Chapter 5
by fantaghiro
What's next?
Jackie interrupts
"Can I have this dance?" A voice suddenly asked. You were currently dancing with Karen as suddenly someone cut in. You're a bit surprised to see it's Jackie in Karen's body.
"Sure." You answer to the question. Without a word Jackie fills in for Karen who sits down with some of your friends.
"I hope you don't mind me cutting in like this." Jackie asks as you waltz around.
"Of course not, you're my wife after all. We should have at least one dance together. How are you holding up?"
"It's okay, when I submerge myself in Karen's personality things are okay, but sometimes when I hear people pointing out how great my wedding dress looks, or how enchanted I look, I feel terrible for not being there actually."
"I know, but you need to stay strong Jackie. For both of us."
"And you need to stay faithful to me, my dear husband." Jackie points out.
"What?" You ask shocked.
"Just kidding, I know that you will. Although I was a little surprised with the I do part, I really thought for a second there that you thought I was standing there." Jackie points out.
"That was just good acting." You make up. How else were you going to explain the fact that you really were thinking for a second there it was Jackie standing right in front of you. You're too embarrassed to bring up that fact and the location is not really appropriate to discuss things further.
Before Jackie could say anything else, the song ended and you were grabbed by one of Jackie's old schoolfriends. The rest of the evening you were so busy with talking with people you couldn't speak with Jackie in private anymore.
At the end of the evening you and Karen needed to go, the car you rented would take you to the airport. From there you would go on your honeymoon trip, which was a(n)...
What's next?
Wedding Day Swap
Your bride swaps bodies with someone you know
PLEASE ADD CHAPTERS! Premise: You are Gerry (Gerald) Duncan, a 28 year old software developer in good physical health. Today is your wedding day - you are marrying Jackie (Jacqueline) Driscoll, a beautiful woman you've dated since college. Due to an accident with a mysterious wedding gift, Jackie switches bodies with another member of the wedding party shortly before the wedding. The three of you decide to keep the swap secret and go through with the ceremony and honeymoon, hoping to find a way to reverse the transformation later. Themes: Throughout the story the characters will have to deal with the ramifications of the swap. Can Gerry and Jackie carry on their relationship secretly, hiding the swap from everyone else. How will they handle the honeymoon? The early days of the marriage? How will the person in Jackie's body handle this? What about Gerry & Jackie's hopes to quickly have a child? One aspect of the transformation makes the victims comfortable in their new bodies, i.e. they won't go crazy at the shock of the change. I leave it up to the individual author whether or not they gain anything else from the switch (access to skills, memories, knowledge, personality traits, etc.).
Updated on May 24, 2023
Created on Jan 17, 2021
by fantaghiro
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