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Chapter 233 by XarHD XarHD

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Bridges in the Sand, Part 1

And there are those who give and know not pain in giving, nor do they seek joy, nor give with mindfulness of virtue;
They give as in yonder valley the myrtle breathes its fragrance into space.
Through the hands of such as these God speaks, and from behind their eyes He smiles upon the earth.

VP and BP Standings
Erin - 88 VP - 2600 BP - 2 Achievs
Sam - 83 VP - 5700 BP - 2 Achievs
Norah - 74 VP - 2350 BP - 3 Achievs
Marissa - 72 VP - 3000 BP - 1 Achiev
Claire - 69 VP - 8900 BP - 2 Achievs
Liesa - 69 VP - 4200 BP - 2 Achievs
Emily - 57 VP - 6100 BP - 1 Achiev
Dawn - 54 VP - 6300 BP - 2 Achievs
Emi - 46 VP - 3550 BP - 1 Achiev
Riley - 17 VP - 5600 BP - 2 Achievs
Chloe - 14 VP - 4275 BP - 1 Achiev
Myra - 14 VP - 4800 BP

The world snapped into clarity the way only a hangover and a perfect morning could. Andy woke to the jangle of utensils and the sound of two voices—one sharp, one soft—moving around the kitchen like they’d always belonged there. The smell of coffee and toasted bread made it through the fog of memory before he could piece together exactly where he was or how he’d gotten there.

He lay on his back for a minute, blinking at the ceiling. Sunlight slanted through the big window, throwing bars of gold across the hardwood. Beside him, the sheets were warm but empty. He took a moment to reconstruct: Liesa, Sam, a night of surprising ease, laughter, touch. There’d been awkwardness, yes, but by the time they’d crashed—late, so late—it had felt less like a sleepover and more like the kind of peace he’d always assumed was for other people.

Andy pulled himself up and wrapped a comforter around his shoulders. In the next room, Sam was stirring coffee with a wooden spoon. She wore boxers and the same black shirt as last night, her hair in a makeshift bun. Liesa was perched on the counter, legs swinging, robe gaping at one thigh, a mug cradled in both hands. Her eyes flicked to Andy the moment he entered, and the corners of her mouth twitched up in a smile so tentative it might have been a flinch.

“Look who’s alive,” Sam said, raising her mug in salute.

Andy grunted, “Barely,” and made a show of squinting at the clock on the microwave. “How long have you two been up?”

Liesa shrugged, but Sam answered for both of them. “Long enough to decide that we’re making pancakes. Or, rather, I’m making them, and Liesa is being aggressively supportive.”

“Am best at moral support,” Liesa said. Her accent was a little thicker in the mornings, every syllable soft-edged.

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Andy shuffled to the table and watched them work. He caught the way Sam and Liesa moved around each other—never colliding, never hesitating, always anticipating the other’s next move. When Sam reached for the coffee pot, Liesa was already holding out a clean cup. When Liesa needed a spatula, Sam nudged it across the counter without looking. There was an ease between them that hadn’t existed before, or maybe it had just needed a night with all the cards on the table.

He found himself grinning. “You’re coordinated. Should I be jealous?”

Liesa rolled her eyes, but Sam grinned wide. “Yes. Obviously. But we’re still interviewing other candidates, so don’t get comfortable.”

They laughed, and the sound filled the kitchen like something alive. Andy poured himself coffee and felt a strange peace, watching the two of them fill the Suite with domesticity.

“Pancake art?” Andy offered, nodding at the bowl of batter.

Sam looked offended. “I take my pancakes seriously. No art, just pure carbohydrate delivery.”

But Liesa cocked her head. “I think I could draw a face,” she said. “Or a heart.”

Sam narrowed her eyes. “Fine. But only if you clean the pan after you inevitably burn it.”

Andy sipped his coffee and watched them. They didn’t talk much, but the little exchanges—elbows bumping, flour dusting Liesa’s nose, Sam swearing under her breath at a stubborn bit of batter—felt intimate in a way he couldn’t articulate.

He took a risk. “So, should I expect to see you early today?” he asked Liesa. “Seems to be a pattern.”

For a split second, something like alarm flashed across both women’s faces. Liesa looked down, rubbing her wrist. Sam shot Andy a look that said, Careful, but it was gone before he could read more.

Liesa smiled, a little too wide. “Perhaps. But I have work this morning. Arabella asked for a commission.” She made a helpless gesture. “I’m behind.”

Sam nodded, going along with the story. “It’s true. She’s very in-demand.”

