Chapter 15 by fantaghiro
What's next?
Allison and Don return
You're at the window when they pull up.
You've been standing here for the last hour, checking your phone, pacing, coming back to the window. Pathetic. But you couldn't help yourself. Couldn't stop imagining what they were doing, where they were, whether she was thinking about you at all.
The rental sedan glides to a stop at the curb. Dad gets out first, circles to the passenger side, opens the door like she's something precious. And when she steps out—
You see it immediately.
She's different.
It's not just the way she moves—confident, unhurried—or the way she smiles at something Dad says. It's something deeper. A settledness. Like she left as one person and came back as someone else entirely.
Dad pulls her suitcase from the trunk. His hand finds the small of her back—that possessive gesture you've seen a dozen times now—and guides her toward the house. And she leans into him. Not performance. Not strategy.
Habit.
Your stomach turns to lead.
They're at the door now, and you **** yourself to move away from the window. Settle on the couch. Try to look like you haven't been obsessing for three days straight.
The door opens. Voices drift in—Dad's laugh, her softer response. Footsteps in the entryway.
"...put your bag upstairs?" Dad's saying. "I can get it."
"I've got it. Thanks." Her voice. Warm, affectionate. The voice she used to use with you.
They appear in the living room doorway, and you make yourself look up. Try for casual. Fail miserably.
"Hey." Your voice comes out rough. "You're back."
"We're back." Dad's grin could power a small city. He looks younger than he did on Friday—relaxed, happy, like he just won the lottery. "Had an amazing weekend. Didn't we, Jen?"
"Amazing," she agrees, and her eyes find yours.
That's when you see the bracelet.
Silver, delicate, with a diamond charm that catches the light. It dangles from her wrist—her left wrist, the one closest to you—and it's new. Definitely new. You've memorized every piece of Mom's jewelry by now, and you've never seen that before.
"Where're the kids?" Dad asks, oblivious.
"Tabitha's upstairs. David's at a friend's." You can't stop staring at the bracelet. "He'll be back for dinner."
"Perfect. I was thinking we could order pizza. Have a family dinner." Dad's hand is still on her waist, thumb rubbing small circles. "Celebrate a good weekend."
"Sounds lovely." She turns to Dad, rises on her toes, and kisses him.
Not a peck. A real kiss. Lingering, familiar, the kind of kiss that speaks to hours—days—of intimacy you weren't part of.
When they break apart, she's smiling. And the bracelet glints like a brand.
"I'll go put my things away," she says. "Don, you want coffee?"
"I'd love some. Thanks, honey."
Honey.
She disappears toward the stairs, suitcase rolling behind her, and Dad collapses into the armchair with a satisfied sigh.
"I needed that," he says, stretching. "God, Tim, I can't remember the last time I felt this good. Your mom and I—we really reconnected. I think we're going to make it work this time."
You're saved from responding by Tabitha bounding down the stairs. She must've heard the commotion.
"You're home!" She goes straight to Dad, hugs him. "How was it?"
"Incredible." He pulls her onto his lap like she's still a little kid, not thirteen. "Napa's beautiful this time of year. Your mom loved it."
"Did she?" Tabitha shoots you a look—pointed, assessing. "That's good."
"It is good. Really good." Dad's expression turns serious. "Actually, I wanted to talk to you kids about something. Is David really not coming back until dinner?"
"I can text him to come home if it's important."
"No, no. Dinner's fine. I want everyone together." He pats Tabitha's arm. "Go on. I know you've got homework."
She rolls her eyes but obeys, heading back upstairs. The house settles into quiet—just you and Dad, the sound of footsteps above, water running in the kitchen.
"You okay, champ?" Dad's watching you. "You seem tense."
"I'm fine."
"You sure? Because you've got that look. The one you used to get when you were upset about something but didn't want to talk about it."
You **** yourself to meet his eyes. "Just tired. Didn't sleep great this weekend."
"Yeah?" Concern flickers across his face. "You feeling alright? Not coming down with something?"
"I'm fine, Dad. Really."
He studies you for another moment, then nods. "Okay. But if you need to talk—about anything—I'm here. You know that, right?"
"I know."
Mom—Allison—returns with two steaming mugs. Hands one to Dad, keeps the other for herself, and settles onto the arm of his chair. Her free hand rests on his shoulder, casual and comfortable, and Dad's hand comes up to cover it.
They look like a couple. Like they've been together forever.
Like she belongs there.
"So," Dad says, squeezing her hand. "I was just telling Tim we should have a family dinner. Pizza sound good?"
"Perfect." She sips her coffee, and the bracelet slides down her wrist. "Actually, there's something we wanted to talk to everyone about. Over dinner. When David's here."
Your pulse kicks up. "What is it?"
She and Dad exchange a look—one of those silent communication things couples do—and Dad grins.
