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Chapter 70
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FINN 0815
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Hey guys. That was another long wait. I know. :( But I think I can deliver a damn good chapter in return, and hey, I already had enough words, but then I remembered that 69'ing should be included in chapter 69... The pictures in this chapter fit directly with what I'm writing and are therefore placed directly in the text. In the future, I'll experiment with how it looks if I include reference images. These wouldn't fit the chapter directly, either because the models are wearing different clothes, are in different locations, or otherwise don't fit perfectly. I'll then post these images, marked as reference images, at the beginning of the chapter. For example, if we haven't had a picture of Tammy in a while, but I absolutely want to include one for... wanking reasons. I think, since I don't like my last solution anymore, this will work better.
I have a lot more to say at the end of the chapter, but you've waited long enough for this chapter, so I'll keep it short here.
So, now, please enjoy...
Chapter 69
One thing I still haven't mastered after all the kissing, cuddling, fucking, and manhandling, is where to put my hands. It seems that the girls around me, whether with or without MCD, adapt more quickly to the circumstances of having Finn in their lives... and their bodies. Meanwhile, I stand in front of Rose like retarded Superman, hands on hips, hips thrust forward, and my head tilted back, sometimes directed at my sister's bouncing hair.
My life is a porn storie, it races through my mind, and even though it doesn't seem like it, a hot girl's mouth on my cock and all that, it's still a strange feeling to be standing here, triumph and responsibility just as connected as Rose's body is to mine. It's not enough to top it, hell, nothing could stop me from enjoying Rose on my cock, and when I look down again, I recognize her for what she is.
My girlfriend.
And suddenly it's not so difficult anymore to reconcile the little whore with the sweet, **** little sister. Rose is both. And right now, Rose is, above all, the girl who sucks the life out of me.
Not only my life, I realize. Our life is a porn story.
But unlike me, Rose knows what to do with her hands. Without looking at me, focused on her lips on my shaft, she grabs my ass and reaches down, pushes herself a little deeper onto my cock, and sucks her lips hard over my flesh, making me moan loudly.
"Fuck, that's good," I groan. Then I feel something at my side.
Small and innocent, she stands there. Tammy, completely naked, pussy juice on her chin, her big eyes fixed on me, her hands folded behind her sweet ass, her legs pressed together.
"Daddy?" Yes, it's our life that's a porno. But no matter how bitchy she used to be, now my young daughter reminds me that my life is a porn storie with a wonderful, loving... sometimes messy plot.
"Cuddles, my sweet little angel?" I ask. Without words, Tammy presses herself against me, so small, so eager for protection and closeness. Her hair tickles my side, but I hold her close. She stands on tiptoes, closes her eyes, feels my hand running up and down her tender back, and purses her lips in a pleading kiss. Of course, I allow it, bend down, and kiss her soft, girlish glossy lips.
"Oh, Hubby." Jasmine has larger breasts. I feel them more intensely, more pronounced, on my other side. But also her hands as she hugs me and moves her dainty fingertips over the back of my head. Gently, without demanding or suggesting. It's more like her supporting me than her watching me kiss her precious little sister. Her daughter. As Tammy lets my tongue guide her, moaning softly and breathing gently, while Jasmine, with Michelle at her side, holds and hugs me, and while Rose tries to suck my brains out through my cock, I realize how much has changed.
But it's not just about me. Because Jasmine notices it too.
"Will it always be like this, husband?" she asks me and kisses my neck. Her lips, feather-light, touch my skin. Just like her sister, she doesn't want to demand anything. It's a plea for attention, but her hands express their gratitude as they caress me. I decide how much attention she gets and she takes it with humble gratitude. "Are we a family now?" Family. With this thought, I move away from Tammy. She lets it happen, licks her lips dreamily, tasting me as her eyes slowly open, looking into a new world. I turn to my wife. I see hope in her eyes. Her gaze quickly flickers over other parts of my body, and I see the desire boiling in her body like heated water. I can feel it in me too. The rising point. Heat building up. It steams and simmers beneath our surface, but her gaze is like a cooling balm on my equally prickling skin. Even more than my body, Jasmine longs for my love. What I gave Tammy, I now give to her. An intimate kiss with tongue, lots of healthy love and caring passion.
“You would love that, right? After all these years, finally with the man you love?” Jasmine smiles eagerly like a schoolgirl, eyes sparkling, face shining with adoration.