“Celebrity,” Andy said, deadpan. Liesa ducked her head, but her cheeks flushed with pride.

Breakfast unfolded in a gentle scramble of plates and syrup. Sam stacked pancakes with military precision, while Liesa added berry faces and sugar smiles. Andy ate three before he realized he’d said nothing for a full ten minutes, just listened to the background noise of people he liked being near each other.

They finished eating and lingered, the conversation drifting to nothing in particular. Sam talked about a new espresso machine she had just brought to the Blue Bean before coming to The HH, and Liesa asked Andy if he knew anything about the next challenge (“Will there be obstacle course? Please say no”). When the food was gone, they piled dishes in the sink and pretended the day wasn’t already pulling them in different directions.

Liesa slipped from the table first. She wiped her hands on the hem of her robe and mumbled, “I should go. I am late already.” She looked at Andy, then Sam, her eyes darting between them as if weighing an equation.

Andy started to stand, but she waved him down. “Stay. I will see you later, yes?” She kissed Sam on the cheek, then Andy, and gathered her things in a hurry, not looking back as she left.

The door shut with a hush, leaving Andy and Sam alone in the quiet.

For a while, neither spoke. Sam stared at her empty mug, swirling the dregs with one finger. Andy watched the play of light across the woodgrain of the table, letting the moment settle.

“She’s going to be okay, you know,” Andy said at last.

Sam didn’t answer right away. “You think so?”

“I do.”

Sam set down her mug. “I want to believe that,” she said. “I really do. But last night—” She chewed her lip, searching for the right words. “Last night felt good, Andy. For the first time in months, I think she believed she was real. That we wanted her. Not just as a third, not as a substitute, but…” She trailed off.

He reached across the table, touched her hand. She let it stay there, didn’t pull away.

“You showed her,” Andy said. “That’s all you can do.”

Sam’s mouth twisted in a wry smile. “You’re sappy as hell today.”

He shrugged. “Not enough coffee. It’s lowering my defenses.”

They both laughed, and the tension dissolved. Sam squeezed his hand, then let go.

“I should get going too,” she said. “Claire wants me to help her with something, and if I don’t show up, she’ll send Riley to drag me out by the hair.”

Andy made a show of shuddering. “Don’t mess with Riley. She’ll hogtie you before you get two steps out the door.”

Sam grinned, bright and real. “That’s the plan, actually.” She stood, then paused. “Can we do this again?”

He nodded. “Anytime.”

Sam leaned in, arms around his neck, holding him just a little too long to be casual. When she pulled away, her eyes were brighter than before.

“Don’t get sappy,” she warned.

“Wouldn’t dream of it,” Andy said, grinning.

She saluted, grabbed her shoes, and left him alone in the suite, the scent of coffee and pancakes lingering in the air.

For a long time after, Andy sat at the table, mug in hand, thinking about nothing in particular. The warmth of the morning hung around him like a shield. For once, the world outside could wait.


Andy finished his coffee, let the aftertaste linger, and went to the bedroom. He was alone now, the hush inside the Suite doubled by the absence of laughter and footfalls. After a few minutes, he tapped through the screens of his smartwatch until he found what he was looking for.

He’d been waiting for this moment—he’d known Emily’s cheat code was available, ever since their night. The “goodgirl” code, the one he’d unlocked by—well, technically, by fucking her five times in a single round.

The code was there, nested in the list of unlocked perks: “goodgirl.” The description was curt in a way that felt almost deliberately obtuse:

goodgirl
Master may tailor Suggestibility parameters for Emily, or propagate Suggestibility to additional subjects. Caution: Malicious misuse may result in softlock conditions. Use judiciously.

He snorted. As if “judicious” had ever applied to any part of this experience.

If he used the code on any other woman in the harem, he’d copy the transformation onto them for the rest of the round. But if he used it on someone who already bore the transformation, he could tweak its parameters. Could he... could he make it so that Emily was less **** to others’ orders? That had always scared him: the way a stray comment, if made with the right intent, could send her spinning. She believed that it wouldn’t happen because no one knew her transformation, but Andy knew better. In fact, because no one knew, the likelihood of someone ordering something that could hurt her was higher. Andy wanted to know if he could blunt that edge, make her safe in a way he couldn’t manage otherwise.

