Go On The Offensive; Try The Hypnosis Video

The last vestiges of Raven's power still hung in the air, tingling against the tip of your tongue and nose, raising the hairs on the back of your neck. Her offer of a reward was, quite frankly, beyond tempting, but you didn't come here to beg for handouts. You were her for conquest and power, to get everything you had coming to you.

Underneath the table, as surreptitiously as possible, you slid your phone out from your pocket and opened it up, scrolling through to bring up one of the hypnosis videos on Slutter. Praying that this would work as advertised, instead of being some prank by a bunch of weirdos, or an in-joke for some hypno-fetishist community.

Steeling yourself one last time, you looked Raven dead in the eye and said, "Well, Raven, the reason why I did it is right... here!" You thrusted your phone out, the screen displaying an endlessly looping black-and-white spiral, and shoved it straight into Raven's face. Your heart soared when you saw Raven stricken with shock, eyes going wide and her smug smirk fading away.

"Oh... god...!" Raven gasped, softly, eyes locked on the screen. "This spiral... I can feel it in my mind... spinning and boring and spiraling..." Yes, yes, yes! You couldn't help but grin maniacally as Raven muttered to herself, softly. "I can feel it... in my mind... it's telling me... telling me..."

"That you belong to me now, Raven!" You exclaimed, tasting the elusive and intense flavour of victory. "You'll obey me now!"

Raven moaned and shuddered. "Nooo... it's telling me..."

And then, her eyes narrowed and sharpened, sparkling cruelly. Her mouth became a wicked sharp smile.

Uh oh.

In an instant, Raven snatched your phone from you hands and shoved you the leather seating of the booth, placing one palm flat against your sternum. Despite her stature and ludicrously erotic body, she was far stronger than she looked. You were helplessly pinned down beneath the smiling woman, both by her strength and a dark, heavy pressure emanating all around her.

"It's telling me you'll have to try better than that!" She cackled darkly, the most emotion you had seen on her since she arrived at your booth. Starfire gasped in shock once more. Right. You were so focused on the gothic beauty before you, you almost forget about her.

You struggled in vein beneath Raven, who seemed amused by your efforts. "Unfortunately, I am far from impressed. No reward for you, you'll have to be punished instead." Dark energy began to surge from her hand, the one pinning you down. The energy quickly flowed into and around your body, an altogether not unpleasant experience, as a tide of warmth washed over you. "But, I won't be calling one of the bouncers to knock you around. I have something much more fun in mind." Raven then looked up to her friend for a brief moment. "Star, get a mirror from the dressing room. Our guest will want to see themselves after this."

You could hear Star walk away on her heels, the redhead complying with her friend's request most eagerly. You were about to say some form of futile protest, when the energy Raven was generating spiked. Suddenly, the pleasant warmth turned into blinding pleasure. Your cock grew hard again, as every nerve ending in your body went made, every pleasure centre lighting up like the fourth of July. Flashing through your mind a mile a minute were memories of every sexual encounter in your life. Vivid ones, too, as you began to perfectly recall every sight, sound, smell, and sensation from those moments, in perfect clarity, but at one-hundred times speed. It was incredibly and frightening and numbingly overwhelming all at once.

Whatever you wanted to say turned into mush in your brain and left your mouth as a deeply erotic moan.

The warming aura around you began to shift and flow, almost as if you were lying in a fast-moving river of warm liquid. Everything felt so fluid and loose and light, or rather, everything you could feel beyond the blinding pleasure ripping through your body. Your body slowly began to submerge into that warm river, water flowing all around you, sweeping you away. The river turned into a torrent, the warmth of your body mixing with it, as your limbs turned to water, stretching and shrinking and growing and contracting at a rate beyond your control. Soon, your entire body followed suit, ebbing and flowing in wide twists and sweeping curves. Everything felt... softer now. You felt softer. Smaller. Different.

More beautiful?

Without warning, you were pulled out of the river, Raven releasing her hold over you and backing away, lips formed in a thin, proud smile. She loomed over you, dark eyes flitting up and down your body. Your vision was still blurring, but you read the expression as someone taking pride in their work. You tried to say something, tried to move, but your entire body felt weak. Pins and needles ripped through your limbs, and your head was spinning. You felt.. strange was the only word you could come up with. Not sick, not hurt, just strange.

Starfire soon joined in her friend in looming over you, the redhead breaking out into a smile that was first confused and then supremely joyful. "Oh, yes friend Raven! This much more fun than a bouncer stomping the mudhole in this person."

"I'm glad you agree, Star." Raven said, cryptically. "Now..." Opening her hand, Raven was given a large, ornate hand mirror by Starfire. "Tell me, what do you think of your makeover?"

Makeover? Still struggling to find your voice, you were about to try and speak again, when Raven held the mirror up to your face. You found your voice, alright, as it came out in a very feminine, very surprised gasp.

You had been transformed, from head to toe! Body and outfit! You were a strikingly gorgeous woman now and, as you quickly became aware, one without a cock. In fact, it took a moment, but you recognized who you were. You were one of the superheroines out in DC; someone from the Justice League! You didn't have the greatest knowledge of the super-powered community, so you stared at your new reflection and racked your brain to come up with the answer of your new identity...

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POLL CLOSED

Well, this was an absolute landslide of a poll. I actually wrote this the night before publication (Feb 23), because I was so confident there was no way any other option would catch-up and overtake "Go On The Offence".

Again, this may not be what some of you who voted for this option expected, but this story or this arc was never to be going to be about someone stealing girls from Rob. Plus, Raven has some newly-inspired demonic powers to show-off, so things ended up aligning quite well.

For the poll, you will be choosing the appearance of our anonymous narrator. I know it says "superheroine" in the text, but it can be any heroine or villainess from DC Comics. My choices for the poll are focused more on "lower tier" characters, ie, anyone who isn't an A-List heroine in DC, but there is an "Other" option in this poll, too, so you can add anyone you would like to the poll.

Also, we are nearing the end of this little experimental arc. One or two more chapters after this one, with one more poll.