“Yes, please, Hubby. I want it so bad. You can keep punishing me of course. I just want to have a family with you.” We almost lose ourselves in each other’s eyes, I almost see myself standing at the altar with Jasmine, she all in white, me all in black. But there’s needy little lovestruck Tammy at my other side and I’m happy for her urgently tugging at my arm. Her cute pointy breasts press against me and her stiff nipples brush over my skin while she bounces up and down.
“I want a mommy, Daddy,” she squelches as she realizes what the loss of her big sister means to her. "A Daddy and a Mommy when sis is gone. That would be soooo coool! Plase Daddy! Can you make sis my new mommy?"
“Yes please Hubby,” Jasmine squeals as well with this childish joy only a trusted superior can tingle out of a woman. She is so free, not even fearing the fear I inflict on her sometimes for our troubled past. Not anymore. Because there is my wife and her daughter. "I will be good to her. I promise. The best wife for you and the best mother." The two girls look at me urgently. "I will raise her good and proper. The way you want her. Make her how you want her. The perfect daughter for the perfect father."
"Yes, Daddy please. Let Mommy train me." God I'm so hard, I can feel Rose's breath on my skin. “Let me become…” But Tammy stops. She has been so fragile since the MCD brought her into my care. So dependent on me, on my guidance and handling her many deep feelings.
"Tell Daddy." Again, I kiss her and Tammy obeys, even if it's slightly awkward for her opening up while Rose is on her knees deepthroating me.
"Let Mommy show me... so... you stay with me forever. With..." She looks down on her bobbing sister. "With us."
Tammy Lynchwood. +2 (PS +63)
Oh yes, this is her path. Security through me.
"Don't worry, pumpkin," I assure her and brush over her hair. "Mommy and I will make youoooohfuck!" Blinking, Tammy looks down at me and giggles as she watches Rose impaling her skull on me, her nose pressed hard on my skin and then pulling backwards with her lips tightly around my dick. With her cheeks sucked in, she slowly pulls her head back, her hands behind her back, her eyes on me. "Fuck yeah..." I moan. Then, with a loud 'plop', my cock comes out.
"Don't forget about me," Rose admonishes us with a cheeky grin, letting a string of saliva trickle down her chin. Her eyes are sparkling like diamonds. Blood diamonds because she is so devilishly cute. "Good ol' auntie Rose." My eyebrows rise, and the embarrassed realization within me merges with the mischievous anticipation in the eyes of my only remaining sister.
"Oh shit!" My high-pitched voice shows how little I thought about that possibility. "God, I'm such a moron for not thinking about that, but fuck Rose, that's a good one." It's almost magical to see Rose at my feet, and when I imagine that she feels safe there, in her place, with Tammy next to her, her new niece, my cock throbs as much as Rose's pussie lips must. Nevertheless, she is strong and manages to roll her eyes as she gently pulls Tammy onto her knees beside her.
"Figures," she smiles like a little minx. "What else than that?" While Tammy comes to her knees besides her, Rose kisses the tip of my cock. "The world isn't ready for our bond but we are. Auntie Rose keeps things clear between us. That's why you have me by your side." At these words, she beams with pride, but then the desire returns to her face as she speaks. Then she turns to her niece. "What do you say, Tammy my little girl? Should Auntie Rose help you blow your daddy?"
"Yes, please... auntie."
Tammy Lynchwood. +2 (PS +65)
Little Tammy leans forward, auntie's caring hand on the back of her head, eyes closed, pink tongue sticking out, twitching slightly in search of my dick.
"Hey, what..." Rose's voice sounds loving, even if she doesn't understand why I'm pulling the two lovely girls back to their feet.
I just can't take it anymore. My life is so perfect. Rose. Tammy. Jasmine. And...
"Mom." The excited patter of hands and knees on our floor resounds as Michelle Lynchwood breaks away from Jasmine's embrace and trots over to me with a happy expression on her face. I figure we should buy protection gear for her new life below there. But not now.
Maybe it's the more stamina perk, but I could burst with energy. And not just sexual energy. There they all are, my family, so wonderful and perfect. Actually, it should be about me. That's why I have the MCD. So that women submit to me, fall in love with me, serve me, justify their devotion to me, or simply be at my disposal whenever I please. And I have all of that. More pussy than I could ever dream of.
