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Chapter 53
by BreaktheBar
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Margot Returns
“What. Happened?” Hannah asked as she pulled Margot’s apartment door open all the way to let the other woman back in. The others had gone back in but were waiting just inside the door, and Hannah had posted up peeking out and waiting.
She wasn’t sure what she was feeling about the fact that Margot was coming back wearing Ollie’s housecoat. She recognized it from his bathroom even if she’d never seen him wearing it. The fact that she was naked under there, all her voluptuous goodies rubbing against the fabric of his clothes (even if it was a housecoat and not, like, a sweater or something) made her feel things.
“He was so worried,” Margot chuckled as she entered the apartment. She grinned at the others when she saw they were waiting, and Hannah shut the door behind them. “I mean, his eyes bugged out when he saw me, but his first reaction was to be a hero. And, I mean, I don’t know why we didn’t see that coming because it’s Ollie. But you guys probably saw he grabbed me and pulled me inside? Well, he was just like ‘Holy shit what happened!?’ and we stood chest-to-chest because he was trying not to be rude and look, so I explained about the game and the dare.”
“Oh, God,” April groaned, smirking and shaking her head. “So I guess he knows why he got booby pics and Zara’s call.”
Hannah also shuddered a little but kept her mouth shut, wondering if Ollie had pieced together her texts to him were from dares too.
“So once he figured that out,” Margot continued. “I kind of stepped away and let him get a good look and he was so sweet about trying not to. And since he was being such a gentleman I figured ‘What the hell?’ and I dropped to my knees, unzipped his shorts and started blowing him. And you were right, it’s huge.”
“You did not!?” Hikaru gasped.
Margot snorted and started laughing at the looks on the other girls’ faces. “No! Of course not, God. Can you imagine if I had, though? Like, the look on his face? And honestly, he’d stop me the instant his brain caught up with whatever I did because he wouldn’t want to cheat on you, April.”
The busty brunette let out a breathy laugh, shaking her head. “Fuck, you had me there for like a split second,” she said.
Margot gestured for everyone to head back into the living room, and as they went Hannah saw her casually drop the robe from off her shoulders. The cowgirl pulled it off completely, revealing her ridiculously nice body again and folding the garment in half to set it on the counter. Then she stretched, her body jiggling in that enticing way that Hannah felt like hers couldn’t even if she knew she was hot, and Margot caught her looking and grinned and shrugged before grabbing her sweatpants and pulling them on, followed by her sweater.
“OK,” Zara said, having taken her seat and a gulp of her drink. “We doing another round? Things are starting to get good.”
April opened her eyes wide and glared at her friend, but didn’t immediately object. Hannah wasn’t sure if she wanted another round to happen or not - on the one hand, holy fuck that last one had been a lot. On the other, she could get dared to do something with Oliver and that would give her a free pass…
“I’m game, but I think Hikaru isn’t,” Margot said. The fact that her panties and bra were still on the counter next to Ollie’s robe wasn’t lost on Hannah.
“Nope,” Hikaru said, shaking her head vigorously. “I’m done. I can’t do anything like that.”
“Then we should call it here,” April said firmly, giving Zara a little emphatic eye contact. “We don’t want anyone getting too uncomfortable.”
“Fine, fine,” Zara said, holding her hands up defensively. Then she looked at Margot. “Touche, by the way. Well done.”
“Well thank you,” Margot smirked, nodding back with the same respect. She’d been called out and stepped up.
“Still, general dare for anyone who has the guts to do it,” Zara said. “Try and find a time in the next week to flash Ollie and get a picture of his face when you do it. I can only imagine that look that Margot got.”
Margot snorted and smirked, and Hannah thought she saw the other woman make eye contact with Hikaru as they all laughed nervously.
“So if that’s the end of the game,” Hannah asked. “What are we doing now?”
“I think Zara and April have plans with the man next door,” Margot said. “And you shouldn’t keep him waiting. He was a complete gentleman but a naked lady is a naked lady. I’m sure he’s turned on something fierce after Zara’s call, too.”
“Oh my God,” April blushed. “I don’t know how I feel about you girls knowing that’s what we’re going to do.”
“I’m fine with it,” Zara smirked, standing up from her seat and reaching over to grab April’s hand and haul her to her feet. “Come on, let’s go get fuckin’ laid.”
Hannah and the others got up as well and said goodbye with hugs as April and Zara got their stuff together and headed to the door. It was… kind of awkward, kind of weird, especially when Zara hugged Hannah because even though she was warming up to everyone she was still a little stiff. Then the brunette and the redhead were out the door, and Margot shut it behind them and turned to Hannah and Hikaru.
“Bow chica wa-wooow,” Margot sang, making Hannah snort.
“What?” Hikaru asked.
“Oh my God, Hikki,” Margot sighed.
“That’s the classic porn music meme,” Hannah chuckled.
“It is?” Hikaru asked.
“Do we need to show you old 70s porn to show you?” Margot laughed. “I’m sure we could find some online.”
“No, I don’t need to see any porn,” Hikaru said, her eyes wide. “I’ve seen enough naked people for today, thank you.”
That got laughs out of Hannah and Margot again as they headed back into the living room. They each took their seats, and then Hannah moved to be closer to the other two, sitting where April had been earlier. They each took a long sip of their drinks, silence settling on them for a long moment.
“Can you believe that they are having a threesome over there right now?” Hannah blurted out. “Like… Oliver. Fucking. Two women.”
“With his gigantic cock,” Margot added with a little snicker. “Good for him - and I told him so.”
“God,” Hannah shook her head.
“Fuck,” Margot agreed.
Hikaru let out a little hum in agreement.
“So… what now?” Margot finally asked.
And then Hannah and Margot both ended up shocked because Hikaru, of all of them, started giggling and said, “Well, we could have our own threesome right here.”
“We could, but we don’t have an Ollie to make it fun,” Hannah laughed, the words slipping out without thinking. She almost bit her tongue as she realised what she said.
Hikaru didn’t seem to notice, but something passed across Margot’s face as she was laughing as well, making Hannah wonder if she’d just put her foot in her mouth.
Fucking hell, Hans, she thought. Think before you speak!
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Updated on Jun 10, 2025
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