He flipped to Emily’s profile, which now included a button labeled ‘goodgirl’, and opened the cheat code’s “config” screen. There was a slider—of course there was, like some perverse child’s game, labeled ‘Suggestibility to Others’. One end was “absolute,” the other “null.” Emily’s current setting was significantly to the left of center: very strong, but not unbreakable. He noticed there was no option to lower her suggestibility to him. He assumed it was because the Master was the whole point. He hesitated, then nudged the slider slightly toward “null,” and confirmed the change. As he did so, he realized he wouldn’t have been able to shift the slider entirely to “null,” and that the spot where the slider originally was remained marked by a red line. The ability to tweak transformations would not allow him to neutralize them. The interface blinked, then spat out a warning:

Are you sure? Reducing Suggestibility may impair certain storyline branches, and/or impact the subject’s relationship with the harem. Proceed?

He hesitated, then hit YES. The screen resettled. Andy felt a little jolt of shame, as if he’d just fiddled with a friend’s medication without asking. He owed Emily a conversation, a real one. But for the first time since she had arrived, he felt like he might be able to protect her from something, even if only in a technical sense.

As for the challenge regarding boundaries… he reviewed her description: there was a whole section called ‘Boundaries and Self-Preservation,’ and he didn’t like what he read in it.

Boundaries and Self-Preservation: Emily has difficulty articulating or enforcing personal boundaries, a response rooted in deep trauma from her previous season. She operates from an **** belief that asserting limits—even gentle ones—risks rejection or punishment, making her willing to surrender autonomy rather than risk abandonment. She interprets refusal as a form of unworthiness, fearing that specifying what she won't do is equivalent to declaring herself unworthy of being wanted. This manifests as an almost reflexive tendency to say "yes" to everything, to be endlessly accommodating, and to view her own needs as secondary to maintaining connection. While she's intellectually aware that healthy relationships include boundaries, emotionally she remains trapped in a pattern where self-protection feels synonymous with self-sabotage.

Andy frowned. The sheer amount of repetition highlighted how deep-seated Emily’s trauma was, and Andy found himself cursing this Leah who served as Host for Emily’s first season, for taking a sweet young woman and subjecting her to so much. He had considered using Coauthor to soften Emily’s position, help her at least establish some basic boundaries, but he would need whole rounds to do so, or he would need to upgrade Coauthor again.

Still, he could use the ability, as it was, to at least help. He typed the words yet protects her critical boundaries at the end. He hoped this would at least let her recognize her own critical boundaries, and perhaps, push her to advocate for them.

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Boundaries and Self-Preservation: Emily has difficulty articulating or enforcing personal boundaries, a response rooted in deep trauma from her previous season. She operates from an **** belief that asserting limits—even gentle ones—risks rejection or punishment, making her willing to surrender autonomy rather than risk abandonment. She interprets refusal as a form of unworthiness, fearing that specifying what she won't do is equivalent to declaring herself unworthy of being wanted. This manifests as an almost reflexive tendency to say "yes" to everything, to be endlessly accommodating, and to view her own needs as secondary to maintaining connection. While she's intellectually aware that healthy relationships include boundaries, emotionally she remains trapped in a pattern where self-protection feels synonymous with self-sabotage, yet protects her critical boundaries.

He hoped this would work.


It was a few hours past breakfast when Andy finally emerged from the Suite, the faint aftertaste of coffee lingering on his tongue. The elevator deposited him in the Main Lobby, which was uncharacteristically empty, the only noise the hiss of the espresso machine and the soft ping of the elevator doors.

Liesa waited by the windows, perched on the edge of one of the big, overstuffed chairs. She wore a faded denim jacket over a thin white dress, both of which looked borrowed or thrifted but perfect on her frame. The strap of a heavy camera bag was cinched tight across her body, and in her hands she held not one but two proper cameras—both old enough to look deliberate, not accidental, in their retro charm.

She looked up as Andy approached. “I was starting to think you’d slept again,” she said, but there was no accusation in it. She stood, already fiddling with the lens cap on one camera.

“I did, a little. Pancake coma,” Andy admitted.

“I understand this.” Liesa smiled, but didn’t quite meet his eyes. Instead, she offered him the second camera. “I was thinking today maybe we take photos? The light is good.” She tilted her head, inviting him to join her, like it was the most natural thing in the world.

Andy took the camera, feeling the cool weight of it in his palm. “Film or digital?”

“Digital. I’m not that old school.” She grinned, and the dimple in her cheek was as good as any sunrise. “Come. We can walk the beach?”

There was something new in her energy—an impatience, or maybe just a determination to keep moving. Andy decided not to question it.