But that's not what drives me, even when I grab Mom by the hair and lead her to the nearest surface, her legs twitching in mad desire. Something falls loudly from the tabletop as I lift her surprisingly light naked body on it, but none of us listens while Michelle's wanton whines seem to make the air pulsate. I move to the edge of the table, between my mother's legs. Her skin is soft and warm as I pull her legs apart. Her cunt winks at me, glistening and slightly open. Immediately, she spreads her lower lips with her hands, opens, and presents her flushed center to me. I can see deep inside her.

Mom takes good care of her body, and her heavy breasts rest firmly on her chest while her muscles seem to have no trouble holding her legs in the air for me. Soft panting escapes between her lips as she is completely focused on me.
I, on the other hand, am in the room with all my girls. I feel the impact of the tip of my cock on Mom's wet pussy lips. Her flesh is soft but I drop my dick hard enough to feel her clitoris under the weight. My tip brushes over the little hood, driving her insane while her owner touches her. With one firm stroke on her clit, I take Mom, and another so everyone can notice me taking possession. Mom squeals happily and wigles her body under me. Then, my cock on my mother's body, I grab Rose's hands, who wants to get behind and hold me while I fuck our mom. But there's so much energy inside me. I'm hot, my cock is throbbing, and I feel like a wolf, ready to hunt, storming through the snow in hot pursuit.
What else can I do in front of such beautiful submission?
"Honey, I..." But Rose doesn't get any further as I pull her to my side and kiss her hard. Then Mom squeals as I hunt her down, praying on her. Tight and wet, her extremely sensitive vagina comes towards an orgasm with just two long, deep thrusts.
"You and Tammy," I command Rose while Mum's quivering pussy clenches around my cock. She pants loudly now, wiggling he head around in delirium. I'm going to be sore tomorrow, but there is Rose, big eyes and loving smile, and seeing her getting what I have—a loving, supportive, fucking family—seems to me the only thing that can handle the steaming energy I carry within me right now. "Go!" My hand slams loudly onto her perfect, round, soft, jiggling ass, and her rough, lust-charged giggle is music to my ears.

Rose and Tammy stand in front of each other, naked. Rose now with a red handprint on her pure, white, perfect skin, Tammy with a healthy blush on her face. They stand there somewhat awkwardly, holding hands, two feuding sisters who hated each other until recently. Now they're going to have sex.
"Fuck owner! Owner! Yes!" Mom screams while I hammer our bodies together with such **** it seems I melt us together. "Just a puppy. Fuck the puppy!"
Michelle Lynchwood. +1 (PS+64)
Her tits wobble wildly while Tammy wants to kiss her newfound aunt.
"On the ground." I snarl like a dog in heat, holding Mom while Jasmine moves towards me with careful pace. "Face into pussy. Now!" God, I'm so horny. I'm so hot. And I'm so full of energy.
"Okay, daddy." It's Tammy who answers first. A short time later, Rose has helped her to the floor. She's lying on her back, at my feet, and I see the weak but sweet muscles in Tammy's slim back working as she tries to support herself on the floor and lower her head. Rose spreads her legs for her and Tammy, after balancing for a second, does the same on her knee. Her hands lay beside Rose, while she, in return, places her hand on Tammy's tights.
"Oh yes..." I hear Rose. Her voice calms me somewhat as I feel Mom cum against my pelvis in a squirting orgasm. My tip brushes over her ge-spot, hammering the orgasm out of her body. "Thanks, honey." And by that, she means me. Does she understand what I'm trying to tell her? I ask myself as I roughly pull my wifey toward me and playfully... okay, I'm so turned on, it might seem a touch too much as I sink my teeth into her throat like a wolf and give her a hickey for eternity. "Tammy..." Rose squeals, incapable of tighter thoughts. And still she reaches out for her sister, just like I wanted her to, to touch her, speak with her. Tammy, the little brat who tortured her for her entire life.
"Tell your auntie how you feel," I order, and see Tammy's head lift. I only see the back of her head, her long hair between Rose's bent, spread legs.
"I feel..." She needs a moment, while I stick my tongue in Jasmine's mouth, devouring my five like a wolf eating a little lamb. The oldest, most experienced, strongest of my sisters is pudding in my hands. A lamb before the wolf. "It's so nice that we're all together," Tammy then whispers. "As a family. Safe and... together."