"You'll find out at dinner. It's good news. I promise."
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David gets home around six. You're in your room, door closed, trying and failing to concentrate on homework when you hear his voice downstairs. Greeting Dad, asking about the trip, laughing at something.
No one comes to get you. You sit there, staring at calculus problems that might as well be hieroglyphics, until Tabitha knocks.
"Dinner's here. Dad says get your ass downstairs."
You follow her down. The dining room table is set—paper plates, pizza boxes open in the center, everyone gathering around. It's aggressively normal. Domestic. Dad at the head of the table, Allison to his right, David and Tabitha filling in the sides.
You take the chair across from Allison. Can't help it.
"Glad you could join us," Dad says, and there's no sarcasm, just warmth. "Okay, everyone dig in."
Pizza is passed around. Casual conversation flows—David talks about his friend's new gaming setup, Tabitha complains about a science project. Dad tells stories about the vineyard, the hotel, the restaurant. Allison adds details, laughs at the right moments, plays the role of partner so seamlessly you almost forget it's a role.
Almost.
You watch her hands. The way she gestures, breaks off pieces of crust, reaches for her water glass. The bracelet catches the light with every movement, impossible to ignore.
Finally, when everyone's eaten, Dad clears his throat.
"So. Your mom and I wanted to talk to you guys about something."
The table goes quiet. Tabitha sits up straighter. David stops chewing.
"This weekend was really special for us," Dad continues, reaching for Allison's hand. She gives it to him without hesitation. "We've spent a lot of time talking about the future. About what we want. And we've decided—" He looks at her, gets a nod. "I'm going to move back in."
Silence.
Then Tabitha: "Really?"
"Really." Dad's smile is genuine. "Not right away. We want to do this right. Take it slow. But probably within the next month. Your mom and I are going to try again. Properly this time."
"That's amazing!" Tabitha's face lights up. She jumps out of her chair, hugs Dad, then—after a moment's hesitation—hugs Allison too. "I'm so happy for you guys."
"Thanks, sweetheart." Allison's voice is soft, and when she meets Tabitha's eyes, there's genuine affection there.
David's slower, but he grins. "Cool. So, like, you guys are back together? For real?"
"For real," Dad confirms. "I know it's been a tough couple years. The divorce, everything that happened. But I really believe we can make it work this time. And I want to be here. With all of you."
He looks around the table—at Tabitha, at David, at you.
"What do you think, Tim?"
Everyone's eyes turn to you.
Allison's expression is carefully neutral, but you catch something underneath. A challenge. A question.
What are you going to do about it?
"It's great," you hear yourself say. "If it makes you happy."
"It does." Dad squeezes Allison's hand. "It really does."
Conversation resumes—logistics, timelines, which room will be whose when Dad moves his stuff in. Tabitha asks if they can redecorate. David wants to know if Dad will finally fix the basement. Everyone's excited, optimistic, talking over each other.
And you sit there, pushing pizza crust around your plate, watching your girlfriend smile at your father like he hung the moon.
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Dinner drags on forever. By the time the boxes are cleared and everyone scatters, you're vibrating with tension. You need to talk to her. Need to understand what the hell happened this weekend, what changed, whether there's any chance—
"Tim."
You turn. She's in the kitchen doorway, arms crossed, watching you.
"Can we talk? Upstairs."
It's not a request.
You follow her up, pulse pounding. She leads you to Mom's room—her room—and closes the door behind you.
The room smells different. Like Dad's cologne layered over Mom's perfume. The bed is made, but rumpled, like someone's been sitting on it. Her suitcase sits open on the bench at the foot.
"Before you say anything," she starts, turning to face you. "I need you to understand something. This weekend—it was good, Tim. Really good. Don made me feel wanted. Valued. Like I matter. And I need that. Especially now."
"Allison—"
"Let me finish." Her voice is firm. "I know you're upset. I know this is hard. But you had your chance. Multiple chances. And you couldn't do it. You couldn't kiss me. You couldn't touch me. You couldn't see past this face long enough to remember that I'm still here."
"I know you're still there. I've always known—"
"Knowing isn't enough!" The crack in her composure is brief but devastating. "I needed you to show me. To fight for me. To prove that you loved me more than you were repulsed by this body. But you didn't. You just stood there and watched me leave."
"I didn't know what to do."
"You could've done anything. Anything, Tim. But you did nothing. So I found someone who could." She holds up her wrist, lets the bracelet dangle between you. "Don gave me this. A promise. He wants to remarry me. He wants me to be his wife again. And I said yes."
The world tilts.
"You—what?"
"Not officially. Not yet. But I told him I'm open to it. And I am." Her eyes are bright, fierce. "Because he loves me. He looks at me and sees someone worth fighting for. And you—you look at me and see your mother."
