjects? How can he combine the perks with the paths? I'll give you an example. Michelle, the pet, will of course get a tail at some point. Of course, sensitive ass would be a great tool to make her role more appealing to her, regardless of her PS. I can also think of something with Tammy and her role as a little girl and a sensitive mouth. With Rose, I'm more free and see what you want to do. But these are my thoughts when I'm looking for perks. Of course, I have the advantage of knowing which character will get which path. But maybe you can think of a cool combination. That's why I've made it flexible to swap out the perks.

Chance of Pregnancy. Although Rose said it would never happen again... Hey, I have no problem letting them do it with a condom, but I think we all know that they've only just started.

More Stamina. Not necessarily something the MC needs right away. I was thinking more of a harem situation with several women. But Rose can handle it all on her own... many times in a row... ;)

Forces Honesty. I have a great idea for Jasmine that I want to use with her at some point. Otherwise, it can of course be used later on other subjects.

Sweet Dreams. A perfect perk to make it easier for the MC to cook the subjects (can I say it that way?). Good for -100 to 0. Better to use it earlier to make it more useful. Many good ideas for Tammy, Michelle and Jasmine.

Orgasm Control. Also useful for preparing the subjects. More on the evil side I would say, but I think it's great to have control over the intensity and generally have the option to make the subject come. Cucking and manipulating.

Delicious cum. I would use it if orgasm control is not activated. Pull out and dump it on her face. She'll love it. ;)

And the sensitive areas (here the standard holes first). I would be for anal. It would make it a bit easier for Michelle to adapt to her role if you understand. ;) Vagina and mouth work too, of course.

Otherwise, I will decide for myself how I use the perks because my head is almost exploding with ideas. Should I publish a spoiler site for this too? I would also like to hear your ideas about which perks can be used on which girl and in which combination. Shit, I would really like to hear your wishes!

And in the next chapter, the path for Michelle will be revealed that you can determine via the next poll. That will be great too. And then I can write Tammy! I'm looking forward to that too! I always have to pull myself together not to let the polls run too short, but I think I can write a chapter tomorrow that doesn't include any perks, give you a new poll, and plan what fun we'll have with our first perks.

Oh and one last thought. I'm toying with the idea of ​​giving the MCD the ability to influence other objects. That would be hard to explain scientifically. But I was thinking of a pocket pussy that, when aimed at a target or a target programmed into the MCD, triggers the same feelings in the body of the subject. Another way to influence a subject outside of their path or perks. I would buy it with tokens. But then I would need other objects so that it isn't too special. Or is that all too easy? Does that devalue the perks? And I also need to think about whether I can combine this with a path that isn't built in yet and that I'm currently planning. So this isn't a poll, just a general question. (I got the idea from porn.)

Anyway...

Shit, I'm looking forward to writing for you again. :)

Have a great one and fly safe.