Tammy Lynchwood. +3 (PS+68)
She tries to say what she knows deep inside her. Her feelings are clear but she's just a silly little girl in a big world.
"I'm so happy we are all safe and happy because of Daddy." Then she can't think of anything else to do except push her quute little tongue back into her auntie's overflowing opening. Rose breathes heavily, but even in my overheated fuck frenzy, I connect with her.
"It'll always be like this now, Rose." My voice is rough, and I don't feel any signs of tiring. My cock throbs and is so hard it almost hurts. It must feel heavenly inside Mom. "Look at her!"
"Yes, brother." Maybe she's a little startled by my harsh tone, and I try to fuck the energy into Mom as I watch Tammy's body lift slightly, helping the sister of der daddy, and she leans back on her trembling knees. With her sweet little asshole in the air, Rose can see most of her lower body and Tammy's head hanging down. Her hair around her cute face, auntie and niece looking at each other, one face upwards, the other turned upside down.
"It will always be like this now," I snarl again, knowing her Freedome Score on the MCD. "Small and helpless. She will never argue with you again. No more fighting. She needs you, Rose. You are her big..." No, not a sister anymore. That's over. "You're her fucking hot auntie who can fuck and kiss her whenever she wants. And you know what?" I grab hold of Mom's legs, holding her together in my iron grip, making her holes even tighter and letting her moan like a bitch in heat while she feels me brushing all over her inner walls. My vision burns at the edges. I see red and black at the same time. With a rough, hard, strong grip, I turn Mom over, almost throwing her off the table. The Strong Woman, mistress of the house, now flattens her tits on the dark wood and spreads her legs as wide as she can so her alpha dog can mount her. My knees press against the surface beneath her, then I grab my cock, spread her ass cheeks with my other hand and ram into her tight, inviting asshole like a jackhammer.
"Ownnnnnnaaaaah!" Who knows how often she came today? I don't care. I want to fruck.
And.
"I want you to be happy Rose."
"I am happy, brother!" she squeals.
Rose Lynchwood. +1 (PS +46)
What else can she be with me? It was destined to us both. And now we are where we should be. Then I see her arms wrap around Tammy's cute bubble butt and she practically rams her lips between her niece's legs. I hear moans and slobbering and more moans. Our voices join together. Rose, Tammy, Michelle, and I. Only Jasmine takes care of me, full of love and without a thought for herself.
"Now do it with wifey. Lick her! Now!"
This time they obey immediately. They're all my good girls and I'm burning up for them. Jasmine gives me one last look over her shoulder, her waist slim and perfect for supporting her body.

For supporting... Kids...
"Fucking hell," I moan and fuck my mother even harder, feeling as if I could fuck her trough the table into the fucking ground. Her legs close around me, holding our rutting bodies together while throwing her head back, banging against the wood and howling like the bitch I fucked her into. Everyone is panting now, groaning and squealing. Everyone is in their own, blissful world. I want to be in this world. I need to be there. I'm burning up if I'm not there, with my girls.
Bit I have a mission and even if I'm feeling as if I could explode in a megaton blast, I keep controlling while fucking Mom and observing my sister with my wife.
Rose is a bit shorter than Jasmine, younger, not as well-nourished, weaker. And she's in charge. Completely. Like a domesticated animal, Jasmine lets herself be pushed down, and this time, Rose is on top.
"Take care of each other!" I order and give myself a reason to stay sane.
It's as if my head is overheating too. Tammy seems to notice, and only when our eyes meet do I see that she might be intimidated. Her Freedom Score makes her a scared but clingy little girl, and...
"Are you okay, Daddy?" But no, strong Tammy is still somehow in there, and her primary concern seems to be taking care of me. Small, nervous but so, so eager, she moves toward me. I'm breathing heavily, my body is hot and steamy, salty sweat in my eyes, making her appear before me as if in an oily dream. But I feel her small breasts with their hard nipples as clearly on my burning skin as cold glass. She is so perfect, my daughter. "You can use me, Daddy," she whispers, while Jasmine and Rose seem to be struggling to push their heads into the vagina in front of them, they want to please me so badly. My gaze rests on Tammy, wild, dilated pupils, and clenched teeth. "Take it all out on your little girl. Please use me."
Tammy Lynchwood. +1 (PS +69)
And that I do. What else than that?