"That's not fair."
"It's the truth." She steps closer, and you can smell her—that mix of perfume and soap and something underneath that's just her. "I gave you every chance. I came to your room, I tried to kiss you, I begged you to see me. And you ran. Every single time. So now I'm done waiting."
"Allison, please—"
"It's Jennifer." Her voice is steel. "I have to be Jennifer. For the lawyers, for the hospital, for Don. And maybe—maybe it's easier that way. Maybe I should just become her. Let Allison go. Because Allison is dead, Tim. Everyone thinks so. Even you."
The accusation hangs between you like smoke.
You're losing her. You can feel it—the distance widening, the girl you loved slipping further into this stranger's skin. And if you don't do something now, right now, you'll lose her forever.
So you do the only thing you can think of.
You close the distance, grab her face, and kiss her.
She stiffens—shocked, frozen—but you don't let go. You pour everything into it. Every moment of want, every second of regret, every ounce of love you've been too paralyzed to show. Your hands shake against her cheeks, your heart hammers against your ribs, and your body screams at you that this is wrong, but you **** yourself past it.
Because this is Allison.
This is the girl you love.
And you're not losing her without a fight.
For three heartbeats, she doesn't respond.
Then—
She kisses you back.
It's tentative at first, testing, like she can't believe you're really doing this. But when your tongue brushes her lower lip, she opens for you with a small, **** sound. Her hands come up to clutch your shirt, pulling you closer, and suddenly you're pressed against each other, kissing like you're drowning.
This is nothing like before. Nothing like the hospital, when you froze and fled. This is raw, messy, real—your hands in her hair, her nails digging into your shoulders, both of you gasping between kisses like you can't get enough air.
"Tim—" She breaks away, breathless, eyes wide. "You—what—"
"I'm sorry." The words tumble out. "I'm so sorry. I should've fought. Should've done this weeks ago. I love you, Allison. I love you, and I can't—I can't lose you. Not to him. Not to anyone."
Her expression cracks. "You can't just—"
"I can. I am." You kiss her again, softer this time, and her resistance crumbles. "Please. Please give me another chance. Let me prove I can do this."
"Tim..." Her voice wavers. "It's too late. I've already—Don and I—"
"I don't care." And you mean it. "I don't care what happened this weekend. I don't care about Dad, or the bracelet, or any of it. I just want you. However I can have you."
She's trembling against you, torn between what she wants and what she's decided, and you can see the exact moment she starts to break.
"I can't," she whispers, but it sounds like a question.
"You can." You brush your thumb over her cheekbone—Mom's cheekbone, but right now you barely notice. "We can figure this out. Together. Just—don't give up on me yet."
She looks at you for a long moment, searching your face for something. Truth, maybe. Or commitment. Or just proof that this time, you mean it.
Whatever she finds must be enough, because she nods.
"Okay."
"Okay?"
"One more chance." Her hands tighten on your shirt. "But Tim—if you run again, if you freeze, if you can't follow through—that's it. I'm done. I'm choosing Don, and I won't look back."
"I won't run."
"Promise me."
"I promise."
She studies you for another heartbeat, then pulls you down into another kiss. This one is slower, deeper, and when she backs toward the bed, you follow.
You sink onto the mattress together—the bed she's been sharing with Dad all weekend—and the wrongness of that should stop you. Should make you pause.
But it doesn't.
Because right now, in this moment, she's not Jennifer. She's not Dad's almost-wife.
She's Allison.
And you're not letting her go.
What's next?
The Ultimate Transplant
Someone you know is given a new body & life
PLEASE ADD CHAPTERS! A close friend or family member is horribly injured in an accident. As they lay dying in the emergency room, another patient dies of a brain aneurysm. Both of them are organ donors, so a surgeon decides it's the perfect opportunity for him to try an experimental surgery. He transplants the victim's higher brain (the cerebellum) to the donor's body in an attempt to 'save' a life. Amazingly it works. But the surgery was not approved so the hospital convinces the families to keep quiet, arguing that revealing this operation to the public would bring never-ending media attention to all involved. That means that the patient will have to publicly assume the identity of the donor. What will this mean to your friends and family? Who else will you tell? Although you will spend a lot of time and effort giving support, how will all this alter your relationship to the patient? And how will he or she adapt to a complete change of body and identity? Many transformation stories focus on the change or victim, so I thought it would be interesting to instead have the POV be someone who sees the change from the outside. Writers feel free to explore a change in age, gender, class or ethnicity - and the repercussions that change would have on the main character (and others). This is from my writing.com story with thanks and credit to other contributors, especially Wassel, Wordsmitty, and Enigma. Please see the original at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1886863-The-Ultimate-Transplant for the original authors' posts. Also you should check out Wassel's version at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1974478-The-Transplant ).
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