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Chapter 4
by
Farold
Movies? Books? Games? a TV Series?
Bleach
Bleach was an Anime I liked, even if some Fillers could be done without, so why not give it a try.
First would be a test if the Pen really does what it is supposed to do......but what kind of Edit should I make?
Ah, that would work.......ok simply write it down on a piece of paper
Grabbing asheet of paper I write Bleach at the top and it did turn into a massive Tome.
Ok, now for a point in time.........................................................................................................there
leafing through the Pages I eventually arrived at a page whose content is set three days after the Beginning of the Manga/Anime and decided to make the Edit.
{As Ichigo made his way down for dinner, his homework finished just in time, he heard his younger sisters, Yuzu and Karin talking about something that Karin 'Has to do'. Entering the Kitchen he noticed the amused expression on his father's face as Yuzu pushed a visibly uncomfortable Karin before him.
Asking what is wrong, Yuzu explained to him that the two had made a bet, on the way back home from school, and that Karin had lost. When Karin motioned for him to lean down he did so, receiving a kiss on the cheek from her. Karin then quickly moved to her seat, a faint blush, from embarressment, on her cheeks}
Checking the the Manga, I find the very scene I just created. Still that wasn't all the characters behaved accordingly with Ishin teasing his younger daughter earning himself a kick to the shin.
So, not only can you make Edits, they will also be incorporated into the story without destroying the flow of it.
Make further Edits or change Franchise?
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