It's a cute giggle, only slightly worried about her Daddy who is carrying her towards the fucking couple in the ground, cradling her in his strong, never tiring arms. I set my daughter down over Rose's legs, her face turned toward Jasmine on her back, who is still wildly licking Rose to an orgasm.
"I said talk," I command again as I hold Tammy close to my body, her back towards me, both out eyes on the 69'ing girls. A long, high-pitched sigh as I enter Tammy's extremely sensitive ass. My little princess is probably already exhausted from her orgasms, but I could go on all night. The room gets hotter and hotter, and it almost feels like we're in an oven. Fuck it. I want to fuck! And I do. I thrust quickly into Tammy as my arms wrap around her. I'm about to say something, angry, fired up like a soldier in battle. Adrenalin rushes through my veins like white phosphorus, burning me while my cock rages in my sweet innocent daughter. But Jasmine beats me to it. And she knows what I want to hear from her.
"I'm so happy for you, Rose," she says into the pussy above her, getting froplets of girly fluids on her lips. "I'm so happy you're finally free."
Jasmine Lynchwood. +1 (PS +72)
While I have to try hard to suppress my fuck rush like I'm waiting for ****, Jasmine's voice, my lovingly trusting wifey, is as calming as running water in the woods. She turns directly to Rose, ignores me and feels Tammy's sweaty legs against hers. "You're going to be so happy, Rose. You deserve it." While she speaks, she rubs Rose's clit gently with her fingertips, knowing from experience how she can make her feel good. My 'best bro', on the other hand, doesn't stop licking. Maybe she doesn't know how to answer the gentle words, but I suspect Tammy and Jasmine are having the effect on my sister that I wanted to create. "We'll be so close together, Rose, so lovingly. I swear it on my husband. I will be the best sister to you or whatever you want me to be. I will be maid and ****. What you want I will give you. What you need I will provide. I..." Her head briefly jerks towards me. "I love him with all my heart and I know I'm not the only one. My daughter and I, we belong to him. And he commands us to you, Rose. We belong to you too now. We will make sure you're happy. Make things right and make you feel... loved." Rose is still licking, feverishly, fast. "We... We will... oh god..." Jasmine trembles in a brief orgasm on Rose's face, her body trembling and her toes curling so sweetly.
I take advantage of the moment and whisper in Tammy's ear to call her beloved puppy. Rose and Jasmine don't notice Mom moving to their side. Her breasts rest on her daughters as she bends down, tilts her head to the side, and lets her tongue glide over Tammy's open pussy while I widen her tiny little asshole. So many orgasms and none of them belong to me. I want to come. I need to come. Fuck I must come! It's like I'm starting to melt.
But watching my girls get closer to each other cools me down enough that the sound of boiling blood in my ears isn't as loud as a fighter jet taking off.
“We will be there for you” Jasmine whispers while Tammy sprays her cunt juice over her sisters, while I muffle her screams with my tongue deep in her mouth. "I swear it, Rose. We all will be there. For each other. We will love you, support you. We're family now and you will never be alone in your life. And..."
“Jasmine…” The first thing Rose says. “Finn, I…Sister and…Tammy and…”
I know her. Heard it often enough. In the night, whenever she thought I was asleep. I know what it sounds like. Rose sobbing.
Back then I couldn't help, hell, sometimes I didn't want to.
Not now.
Now I can help.
Now I want to help.
My blood boils in need to fucking. But more than that I want to make Rose happy.
Rose and my other girls.
I love all of you.
And now I can make things better.
Tammy is happy. I help her trough life, let her fuck up and still be by her side.
Jamsine is happy. No more hiding. She can love me and I will learn the same. We are there for each other.
Michelle is happy. No more fighting against her won family for things she doesn't even want. Only a happy, careless life full of love, cuddles and nice people.
Our Family is healed.
And so, my best bro remains. The girl...
The girl I love more than life itself.
I will make you happy, Rose.
Rose is sobbing heavily now. I know how it sounds. But this time, while her sister licks her possy with tenderness and love, while I fuck her sister together with her mother.
This time it's good tears.
“Please, Rose, let me speak,” Jasmine pleads trough heavy breaths. "Pleas elet me explain. let me help. At least one in my useless life. Please let me make it up to you and earn his love." And Rose keeps licking, mixing cunt slime and sweat with her tears between Jasmine’s legs. "You deserve it. The love. From all of us. Like hubby deserves it. But, let me take care of you... and..." And then Jasmine says something that makes her and Rose climax together. She says the words, and both girls come without me doing anything.