The air outside the hotel was so saturated with light, it felt physical—a thickness you could wade through, a warmth that **** every movement to slow, to mean something. Liesa and Andy hit the walk, and at first, it was just the two of them, the only sound the loose click of the camera’s lens cap bouncing against her jacket and the hush of the tide, miles off but omnipresent.

Liesa kept a respectful half-step ahead, her steps brisk and determined. “We’ll start by the near end,” she said. “Best texture. And I want to try something.” She shot him a look—not quite mischievous, not quite shy—and it said, Don’t laugh, but I have a plan.

They hadn’t even made it out of the shadow of the hotel before the rest of the world caught up. The side door squeaked open, and Dawn and Emi tumbled out, arms linked like girls escaping a wedding. Dawn wore a yellow t-shirt and cutoff shorts, her skin already dewy from sun; Emi had on a breezy white dress, her sketchbook poking out of a frayed canvas tote. Dawn called, “Hold up! We’re coming too!” and Emi, for once, didn’t look for permission—she just ran to catch up, her sandals slapping the hot stone.

Andy raised an eyebrow at Liesa. “Still think this is just a photo walk?”

She shrugged, but her smile twisted at the edges. “Better with friends, right?”

Dawn came in hot, nearly bowling Liesa over with a hug. “You said sunrise was best, but the light is so good right now,” she gushed, “my camera is making everything look professional.” She brandished the device, already snapping candids of the group.

Emi lagged behind, but when she caught up, she flashed Andy a peace sign, then reached for the spare camera around his neck. “May I?” she said, and when Andy nodded, she palmed it like it was an egg, already poking at the settings.

“Is this a thing now?” Andy asked, the question more for show than anything else.

Liesa adjusted her camera strap, feigning offense. “It was always a thing. Just, sometimes, people notice only when it’s official.”

She led them down the path toward the beach, the route familiar but different with the group in tow. Dawn bounced from foot to foot, ears flopping happily, snapping photos of everything—cracks in the concrete, a lizard sunning itself on a rock, the shadow of her own hand making a bunny on the sand. Emi drifted, collecting images of light reflecting off the hotel windows, birds in motion, Andy’s and Liesa’s footprints left behind in wet sand. Two hands manned the camera while two more held the sketchbook still, and one drew with fervor on it.

Andy watched them work. Dawn shot in bursts—snap, snap, snap, then zoom in on something odd, like the way rust curled on a signpost, or how the surf chewed a stick into perfect smoothness. Emi spent more time with each frame, composing carefully, sometimes standing stone-still for a minute before taking a single shot. Liesa hovered at the edge of both styles, alternating between her own snaps and suggestions for the others.

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At the pier, Liesa paused. She set her bag down and knelt, leveling her lens at the eroded beams beneath the walkway. Dawn flopped onto her belly, camera held sideways, taking macro shots of barnacles and driftwood. Emi leaned against the railing and used her camera to frame a shot of the whole structure, backlit by the sun. Andy tried to document the scene, but kept circling back to Liesa, always Liesa: the way she pursed her lips before a shot, the quick flash of tongue as she adjusted a setting, how she hunched one shoulder higher when she found something beautiful.

“You’re not even trying to hide it,” Dawn whispered, appearing at Andy’s elbow.

“Hide what?”

She grinned. “You only take pictures of her.”

He tried to muster a denial, but failed. “It’s her date,” he said with a smile.

Dawn grinned wider, then turned and snapped a close-up of Andy’s face, catching him with one eyebrow raised and a flush of color in his cheeks. “For posterity,” she said, and ran back to show Liesa.

The walk continued, meandering south along the beach. Emi found a dead crab and spent five minutes sketching its geometry before photographing the way the claws reflected sunlight. Dawn discovered a tide pool, its surface a living painting of microcurrents and darting silver fish, and knelt so close she nearly tipped in.

Liesa called Andy over to a tangle of seaweed, where she wanted to try a portrait “through the vines.” He stood where she pointed and let her direct him, feeling awkward until she made a dumb face behind the camera and he barked out a real laugh. She clicked the shutter just then, and it felt so obvious that she would want that moment, not the posed one.

They made their way south, past the pier, as the day heated and the shadows stretched thin. By the time the four of them reached the tidal flats, the air was already shimmering with that just-after-breakfast energy—optimism without the weight of expectation.

Liesa kept the pace. She was in her element: not just as a photographer but as the unacknowledged director of a movie only she could see. When she talked, people listened, but not because she was loud. It was more like she had a private agreement with the world that her suggestions would always land on target.

