THE NEW COACH CHAPTER 21 (Hannah's Pov)

“Madam Agent, please wake up.”

I gradually woke up as I heard Raven keep calling my name.

What happened? Why did I lose my consciousness?

“Thank goodness you wake up,” Raven let out a breath of relief.

“Can you tell me what happened?”

“I think we have sex, and then we get carried over, and then we suddenly lose consciousness because of orgasm. I can at least remember the part when I licked your pussy.” The goth girl explained.

I was trying to check my memory whether what she said was the truth or not, but unfortunately, because of the effect of the ****, my memories during the time the **** had taken full effect on me was also quite vague and blurry, but I could a bit clearly recall how Raven lick my pussy. So that part was at least true. For the latter part though, I couldn’t check the truth, it seemed that Raven was also not fully sure about what she said. She was also under the effect of the **** no better than me.

At this point, I could only trust what she said and hope there was nothing wrong during the time we were under the effect of the ****.

“So, Miss Agent, will you still send me home?” Raven asked.

“Of course, I am. Let me change my clothes first,” I answered.

I made Raven wait in the living room, while I went back to my room quickly to change my clothes. Five minutes later, I came back to the room with more casual clothes of blouse and trainer pants. I saw Raven was playing with her phone while waiting for me, it seemed that Scott had returned the phone to her.

“Find anything interesting regarding yourself when you are under the influence?” I asked her.

“Mostly nude photos, I seem to send them to an anonymous number when I am Candy.”

“Did you have any conversation with the anonymous number?”

Raven shook her head, “No conversation, only photos. I send the number my nudes every few hours regularly. It makes me feel sick knowing that somebody I don’t know had my nude photos.”

“Let me check.”

She handed me her phone. I copied the number on my phone. I have the agency number tracker app on my phone. An app used for track and wiretap operation. A moment later, the app came back with a result. I expected that it was Darel’s number, but the result showed that it was Ariana Fisk’s number. Just as Raven confessed before that the one who controlled her was Ariana, the school guidance counselor and not Darel.

“You sent them to Ariana Fisk. That’s her number.” I told her.

“See? It’s Mrs. Ariana who controls me before, not Coach Darel.”

“I will do some checks on her later. For now, let’s get your attire back to Candy’s attire and send you home.” I didn’t want to argue with her whether the mastermind was Ariana Fisk or Darel Lebron. It’s not like the two of them couldn’t be the big bad evil behind the scenes at the same time.

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Half an hour later, we arrived at Raven’s home. At first, my plan was to drop her in front of the gate and drive away, but the girl held my hand. She begged me to accompany her as a ‘moral support’ if she saw something she didn’t want to see. Well, watching your mom turned into a slut by someone was a hard-to-swallow spectacle.

I nodded my head in agreement before I realized what I did. I didn’t know why I agreed, but after looking at how grateful Raven was, I couldn’t take my word back. Well, her house’s layout seemed to be simple enough, escape would be easy if the need arose.

We entered the house with caution. It didn't take long before we met Raven's mother, Donna Kendall. We had prepared for the worst, like seeing her in slutty outfit or her in the middle of fucking someone. But what we saw was something ‘normal’. Well, not entirely normal, what we saw was an older woman with long green hair, dressed in black long maxi dress. Nothing slutty, but she was unmistakably a goth.

“Is your mom a goth?” I whispered to Raven.

“Of course she is, where do you think I got my goth influence?” Raven replied.

The Goth housewife noticed our presence, “Mis–sy, where have you been? I called your phone a few times, but you didn’t answer me. I called the Robinson, but they also didn’t pick my call. I was so worried that something happened to you. Glad that you are ok.” Donna gave Raven a quick hug before stepping back and looking at me.

“And who is this?” She looked at me suspiciously.

“This is my friend, Hannah. Hannah, this is my mother, Donna. She looks a bit goth, but she is a good person.” Raven introduced her mother to me.

The suspicion in Donna’s face didn’t vanish entirely even after Raven introduced me as her friend. Well, granted, I’m not exactly looking like some high school girl.

“Welcome to our house, Hannah. Thank you for taking care of my daughter. Have you eaten? Please stay with us for dinner.”

“Thank you for your offer, Mrs. Kendall. I will consider it. I’m here to help Raven with some technical issues, right, Raven?” I reminded Raven.

“Right. Mom, I will go to my room with my friend first. We will go down after the tech issue I have is fixed.”

The two of us quickly escaped to Raven’s bedroom.

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Raven’s room was half pink and half black. On the black side, there was a poster of an emo band. The band that typical goth love. On the pink side, there were posters of instagram slut influencers with big fake tits and a vain dull face.

“Fuck. They changed my room. It used to be all black, and didn’t have this wall full of slutty photos.” Raven cursed.

My eyes looked at the pictures on the wall, most of them were pictures of big titted girls. I somehow found them fascinating. Most of the girl’s face was dull as if they were…hypnotized. Maybe that’s why I was drawn to the pictures.

“I’m sorry for the inappropriate picture, Ma’am.”

Raven’s voice broke me from my trance.

“It’s fine. Anyway, Raven. Did you notice something wrong with your mom? Is she always a goth?”