An orgasm of bliss.
"And you'll take care of us."
Jasmine Lynchwood. +4 (PS +76)
It's hard to think. I'm so hot. My cock wants to fuck every pussy to steaming crumbles. I want to rip open every asshole in reach, trust into every mouth and cum in every wet slit my dick can conquer. I have so much fucikng energy I could burst and my dick throbs so hard it seems like he could fuck every girl in town to pieces.
I see Rose trembling over Jasmine. Hard. Jasmine holds her tight, presses her face between her legs as if she were melting into her, and they both come.
Tammy also comes on my cock. Sensitive ass and all that, reaching back and holding her daddy tight to her back.
But I don't come.
One of the girls lying down says she's sorry, a low voice full of emotion. I would recognize her voice anywhere, Rose. And now that I'm her husband, that we're together as a couple, husband and wife, I would recognize Jasmine, too.
But the ringing in my ears is so loud. My blood boils over, my eyesight darkens with red and black.
The girls flinch. I actually wanted to moan, but I might have screamed. It's as if I'm impaling Tammy on my cock like a broken hand puppet. The world around me is moving at breakneck speed. I'm standing ub now, holding Tammy above me, legs spread, her trembling hands around my strong arms while I handle he like a meat doll. I see her bouncing up and down on me, hair flying, girlcum squirting between her legs, fucking her so hard and fast that I'm afraid I'll break her beautiful body. I think she's begging her daddy to take her, to give her everything.
But I can't hear her.
"Girls, we..." I think they can hear me. I speak so fast, at least it seem so while the worlds seems to stand still. Now its the other wayx around. "You need to be safe and happy and I... will..."
At the same time, it's as if time stands still. I see my sisters. Rose. Jasmine. In peace. Everything is fine. They're so beautiful now.
Both sobbing, faces smeared with cunt slime, sweat, and tears. Messy and so, so beautiful.
"I will... make you... feel..."
And there is Mom. Eyes big and in love, adoration for her owner while she sits in the puddle of girlcum her youngest has produced, her arms on the ground and head lifted upwards to me. She comes up to me, standing, holds my face in her paws, and kisses me on the lips.
"Loved..."
I come.
I come so hard.
I've never came so hard in my life.
Tammy bears the brunt of the monster orgasm as I once again place my cum deep inside her ass. I hold her like an oversized porcelain doll while biting down on her throat like a fucking bear. Tammy screams, startled. I wasn't gentle this time.
Then I yank my daughter up. Lift her up one more time and stuff my meat into her cunt.
Tammy comes. Hard.
I come again. Harder. Rose and Jasmine watch in awe.
Tammy's pussy overflows as my second load lands inside her, flooding her tunnel.
And then my third load. Next orgasm.
Tammy screams as she feels me hold her tight, so tight it might hurt, and move her up and down on me without even realizing what I'm doing. Her legs shake in orgasmic bliss and, I can't tell, maybe pain. Her ties vurl and she says cunt juice into the room. She goes pale.
And my world is red and black. I see stars before me, flickering lights. My body never felt so good as the entire energy of the day—fuck, the entire energy of my terrible life—gathers inside me and shoots out of me in one final, gigantic orgasm.
No more suffering. Never. Rose is crying with happiness. Jasmine too. Mom will always have someone to care for her, and Tammy will be safe.
As soon as I apologize to her for my harsh behavior. But first, I'll gently put her down and...
And...
"Finn!"
I would recognize Rose's voice anywhere, even if it joined Jasmine's. Both of them sound so lovely. Both of them sound mortally alarmed.
Mom and Tammy are probably screaming too, but I can't hear them.
I lose consciousness even before my overheated head hits the cold floor.
Long message from the author:
Oh no, Finn fainted. What could be causing that? How dangerous could it be? What happens now?
I've been planning this 'cliffhanger' for a long time, and this chapter was a perfect fit to introduce the next step in the story.
For one thing, hey, Tammy is now at PS +69. That wasn't planned, and when I calculated the points, I had to laugh.
There's also a reason why Rose only got one point, and if I do everything right, you'll all hate me when we get Rose to PS +50. Oh, I'm really looking forward to the comments...