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They stopped at the split rail fence where the beach started to give way to wild grass. Liesa pointed at a broken board, then gestured at Dawn. “Use the macro, see the grain. The light there—it will pop.” She had already cranked the exposure down on her own camera, prepping for a contrast-heavy shot.

Dawn, eager, belly-flopped in the sand, squinting through her lens at the pale thread of old wood. The ears on her head—the ones that, thanks to her third transformation, looked as natural as her own arms—twitched upright. “You’re right,” Dawn said, tone reverent. “It’s like a fingerprint.” She started shooting, rapid-fire.

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Next it was Emi’s turn. She’d fallen behind, paused at the line of foamy wrack where the waves were busiest. The six arms were all engaged: two steadying her sketchbook, two balancing the camera, the other pair jotting loose, almost **** notes in the margins. When Andy called her name, she gave a dreamy half-smile and pointed at the gulls wheeling overhead.

“Look,” she said, quiet but insistent, “how they never touch, even when they’re close. Every time they swoop, they leave the space in-between perfect. It’s like they’re dancing and not letting anyone see.” Emi shot a burst of photos, the shutter sound almost lost in the hiss of surf. “I want to draw that,” she said, already sketching lines that spiraled and dove.

They went on, always with Liesa scouting the next spot, then letting the others catch up and take the lead. When Andy tried to hand her the reins—“Your turn, pick a subject”—she’d demur, but within seconds, her body would betray her. She’d sidle over to a washed-up shell or a sunning crab, kneeling with a deliberateness and an enforced sensuality that made Andy feel like he was trespassing on a private ceremony.

Through it all, Andy’s camera wandered back to Liesa. He tried to pretend otherwise, but his memory card filled with evidence: Liesa biting her lower lip, Liesa’s fingers blurred as she brushed sand off her dress, Liesa’s hair gone ragged in the breeze. Sometimes, when she was focused on a shot, she’d go utterly still, and for a second, Andy could see the girl she had once been before all this—the version of her that didn’t carry years of shame or guilt or the feeling of being on the run.

He snapped those moments, quick and secret, like if he captured enough of them, they’d start to overwrite the old.

By mid-morning, the sun was high and the sand too hot for bare feet. Dawn and Emi took to walking at the tide line, daring each other closer to the chilly foam. When Emi shrieked at a particularly cold surge, Dawn collapsed in laughter, kicking water everywhere. Liesa watched them and let out a snort, then turned to Andy, her face soft.

“Are like kids,” she said, not as a complaint but as a kind of benediction.

He nodded. “Feels good, doesn’t it?”

She looked at him, then quickly away. “Sometimes I think I missed this,” she said. “Just… being allowed to play.”

There was a catch in her voice, but she hid it under a stretch. “Come on, Andy. Last one to the boulders is the dinner’s dishwasher.”

He let her sprint ahead, knowing she’d want the moment. Her last transformation **** her body to run sensually, which wasn’t very fast. But even when she lost the race—Dawn was merciless, and Emi surprisingly quick—Liesa’s laugh was real, and Andy caught that, too. Every photo, every angle, until his hands ached and the battery icon on his camera blinked red.


They stopped for water at the shelter by the rocks. Emi spread her sketchbook and started transferring ideas from her camera: gulls in flight, the wild architecture of a crab shell, even a careful rendering of Dawn’s smile, though she tried to hide it by drawing over the face with bunny ears. Dawn offered to share her lunch—two bananas, a tiny sleeve of saltines, and an energy bar. Andy noticed she peeled the bananas the “wrong” way, from the tip, and made a note to tease her about it later.

Liesa sat apart, reviewing her shots. Andy settled beside her, careful not to crowd, and watched as she flicked through her photos on the tiny LCD. There were hundreds—shots of sand, and water, and every living thing on that stretch of coast. But every so often, the camera would pause on a person. Dawn, mid-laugh, ears caught by the wind. Emi, face lit with concentration, hands a blur. Andy, looking at someone off-frame, unguarded.

Liesa frowned, scrolling back and forth between two images: one of Andy, looking at her and smiling without knowing; and another of herself, face soft, lips parted as if about to speak.

Andy leaned in. “Let me see?”

She handed him the camera, but didn’t watch. Instead, she stared at her shoes, the knuckles of one hand pressed tight to her lips.

He scrolled through the set. The photo of him was candid, but flattering—cheekbones sharp, eyes crinkled. The other, of Liesa, was beautiful in a way he doubted she’d ever admit: not because of her looks (though there was plenty of that), but because of the way the mask had dropped. She looked ****, but not afraid. There was a question in her eyes, and Andy realized with a start that it was the same one he saw in his own mirror some mornings: Am I allowed to be this happy?

