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Fight against time
By late afternoon the house had settled into a strange, focused quiet.
Sadie never left the bedroom. She sat on the edge of the mattress or curled up in the chair she’d dragged close, rotating cool cloths, coaxing sips of water between John’s cracked lips, changing the damp sheets whenever he soaked through them. Her eyes were red and swollen from crying on and off all day, but her hands stayed steady. Every time he stirred or mumbled about work she just shushed him softly and pressed another cold compress to his forehead.
Downstairs Maya had taken over the office like she’d been born in it. Spreadsheets, supplier emails, contract revisions—she moved through them with a speed that surprised even her. More than once she muttered under her breath,
“Why did Dad never let us near this?”
and then kept going, fingers flying, solving problems John had been drowning in for days. Lila floated between the two floors: checking on Maya’s progress, bringing fresh ice packs upstairs, making sure Sadie remembered to drink something herself, quiet and calm and completely in control.
But John’s fever didn’t care how organized they were.
By early evening the thermometer read 40.2.
Then 40.6.
Then 41.0.
Sadie’s voice finally broke.
“It’s not coming down—Lila, it’s not coming down—”
She was openly sobbing now, hands shaking as she tried to wring out another cloth.
“He’s so hot, he’s burning up, what if—”
Lila was already moving. She stripped the blankets completely, left John in just his boxers, and directed both sisters with that same steady, CEO-level calm even while her own stomach twisted.
“Sadie, stop. Look at me. We’re doing leg wraps right now. Cold water, not ice—ice will make him shiver and push the fever higher. Maya, bring the big basin and every clean towel we have. Now.”
They worked together on the bed, the three of them. Maya held John’s legs steady while Lila and Sadie wound the cool, wet towels from his feet up to his thighs, layering them carefully, replacing them the second they warmed. John only groaned and tried once to push them away, voice barely a rasp.
“‘M fine… just… ”
“You’re not fine,”
Lila told him firmly, pressing a fresh cloth to his forehead.
“You’re staying right here.”
Sadie kept crying silently the whole time, tears dripping onto the sheets as she smoothed another wrap into place. Maya’s jaw was locked tight, but her hands never stopped moving.
When the last wrap was secured, Lila checked the time on her phone, then the thermometer again. Still 41.0.
She looked at both of her sisters, voice quiet but absolute.
“One hour. We keep rotating the wraps and the cloths. If it’s not under 40 by then, I’m calling an ambulance. No arguments.”
Sadie nodded through her tears. Maya just cracked her knuckles once more and went back to soaking the next set of towels.
None of them left the room after that.
They just kept working—cool water, fresh cloths, soft voices—while the clock ticked and their brother’s fever refused to break.
John surfaced slowly, like swimming up through warm water.
His head ached. His mouth felt like sandpaper. The sheets stuck to his skin with old sweat. But the crushing heat that had swallowed him was gone—still elevated, still miserable, but no longer trying to cook him from the inside.
Something soft and warm was draped across his chest.
He cracked his eyes open and found Sadie sprawled on top of him, cheek pressed over his heart, one arm curled protectively around his ribs. Her eyes were swollen nearly shut from crying, lashes still clumped together. Even in sleep her face looked wrecked with worry.
John’s hand lifted on instinct. He stroked her hair carefully, fingers gentle against her scalp, and felt something in his chest crack wide open. He would have given anything—every contract, every sleepless night, every stubborn scrap of pride—just to keep her from looking like that again.
He shifted the tiniest bit, trying to sit up without waking her.
The bedroom door was open. A plastic bucket hit the floor with a loud crash.
Maya stood frozen in the doorway, eyes huge. The second she registered that he was actually upright she spun on her heel and sprinted down the hall, bare feet slapping the hardwood, voice already rising.
“LILA—LILA HE’S AWAKE—”
Thirty seconds later Lila filled the doorway like a storm.
She took one look at him—sitting up, Sadie still clinging to his chest, alive—and crossed the room in three long strides. Her hand cracked across his cheek hard enough to snap his head to the side. The sound echoed. Tears were already streaming down her face.
“Two days,” she said, voice shaking with fury and pure relief.
“You were out cold for two fucking days, John. Your fever hit forty-one. Sadie wouldn’t leave the bed. Maya almost broke the company trying to keep everything from collapsing. And you—”
her voice broke, another tear slipping free,
“—you just lay there and wouldn’t wake up.”
She hit him again, lighter this time, more of a shove against his shoulder, then immediately cupped the same cheek she’d just slapped, thumb brushing the red mark like she could erase it.
Sadie stirred at the raised voices, blinking blearily up at him. The second she realized his eyes were open she made a tiny, broken sound and buried her face against his neck, arms tightening like she was afraid he’d disappear again.
Maya reappeared in the doorway, breathing hard, the dropped bucket forgotten behind her. She didn’t say anything. She just stared at him with the same wet, furious, relieved eyes as her sisters.
John swallowed, throat raw. His free hand kept stroking Sadie’s hair while the other came up to cover Lila’s where it still rested against his stinging cheek.
“I’m here,” he rasped. “I’m okay.”
Lila’s tears kept falling. She didn’t look away.
“You better be,”
she whispered.
“Because if you ever scare us like that again, I will kill you myself.”
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