Chapter 70 will start with a lot of cheese, something I'm really looking forward to. But fuck, it annoys me that neither Rose nor Finn are finally confessing their love for each other. And I'm the fucking author. ;)
Chapter 70 will then (also a cool coincidence that it's an even number) kick off the girlfriend and sluts part of The Mind Control Device. Lisa and Bella will take center stage (although I know it will be difficult for me to push the Lynchwood family into the background). But, if I'm strong enough, this orgy will be the "end" of the focus on the family for now. I want to finally introduce Lisa as a cute cosplay girlfriend! I have... like... 2000 Pictures of her.
Along the way, we'll start the path for the future by having the volleyball girls earn money for Finn. I don't want to say anything more about that yet, but we can still talk about it. The "secrecy" is only because I'm working on a plan that will give Lynn, Rania, Sonya, and Candice a little more depth. Once Finn gets to know the girls better, there will be an opportunity for you and the other readers to take some polls about the four of them, basically deciding how their lives should look. We already know Lynn has a long-distance boyfriend.
I'm planning for the four girls to develop different feelings for Finn, to earn money for him in different ways, and to each have different relationships with family/friends/boyfriends and girlfriends. These decisions aren't fully fleshed out yet. For now, I can say, I'm interested (even if not always confident) in my ability to write Male cuckhold. (Boyfriend/Father/Brother) and, of course, Female cuckhold. (Mother/Girlfriend/Sister) (Girlfriend could be Diana Rider as the pig?)
I although work on more paths and perks to include the potential for more characters or, at least, situations we will get into.
And it's pretty much decided that the girls will earn money with their bodies.
Then two more important things/announcements/explanations/apologies.
The poll for Tana.
Fuck, I'm into Emiru.

And she won the poll by a landslide.

But two things prevent me from including her right away. First, I haven't found many good photos. I almost have more photos of the other model than of Emiru. And they all look the same. Also, I've taken a closer look at Emiru's social media content and don't think I can combine my idea of her with my thoughts about Tana. They're both too different. This is a personal thing for me and has nothing to do with you or Emiru. Therefore, it's difficult to incorporate her profitably, and I'll reconsider my decision. Until then, the old model will continue to be used.
I can only apologize for that, and the decision wasn't easy. Worst case, Emiru will stay outside of this story; best case, she'll become the new Tana. I think, because I find Emiru really hot, I'll find another place for her later, or, less likely, include her in another story. I'd rather keep her here, then. Maybe as a girlfriend of one of the Volleyball Bitches. I could work with that and, at the same time, could create a character that fits Emiru and my thinking of her way better.
Okay. Next polls. Same results.


Something happened here that I can't do much with, and it should have been my responsibility to think about the possibility beforehand that the reader would create a situation that would be even more difficult for me to resolve. My fault, not yours!
The reader wants Diana Rider with a narrow lead, but wants her to remain Indian. That's... unexpected.
So I have to think about what I'm going to do here, too. My words remain the same. I can relate more to Diana Rider as a Pig than to Lakota as an Indian. But one thing is certain: I absolutely have to keep the pairings of models and paths, otherwise I can't manage it in my head. My fault. :(
So what we'll probably do is keep Lakota as Zendaya and give her the path as Indian, and later find a use for Daiana Rider as Pig. Just as planned.
One of the volleyball bitches could have her as a stepsister.
That just means I have to think a lot about what can and should happen with Lakota. I can manage that, but time is running out, as I want to include her in chapters 70/71/72, depending on how much I'll be involved with Lisa and Bella. (Probably pretty much).

And since the 69 session between Rose and Tammy (and thus also Rose and Jasmine) won by one vote, I'll also work toward a 69 chapter (also with other positions) with Lisa and Bella. The idea of the two discussing what it will be like to have a (I don't even know if that's right) polygamous relationship (?) with Finn/to live with him in his harem, is really great. And hey, maybe Rose will join in too? After all, as best bro, she has a lot to offer/to contribute to the topic. This is definitely going to be a hot intermission.
Okay, so we've completed all the polls, and I have the next few days to think about what I'm going to do with Lakota and Tana and the potential other girls.
Keep your fingers crossed for me, and as always, I'm grateful for your participation in the creation of this story.
Take care, thanks for reading, and fly safe.
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