Chapter 34
by
MindGuy
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Mind fuckery
After Doctor Fate used his spell, I lost consciousness and fell into a dream.
I open my eyes and slowly stand up. This is weird, for starters, I'm completely naked; there's this huge blue-colored space surrounding me, I see at the distance some dots of light, like stars but instead of space, it feels like the ocean. This reminds me of that blue space that I saw when I managed to control Athena's mind.
But then as I turn around I stare at something that scared the fuck out of me... I saw my face. No, like... I'm actually seeing another me.
I see someone who looks exactly like me, with the same body, hairstyle, and facial structure; but his skin is blue and his eyes completely white. I scream "What the fuck!? WHO'RE YOU!?"
The... Other me?... Answers "Oh um... I think... I'm you." he says calmly and pleasantly.
I stared at him with a lot of confusion and wondered if I was actually losing my sanity. I then ask "What? No, wait..." My head hurts "I'm me, myself, like I'm 99% sure that I'm not blue."
The other me then says "Hmm... Then who am I?" I then got angry and said, "HOW THE FUCK AM I SUPPOSED TO KNOW THAT!?" He then answers "I... Don't know."
I do a facepalm and squeeze the bridge of my nose with 2 fingers.
I then remembered that Doctor Fate said that he was gonna create a bridge between my and Raven's brain. I then ask the other me "Okay since we're not going anywhere let me change questions... Is this my head?" He then answers "Oh! Yes! I've been here ever since I fell into this planet."
Wait...
I then ask him "Are you... My the cosmic energy?" He then nods his head.
WTF is happening!? I have a lot of questions but first I say "Holy shit! I didn't know you were... Alive." The other me says "Well, I guess I wasn't for most of my existence, but merging with you helped me to adapt."
It's quite surreal to be talking with myself, I then tell the other me "I think to make things easier I'm just gonna call you... Blue." He then smiles and says "Ooooh, okay, I like that name." I guess it's not surprising since you're me.
But then, out of nowhere, "AAAAAAAH!" We hear a loud female scream "Oh shit Raven! I need to get out of here." I said in a worry.
Blue then tells me "Yeah, you should probably go there..." That's when he points to a bright yellow portal behind him, that's probably Doctor Fate's magic creating a door between our brains as he mentioned before.
I then tell Blue "Okay, sorry I have to leave, hopefully, we can talk another time!" I say as I'm beginning to run. Blue just waves his hand and screams "O-okay! Bye!"
I go through the portal and I end up in this weird place. The terrain is rocky and grey, like an island floating in space; the trees are black, and both the stars and moon are red. I think to myself "Is this Raven's mind?"
I then hear someone crying. I ran to see where the sound was coming from, and that's when I saw her, I think her name was Raven if I remember correctly. I see that she's naked like me, but she's also crying, she has both her palms on her face and tries to walk but her steps are shaky.
I then slowly approach her and I ask "Hey! Hello! You're Raven, right? I was- AAAH!" Before I could finish my sentence, I began to float into the air.
Raven stares at me with glowing red eyes and screams in an almost demonic voice "WHAT DO YOU WANT!?" Her breasts bounce as she raises her arm and lifts me into the air.
I raise my eyebrows in fear and confusion while I'm floating and say "HEY! I'M HERE TO HELP YOU! I SWEAR!" She then has a better look at me and calms down; her eyes return to normal and she slowly descends me back into the ground.
After that, I nervously ask "Are you okay?" She then sighs and answers in a monotone voice "No... Who sent you here?" I then answer "Uh... A guy called Doctor Fate found you ****, and he's worried since you're not waking up."
She then stares at me and asks "Hmm... You have a power that allows your brain to connect with other minds, right?" I then get surprised and ask "What!? How do you know that?" She then crosses her arms between her boobs and answers me "My barriers deflect magic, you would need to have a powerful ability capable of sneaking here without me noticing."
Damn, she's smart.
I then casually answer "Uh, well, yeah... I have this power that's like hypnosis, where I can give orders and nobody minds following them... But I can't alter stuff like memories, personality, or emotions; just how the person perceives me." Raven then raises an eyebrow and says "So your power subconsciously affects how someone perceives you." I then say "Well... Yeah."
She then looks down and sees that I have an erection. I then notice that she's looking at it and I tell her "Sorry, nobody gave me a change of clothes for traveling inside of somebody's mind." She then rolls her eyes.
I then ask Raven "So... What's happening?" Raven can feel my lingering energy, however, she doesn't feel the need to resist it; she just answers "It's complicated, I guess you could say that had a rough day, but now even more after my father died..."
I say "Oh... I'm sorry to hear..." She then interrupts me "I killed him... My father was Trigon, a demonic entity from another dimension... He killed my mother and destroyed my home planet..." I then blink twice in surprise and continue "Ah... I'm sorry that it took you so long to kill him?"
Like seriously, how the fuck am I supposed to answer that?
Raven then stares at her hands and says "He wants to come back, even after I used everything that I got... I can still feel his energy lingering inside of me." I then get worried and ask "Oh, so... I'm guessing after you fought him... You crashed here him on Earth?" Raven nods her head.
That explains why Doctor Fate found her inside a crater.
She then closes one of her palms, her fist begins to glow in a weird black ball of energy. Raven angrily says "I can't let him return... But even when I focus all my power into erasing the last remains of his energy... The more I do, his energy produces this painful sensation inside of my head to the point where it becomes unbearable..." Her voice breaks for a bit "I just want this to be over." She says while feeling tired and angry with some tears falling down her cheek. Her magic is making some rocks levitate around us.
After hearing her, I think for a bit, and I ask her "Hmm... How about I help you to make the process less painful?" Raven then gets confused and surprised by what I said, making the rocks around us stop floating and drop back to the ground. She then asks me "What exactly would be your plan?"
That's when I walk toward Raven and tell her "My power makes it so people can't feel negative emotions towards me or my orders... So, I can give you the order of focusing your magic into erasing your father's energy."
Raven raises her eyebrows and surprised says "Can you really do something like that!?" I then say "Well, it works on others, so it should work on you too..."
I then place my hand on her shoulder and say "But first... We should probably wake up." I say it mainly because I can't feel her body... Or anything for that matter since we're still inside this mind... Realm? Dimension? Dream? (I don't know what to call this place).
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