“These are really good,” he said, handing the camera back. “You should print them out.”

She shook her head. “Not yet. Maybe later.” She was quiet for a second, then added, “Did you take any?”

He shrugged, but it was a lie—his memory card was almost all Liesa. “Yeah. Want to see?”

She nodded, so he gave her his camera, and let her scroll. At first, she was clinical, scanning for focus and composition. Then she hit a picture of herself—caught mid-laugh, hair wild, mouth open. She stopped.

“Delete that,” she said, voice flat. “Please.”

He hesitated. “Why? It’s… it’s you.”

She looked at him. “That’s why,” she said.

He didn’t delete it. Instead, he scrolled to the next: her, squinting into the sun, one hand raised to block the glare. Then another: her arms spread, balancing on a driftwood log, back to the camera but head turned just enough that the edge of a smile showed.

She didn't ask him to delete the other photos, and he didn't offer. The next few were more of her, caught off-guard—brushing her hair from her face, grinning wide with her tongue stuck out, one where she’d tried to photobomb Emi and ended up framed perfectly between the other two women, arms thrown up like a referee signaling touchdown.

"These are stupid," Liesa said, but her voice had no heat. She handed the camera back. For a second, she wiped her eye with the back of her hand, feigning a blink at the sun. She didn't say anything for a long while.

Emi, finished with her sketchbook, sidled over. She peeked at the camera, then at Liesa. "You look happy," Emi said, gentle as always. "It's nice."

Liesa bristled, but Andy caught the flinch—less anger, more embarrassment. She muttered something in Flemish, then louder, "I hate photos of myself. Never looks like me."

Emi shook her head. "I think it looks just like you. When you're not paying attention, you're beautiful in a different way."

Dawn, now sprawled next to them and eating her second banana, piped up. "I wish I looked half as good as you do when you're not looking." She scrolled through her own camera roll and held up a picture: Liesa, backlit by the sea, dress whipping around her legs, the whole thing like a fashion shoot that didn't know it was happening. "You're like, naturally dramatic."

"Is insult or compliment?" Liesa asked, and Dawn giggled.

"Both," Emi said, and they all laughed—even Liesa, after a moment.

Andy didn't push it. He let the conversation drift to other things—what the food would be at dinner, whether or not the pool was heated, the best flavors of La Croix. Dawn insisted that key lime was "the only one worth buying," which Emi hotly disputed.

After the break, they moved again. Emi found a clump of tall grass just above the tide line, stalks swaying in the wind. She tried to capture the way the blades bent and unbent, the subtle green glow when backlit. When she showed the preview to Andy, he saw what she meant: the grass was alive, every blade in motion, the whole scene humming with energy.

Dawn, meanwhile, had turned her camera to the ground. "Check this out," she said, calling Andy over. She pointed to a snail trail, the perfect glitter of it catching the sun. "It's like a roadmap, but you don't know where it's going."

"That's poetry," Emi said. She scribbled something in her sketchbook.

"Is not poetry," Liesa said, peering over. "Is just a snail that got lost."

"Same difference," Dawn replied, undeterred.

They reached the end of the beach, where a tangle of rocks jutted into the sea. Here, the air tasted sharp, and the wind made conversation difficult. They huddled behind a big slab of granite, passing the cameras back and forth, comparing shots and trying to one-up each other. There was an unspoken game: who could find the most interesting, the most beautiful, the most unexpected image?

Dawn won the first round with a shot of Emi, perfectly caught between two stones, hair and six arms thrown out by the wind so she looked like an explosion of movement. Emi took the next round with a hyper-close macro of Liesa’s eye, the blue-green of the iris captured with uncanny detail. Liesa, never to be outdone, got a candid of Dawn squatting to photograph a shell, her face scrunched in total focus, bunny ears pointed arrow-straight.

"Let me see," Andy said, and Liesa handed over the camera. The picture was hilarious, but also affectionate—the way you'd document a friend's weirdest habit, not to mock, but to treasure.

"Yours turn," Liesa said, nudging Andy. "Bet you have something weird."

He scrolled through his set. Liesa stooping to pick up a stone, Liesa laughing, Liesa alone for a moment at the edge of the surf, her profile sharp against the glare. Andy felt a twinge of embarrassment—he hadn't realized how many he'd taken.

He looked up and found all three women staring at him, expectant. Even Emi looked curious.

