Chapter 71
by
BWC Bull Aiden
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Cortana brings you to the clones
You follow Cortana to engineering, which has been completely modified with all of the equipment from Nakayama's space station
Aiden: What's wrong, problems with putting implants into the clones
Cortana: Well, that's the weird thing
You follow Cortana to the operation table, where one of the clone troopers is strapped to
Clone: LET ME GO
Cortana: Look
She shows you an X-ray of the clone's brain
Aiden: Is that an implant
Cortana: an inhibitor chip, it overwrites the clone's mind and makes them follow orders like droids, without emotion, all they need to hear is the right command
Aiden: but they weren't activated
Cortana: Nope, they were all deactivated, but I turned them back on and gave a new command
She hands you a note with a phrase
Cortana: Just say this
Cortana: You're gonna obey aren't you, clone
Clone: NEVER
Aiden: ACTIVATE ORDER 69
The clones' pupils get bigger
Clone: What is your command, master
Aiden: good job, do it to the rest
Cortana: on it
We have 20 operation tables, I'll make my copies, activate the inhibitor chips
Aiden: good, but you couldn't come up with anything better than order 69
Cortana: The original was Order 66, and I thought it was funny
Aiden: So you'll prep them to get fitted with the Dark Troopers armor
Cortana: yep, and just like the aldecaldos they will never be able to take it off, and they won't feel pain
Aiden: good
Cortana: There are two more clones we need to see
Aiden: you mean Rex
Cortana: Yes, but before we go to him, we will go to Jesse
Aiden: he was the clone commander who was taken out by Loba and Panam right
Cortana: Yes, and he is an ARC trooper, it will be a waste to turn him into a normal Dark trooper
You arrive at the table where Jesse is strapped to
Jesse: Do your worst General Tano will come for us
Aiden: and you'll greet her when she comes, though it will be as if my soldier
Jesse: Go to hell
Aiden: So what do you have in mind
Cortana: this
Cortana shows you the blueprints for a new Dark trooper suit

Cortana: he will become the first Dark Trooper commando
Aiden: interesting, how will it work
Cortana: Unlike the others, I'll personally need to make sure he keeps his mind and emotions, so I can't just use the inhibitor chip in his head, I'll need to replace it with a new implant and carefully make him obedient without damaging the rest of his brain
Aiden: so he won't be emotionless like the other Dark troopers
Cortana: Exactly
Aiden: well go ahead
Cortana: I will, but let's not forget about Rex
You head for a secluded operation table where Rex is being held
Aiden: hello Rex
He doesn't say anything
Aiden: nothing to say, fine
Aiden: Do you think he's ready for the Atom Smasher suit
Cortana: he's our best choice
Aiden: bring the suit up
Cortana: As you wish
The suit comes out of the floor so Rex can see his prison

Rex: What the hell is that
Aiden: oh he speaks
Cortana: This will be your prison, you'll serve master as the invincible cyborg killing machine
Rex: Never
Cortana: Oh you don't have a choice, the armor will melt together with your body, it will become your prison, you'll never be able to take it off, and if that wasn't enough punishment, all the systems will be hooked to your brain
Aiden: if it doesn't kill you
Cortana: true
Aiden: you'll be impacted with a new implant after the suit is on you
Cortana: If you survive
Cortana: This operation table was designed for putting the suit on, it's completely automatic, so I'll see you when it's done, either as master's new killing machine, or as a corpse
Aiden: see you alter
Cortana presses the button, and arms come out of the operation table with lasers and other tools and start operating on Rex
Rex: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Aiden: he sure can scream
Cortana: I doubt that will stop
Aiden: was that all
Cortana: It was
Aiden: Good, then time for me to head back to Liara and Jane
Cortana: Have fun breaking her
Aiden: I will
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It's the year 2200 and you are a 23 year old with a giant 15 inch BWC and have decided to take over the Galaxy and create a new empire
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