What's next?
The Fantastic Four return home
a couple of minutes before the robbers broke into the Baxtor building
A portal opens up in the giant living Area, and the Fantastic Four walk through it

Invisible woman: we're finally home
Human Torch: Now we can relax
Mr. Fantastic: No Johnny, we can't. We made some errors on the mission, and we need to discuss them
Invisible Woman: Reed, please, we're all tired
The Thing: Sue's right, we need the rest, we have been fighting for days
reed: Even you, Ben, I'm doing this so we can get better
Ben: We get that, I can still go on, but can they
Johnny: I can, I just don't feel like it
Sue: We also need to catch up on what happened when we were gone. We don't know what's changed
Suddenly, the silent alarm goes off
Sue: What's going on
Reed: The silent alarm from the garage went off
Reed accesses the camera's
Reed: Looks like we have some criminals breaking in
Johnny: their breaking in here. How stupid are they
Sue: They must still think, we're away on business
Ben: Let's get this over with
Back in the present
Sue: Hi, not a wise plan to break into our house
Criminal 2: OH CRAP
Criminal 1: The hell are you screaming for
The other criminals see Sue
Criminal 1: OPEN FIRE
Criminal 2: NO WAIT I'M STILL HERE
The other criminals all open fire on Sue, but she uses her power to create a barrier, shielding herself and the other criminal from the bullets

Sue: Some nice friends you have
Sue: Deal with them guys
Johnny: on it, sis
Johnny shoots a fireball at one of the Robber's feet, which sends him flying back
Sue: Don't kill them, Johnny
Johnny: Don't worry, I won't
Criminal 3: I'M OUT OF HERE
Criminal 4: ME TOO
The two remaining start running away
Ben: Leaving so soon
The Thing runs at them, and they start shooting at him
Ben: I'm made of stone dumbasses. Bullets don't work on me
He grabs them both and slams their heads against each other, knocking them out
Reed: Looks like everything is under control
Sue: And where were you in all this
reed: I called the cops and made sure that none of my gadgets were stolen
Sue: Really, you could have helped, What if they had weapons that could have harmed us
Reed: unlikely
Sue: That's not the point, you know what, never mind
Reed: Sue, what's wrong
Sue: For the world's smartest person, you can sometimes really miss the point
Johnny and Ben brought the criminals back and bound them together with the other one
Criminal 2: I told you guys this was a bad idea, but you didn't listen
Sue: Maybe next time, don't do something this stupid
Criminal 2: I'm sorry
Johnny: We know, now we just need to wait for the cops, but don't worry, you can think about all your poor life choices in prison
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