"Most of mine are of you," Andy said, sheepish, and handed the camera to Liesa.

She scrolled, silent at first. Then she stopped on one—the shot of her at the water's edge, face turned away, hair blown wild. She studied it for a long time.

"It’s beautiful," Emi said, looking over her shoulder.

"Not because of me," Liesa muttered. "Because of who took it."

Dawn snorted. "You’re so dramatic." But then she softened. "He just sees you different. That's a good thing."

Liesa didn't answer. She looked at Andy, her face unreadable, and then at the photo again. She didn't cry, but her mouth twitched like she wanted to.

"I’ll send you the file," Andy said, quiet.

She nodded, then handed the camera back and stood. "We should go," she said. "If we walk slow, we make it back before the tide comes up."

They walked back, the sun now higher and the wind turning. The mood was less playful, but not awkward—more like the first act of something that wasn't sure how to end.

When they reached the lawn, Dawn and Emi peeled off, claiming they wanted to try the pool before lunch. Liesa and Andy lingered at the edge, neither in a hurry to reenter the world of other people.

Liesa looked down at her hands, then up at Andy. "Thank you," she said, and for once, there was nothing else—no joke, no deflection. "No one has ever shown me this way before."

"You deserve it," he said.

She smiled, small and real. "Maybe now I believe it."


They ended up back at the southern end of the beach, just past the driftwood fence. The tide was out now, leaving behind a wide fan of rippled sand and shallow pools. Emi and Dawn had already veered off, promising to meet up later. Liesa set the camera bag down and stretched, arching her back sensually, like every movement she was allowed to make.

A basket waited for them, stashed in the shade beneath a cluster of wild fennel. Andy glanced at it, then at her. “You planned this?”

She made a face. “Not me. Arabella. But I approve.”

He laughed, set the cameras aside, and opened the basket. Inside were two bottles of mineral water, an assortment of small sandwiches, and a container of what looked suspiciously like homemade potato salad.

Liesa glided down cross-legged, flicked a bit of sand from her ankle, and started assembling plates. For a minute, neither said much—just the clink of glass, the salt air, and the slow crash of the tide as it started to build again.

“So,” Andy said, finally, “this is your idea of a perfect day?”

She chewed, then shrugged. “Maybe not perfect. But is close.”

Andy took a bite of sandwich. “What would make it perfect?”

Liesa didn’t answer right away. She stared out at the water, arms wrapped around her knees. “A year ago,” she said, “if you ask me this, I would say: city. Parties. Noise. Not so much…” She gestured at the empty horizon. “This.”

He waited, noticing how thick her accent had gotten.

She let the words tumble out. “You know how much I hated myself, after? For leaving you?” She picked at the hem of her dress. “I told myself, is not matter. You are better without me. But then…” She hesitated, glanced at him. “I could not stop checking your socials. Is stupid, yes?”

He smiled. “Not stupid.”

She seemed to gain confidence, or maybe just momentum. “And then, when I come here, I think—‘oh, is like punishment. For being so selfish, for all the things I did after.’” She twisted her hands together, knuckles going white. “But now? I don’t think is punishment. I think maybe—” She stopped, mouth twisting.

“Maybe what?” he prompted, voice soft.

“Maybe is a gift,” she said, all at once. “Maybe I never would have stopped running. Maybe I needed something, someone, to make me look. Really look.”

She met his eyes. “This is not so bad, you know? I could have ended in much worse places.”

Andy reached for her hand, folding his fingers over hers. “I missed you,” he said. “Every day.”

Liesa blinked fast. “You are sappy, always,” she said, but she squeezed his hand back.

They ate in a kind of peaceful hush, punctuated by the occasional bird call or a snatch of distant laughter from the hotel terrace. At one point, Liesa set her sandwich down and lay back in the sand, arms flung wide, eyes closed.

“I think I am happy,” she announced, as if reporting from inside herself.

Andy scooted over and lay next to her, shoulder to shoulder. “That’s all I want.”

They drifted. The sun worked its way higher, then started to slide toward the ocean, the heat mellowing from harsh to soft. Liesa rolled onto her stomach, chin propped on her hands, and watched a dog skittering along the shore in the far distance.

“Do you remember the night we stayed up to see the meteor shower?” she asked.

He grinned. “You made a blanket fort and fell asleep before the first one.”

She snorted. “Is not my fault. You made it so warm. And you talk too much.”

“Yeah,” he said. “I do.”

They watched the water for a while, then Liesa said, “I always wanted a home. Not a house, but a place I could stop running.” She paused. “You and Sam feel like that, sometimes.”