“I think, well, since i’m a child she was always a goth as far as I could remember. Hence, it surprised me that she let me dress like a Bimbo when I was Candy. I believed that she was compromised, but looking at her now, it seems whoever was behind this didn’t do so much to my mom.” Raven let out a relieved sigh.

I didn’t want to break the bad news to her. On the contrary, the mastermind not doing anything much to her in this situation was the worst, we didn’t know whether she was under their control or not.

“It's good that she still likes what you remembered, but still be cautious. We don’t know how much she was compromised,” I reminded her.

Raven nodded. We then started to search her diary.

“It should be here. Where is it?” Raven mumbled as we rummaged every nook and crannies in her room to search for her diary.

In the end we failed to find it in the room.

“Sorry, Ma’am. It seems I lost the diary. I expose you to danger for nothing.” Raven’s eyes began to get glassy as she tried to hold her sadness.

I hugged her, “ You don’t put me into any danger, you should blame yourself. It’s okay, we can still find other proof.”

“Thank you, Ma’am. I will help you as much as I can to apprehend the culprit behind the scenes. I promise.”

KNOCK KNOCK.

Someone knocked on the bedroom door.

“Mis–sy, have you solved your issue? The meal is ready. Bring your friend too.”

“Just wait, Mom. We will come to the dining room as soon as we finish this.” Raven replied to her mom.

“Okay, just be quick. I will wait for you in the dining room.”

Raven looked at me, “Have you eaten, Ma’am?”

As if my stomach waited for that cue, my stomach growled. The whole event from morning to this night made me neglect myself. I haven’t eaten anything aside from breakfast. I’m famished.

“Let’s go out and eat my mother’s cooking.” The girl said.

I shook my head, “Honestly, I don’t think it’s a good idea. We don’t know if she laced our food with something.”

“I will be your poison tester. You will not touch the food until I taste it to check whether my mom was drugging it or not. In turn, you will have my back, if there is something wrong, please bring me away.”

It was a feasible plan and I finally relented. Bringing her away from this place was something I could do when things got messy.

We then moved to the dining room where Donna had been waiting for us. The table was filled with sumptuous looking meals. I sat beside Raven. I got food on my plate but as planned, I didn’t touch it. Raven picked the same meal as me and tasted them first. After I observed her that she seemed fine, I started to eat my food. I need to admit that Donna was a good cook. She put a lot of spice in the meal. It’s tasty and flavorful.

“So, what have you girls been doing in the room? What issue do you have? Maybe I can help you two.” Donna asked in the middle of our meal

“We are seeking for my diary, mom? Have you seen it?” Raven replied frankly.

“Your diary? I think I have seen it somewhere in the basement. When we renovate your room, you put some of your stuff in the basement, don’t you remember?”

I have been observing Donna’s expression since I sat on this table to anticipate if she did any suspicious movement. From her expression, it seemed that she didn’t lie.

“Sorry. I forgot.” Raven answered.

The two of us looked at each other. I could see in Raven’s eyes that her hope was rekindled.

Raven excitedly finished her meal. After that she excused herself to go to the basement. I was following her to their basement.

I thought their basement would be a warehouse where they put unused things there , but it seems like a basement workout room rather than a warehouse. There are several workout gear in the room. They repurposed the workout room to be a warehouse. There are several boxes on the room corner.

“Is this where your mom workout, Raven?”

“Yes, this used to be a place where mom did her yoga, but ever since Dad left, this basement was repurposed as a warehouse. Nowadays, she workout at an outside gym rather than at home. She is a member of Dare All Gym. Do you know the gym?”

My mind was alarmed after hearing Raven’s answer. Dare All Gym was a gym owned by Darel.

“Did you hear something? A music?” I asked Raven. Maybe because my mind was suddenly on guard, I could finally notice the soft buzzing sound in the background.

“Hear what? I don’t hear anything,” Raven was too focused on seeking her diary.

She threw several things out of the box as she was rummaging it.

A photo was falling right on my foot and I picked them up. It was a photo of Raven, and Donna. A pretty different Donna. Not the green haired goth MILF Donna, but a professional looking woman with honey-blonde hair.

“Raven, look at me, do you recognize the woman in this photo?” I showed the girl the photo.

“Ugh…my head.” Raven suddenly held her head in pain when she looked at the photo.

“Raven, are you okay?” I asked her in concern.

She took a few deep breaths, “I’m okay…I’m okay. Sorry. Why do you show me the photo?”

“Do you recognize the woman in this photo?” I asked her again.

“Why do you ask? Aren’t that you? You are my mom’s sister.”

Fuck, why did Raven seem to be under the influence again?

The music! It's subliminal! The photo is a trigger. This is all a trap.

Unfortunately, it was too late for me. My vision seemed to be blurry. And my mind went foggy as I succumbed to the subliminal.

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“Hannah, are you okay?” Donna asked me in concern. I found myself back at the dining table

“I’m okay Mrs. Kendall. Where’s Raven?”

“What? Why do you call me Mrs. Kendall, call me Donna, you are my sister, not a stranger. Your niece is currently sleeping in the room.” Donna answered.

“Am I your sister?”

To be continued

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