Chapter 24
by
Jame Z
What Does the Voice Suggest(Comment)?
Femi’s gift
“The show’s for Femi, so let her choose. Offer to do whatever she wants, as a thanks for understanding you.” The voice spoke.
Target > 60
1d100+43 Roll = 98
Successful Suggestion (+1 Corruption Point)
Jade Sato (Update):
Corruption Points = 44
Jade could feel her will to fight begin to fade as the voice spoke again. If it kept this up she’d be stuck following it’s orders forever. It knew how to pray on her weaknesses as well, she really did want to apologize to Femi but not like this.
Jade looked back to her computer, another PM from Femi on the screen.
“Wait, really? Are you sure?”
“Absolutely! I think I owe you an apology and a thank you, for understanding me. You’re a special viewer to me, after all.” Jade typed, following the voices orders.
Femi responded quickly, “Wow. Thank you, Jade. When and how did you want to do it?”
“How about a discord call? So we can chat, face to face. And as for when, well, whenever you want. This is for you after all.” Jade pasted her discord into the message as well.
It took Femi a few moments to respond, “Could we do now? Would that be ok?”
“Of course! Just give me a few minutes to get ready. ; )”
Jade felt her face grow red with the final message. That definitely seemed like flirting, and she couldn’t even blame it on the voice. Was it really getting to her that much, or was she just feeling daring after learning Femi had a crush on her?
She wasn’t even sure what getting ready should mean in this situation. Should she just get dressed and cleaned up from the stream? Is this the sort of thing she should dress up for?
“Wait. No no no no!” Jade quickly realized the mistake behind her indecisiveness, as the voice began to share its own opinion.
“You’ve got some nice lingerie in your drawers. Your promise to Hannah means you can’t wear it for much longer, so do something special with it. Toss it on with all the bells and whistles, plus some heels and makeup. A real seductress for our closeted lesbian, to see if we can’t help her out.”
Target > 125
1d100+44 Roll = 130
Successful Suggestion (+4 Corruption Points)
Jade Sato (Update):
Corruption Points = 48
Jade tried to fight off the suggestion with all her willpower, but she found the mental image just a bit too hot.
“It’s almost like seducing a straight girl, but with a higher chance of success.” Jade thought, biting her bottom lip, “I didn’t even think I was into that, but it’s so hot…”
Jade went to her drawer and pulled out the set the voice mentioned. It wasn’t her style, or at least it didn’t use to be. It had been a gift from her older sister, in the hopes Jade would let loose and have some fun in college.
“Guess she’s getting her wish.” Jade thought.
The set was pretty simple, but sexy. A blue lace bra, with fishnets positioned to just barely reveal her nipples. Matching panties, which were by all accounts the last revealing piece. Black garters with matching fishnet stockings. It even had black, partially see through gloves, which would reach all the way up to her forearms. She’d been planning to throw it away, but now she found herself glad she didn’t.
She didn’t have any good heels to go with the look, though. Or makeup. But, her old roommate probably had. She went digging through the left behind clothes, until she found what she was looking for. A pair of red, 5-inch heels which looked like they’d fit Jade. She also found so basic makeup supplies, perfect for completing her new, slutty look.
Jade put on her lingerie and began applying the makeup in the mirror. Between the red lipstick, eye shadow and blush Jade almost looked like a completely different person.
“I look… Good, actually. Maybe all this isn’t entirely a bad thing, as long as it doesn’t mess with my studies.”
Jade slipped on the heels and began making her way back to her computer. She stumbled a bit at first, unused to such high heels.
She sat down an started the call, anxiously waiting for Femi’s arrival.
How does Femi react?
The Curse of Corrupting Comments (Open)
A story in which you the reader tries to corrupt naive women into becoming sexual deviants with your comments. A dice game between writer and reader.
Corrupt and control women as they struggle to fight off the voice in their head (you) that keeps driving them towards sluttier, sexier and degrading situations. Build up their corruption points to make biggger and badder corruptions possible.
Updated on May 20, 2026
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Created on Feb 26, 2023
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