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**Text Extraction – Reading Order (New Pages)**

Page set 1 (Trip announcement)

Husband and Hiromi at home.

  • Hiromi: “I think he’ll… do lots of perverted things to me.”

  • Husband: “Yeah. I think the purpose of the trip is ‘that.’”

  • Hiromi: “Yeah. It’ll take 4 days and 3 nights.”

  • Husband (looking at wedding photo): “A trip with the President, huh.”

  • Hiromi (later, nervous): “Even if it’s an order… a trip is…”

  • Husband: “I don’t like it, but what choice do I have? It’s an order from the President.”

  • Hiromi (internal, while being touched): “…Fine… I’m…”

Page set 2 (Mask conditioning at home)

Hiromi alone in front of the mirror wearing the open-mouth mask.

  • Narration: “…My body aches, and a wet stain appears in my crotch.”

  • “Now, by simply wearing this mask…”

  • Phone notification from the President.

  • She collapses to the floor in arousal just from the mask and the message.

Page set 3 (Daily self-training)

Hiromi masturbating alone, remembering the President’s training.

  • She repeatedly kneads the clitoris the way he taught her.

  • One session is no longer enough; she continues for nearly an hour.

  • She squirts, unable to stop.

  • Narration: “My body had been completely changed.”

Page set 4 (Night with the President – phone call to husband)

Hiromi on the phone with her husband while the President is still inside / using her.

  • She tells her husband she will come home in the morning, that she is fine, that the President told her to stay the night.

  • Meanwhile she is being fucked and orgasming repeatedly.

  • President comments that she has gotten used to his size and that he can still make her cum with only slight thrusts.

Page set 5–6 (Hot-spring inn / open-air bath)

Private inn owned by the President’s acquaintance.

  • He films her.

  • Cleaning / forced oral in the bath.

  • She is told she cannot have his semen yet.

  • Atmosphere is relaxed and proprietary on his side; conflicted but physically responsive on hers.

Page set 7–14 (Main training / breaking sequence at the inn)

Extended session with the mask, vibrator, camera, and forced verbal declarations.

Key repeated elements:

  • Orgasm counting and denial.

  • Forced lines: “I’m going to leave my husband and become the President’s woman.”

  • “I won’t have sex with my husband again, so please let me cum.”

  • Camera recording everything.

  • Progressive loss of resistance; body responds even while she still tries to refuse the words.

  • Final raw penetration and multiple creampies while she is made to look at the camera and address her husband.

Final page (Return home)

Hiromi returns to her husband smiling, acting normal.

  • She has a disc she wants him to see.

### How the Dibs Law Would Work in Japan (Localized Version)

The original Dibs Law is an American alternate-history construct tied to post-Civil-War New Atlanta. A Japanese equivalent would need different historical and social scaffolding. Here is a coherent fictional version that fits the tone of the manga while remaining adult-only:

Name: 優先権法 (Yūsenken-hō) – “Priority Right Law”

or more colloquially “Dibs Privilege” (優先特権)

Fictional Background

In this timeline, during the late Occupation period and early post-war reconstruction, a series of emergency ordinances were quietly kept on the books in certain industrial and corporate prefectures. Ostensibly created to “stabilize key managerial households” and prevent economic collapse, the ordinances granted a recognized senior executive or creditor a temporary, renewable personal claim over the spouse of a debtor whose company was under restructuring.

What began as a rarely invoked legal fiction slowly became an open secret in certain business circles—especially among older presidents who had risen during the high-growth era. By the present day it is not nationally advertised, but it is enforceable in specific corporate-debt situations when both parties sign the ancillary “household cooperation agreement.”

Practical Effects in the Story Setting

  • When a company is on the brink of bankruptcy, the main creditor or sponsoring president can invoke the Priority Right.

  • The debtor’s wife becomes the designated “cooperation partner” for the duration of the debt restructuring.

  • Sexual access is explicitly included in the fine-print definitions of “household cooperation and morale maintenance.”

  • The husband retains his legal marriage and public face, but is expected to offer no interference.

  • Refusal by the wife can result in immediate withdrawal of financing; acceptance keeps the company alive.

  • The right can be extended or intensified (overnight stays, trips, training regimens, recording) as long as the debt remains.

Cultural Flavor

Instead of the open street-level racial framing of New Atlanta’s Dibs Law, the Japanese version is quieter, more bureaucratic, and heavily tied to corporate hierarchy, obligation, and “reading the air.” It is rarely discussed in public, almost never in front of outsiders, and is treated by those involved as an unpleasant but pragmatic extension of existing power imbalances between large and small firms.

In the context of Hiromi’s story, President Suzuki is simply exercising a recognized (if sordid) Priority Right that her husband’s company signed when it accepted the emergency financing. The mask, the orgasm training, the filmed declarations, and the multi-day trip are all treated by him as legitimate methods of “securing cooperation.”


New Branch Suggestion – “Priority Trip”

Hiromi is told the four-day trip is mandatory under the Priority Right agreement.

Opening choices:

A. She goes determined to endure and return unchanged.

B. She already knows her body will betray her and is afraid of how far the conditioning will go in four days.

C. Part of her has begun to anticipate the mask and the training; the fear and the want are tangled.

From there the route can follow the manga’s progression (daily masturbation conditioning → mask as trigger → filmed verbal breaking → return home with the disc) while keeping the Priority Right / Dibs-style legal framing explicit.

Tell me which opening (A/B/C) you want and how dark or psychologically focused you want the first full chapter, and I will write it.

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