Andy felt his chest go tight. They fell into silence again, not awkward but comfortable. At some point, Liesa curled into his side, tucking her feet behind his knee and resting her head on his shoulder. Andy let his arm rest across her back. The contact felt casual, but it was an anchor.

After a long while, she said, “I have to tell you something.” Her voice was muffled by his shirt.

“You can tell me anything.”

She hesitated, then spoke. “If I had not been… taken, I would still be doing what I did before.” She didn’t say the word, but Andy knew. “I would still be…” Her voice broke, just a hair. “Pretending to be something I am not, just so I could pay my father’s bills. Just so I would not think about… you.”

Andy’s hand found hers, squeezed it. “You don’t have to pretend, with me.”

She nodded. “I know. That is why this is hard.”

He waited.

“I am glad I am here,” she said, voice fierce. “I am glad I got you back. I am glad for Sam, and for Dawn, and for even Norah, who hated me.” She looked at him, and her eyes were bright. “I never had real friends before. Not like this.”

“You do now,” Andy said.

She made a face. “Is not always so easy, you know? To forgive yourself.”

He shook his head. “No. But it’s worth it.”

They lay there until the sky started to pink at the edges, and the first hint of chill crept in off the water. Liesa stretched, then rolled onto her back again, staring up at the blank blue overhead.

“I want to be better,” she said, barely a whisper.

“You already are,” Andy replied.

He felt her smile against his shoulder.

They sat up, brushed the sand off, and started packing up the remains of lunch. Liesa handed him the camera again. “Maybe tomorrow, I will take pictures of you,” she said, grinning.

Andy laughed. “Only if you promise not to delete them.”

She rolled her eyes. “We’ll see.”

The walk back was slow. Neither wanted to break the spell of the afternoon, so they lingered, drawing patterns in the sand with their feet and letting the wind tangle their hair. At one point, Liesa reached up and brushed a lock from Andy’s forehead, tucking it behind his ear in a gesture so tender it made him want to cry.

“You know what else would make today perfect?” she said.

He shook his head.

She smiled, sly and sad all at once. “If you kissed me.”

He leaned in and did, soft and slow and careful, the taste of salt and sun and Liesa all at once. For a long time, they stayed like that, the rest of the world receding until only the two of them remained.

By the time they pulled apart, the sun was low and the hotel lights were beginning to glow in the distance.

“Let’s go home,” Liesa said.

They walked back together, hand in hand, neither letting go even as the first cool shadow of evening crept in.


The sky was purple-black by the time they reached the last stretch of beach. The wind was up, but it was gentle—a caress, not a slap. Andy slung his arm around Liesa’s shoulders, and she pressed into his side, her steps matching his without thought.

Neither of them spoke. The quiet was easy, a shared language of breath and the hush of surf. The only sound was the crunch of their feet on the sand and the far-off hum of the hotel’s evening generators.

At some point, Andy started humming a tune—soft, unidentifiable, just a comfort. Liesa recognized the cadence but couldn’t place it. She smiled to herself, content to let it roll over her.

They walked in no hurry, the hotel lights growing brighter with every step, the night settling in behind them like a down comforter. Their shadows stretched long across the sand, then merged into a single shape, indistinct but together.

When they reached the ramp up to the main entrance, Andy squeezed her shoulder. “You good?” he asked, voice low.

She nodded, more than good. “Best in years,” she said, and meant it.

They stopped at the door. For a second, Liesa felt the urge to say something big and final, to give voice to the perfect click she felt inside—like the last piece of a puzzle snapping into place. But she didn’t. She just let Andy hold the door, let him walk her to the elevator, let herself stand in the hush of the lobby with him at her side.

The elevator arrived, doors gliding open with a whisper. They stepped in, and as it rose, Liesa glanced at their reflection in the polished steel: two people, side by side, a little battered but whole. She thought of all the things that had broken her in the past—her old life, the lies, the loneliness, the sharp-edged shame of wanting too much—and saw that none of it mattered now. Or rather, it mattered in a new way: as the raw material for this moment, for this feeling of being wanted, being home.

The doors slid open at their floor. Andy reached for her hand, and she took it, easy and sure.

As they stepped out together, Liesa felt some of the old fractures inside her seal shut—not erased, but transformed, the cracks now channels for light. She belonged here, in this strange, beautiful place, with these flawed and wonderful people. She belonged with Andy and Sam, not as the person she’d been before, but as the one she’d become.

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